前两句不错，没有错误正如羊城晚报所报道的一样，未来两天的气温将下降10℃。Just as Yangcheng Evening News reported, the temperature in the next days would decrease by 10 CAs Yangcheng Evening News reported，the temperature in the following(或者next) two days will be decreased 10 Celcius D这里最好不要用just，显得有些口语化；还有是next two days，应该是你粗心漏掉了吧，然后最后的“摄氏度”你要翻译完整啦~~正如老师指出的那样，如果你出现无厘头的错误，你将被罚两块钱。As the teacher pointed out, if you make an unreasonable mistake, you'll be fined two 这里的be fined最好替换成get fined，因为be是形容一个状态的。祝一切顺利啦~~ 楼主第四句的时态不对，我也忽略了，呃。。。。前后时态不一致啊~~~~~
The students I teach this year are three times as many as those I did last The time I spend in teaching this year is one and a half times as much as that I did last year Just as Yangcheng Evening News reported, the temperature in the next two days will decrease by 10 CAs the teacher pointed out, if you make an unreasonable mistake, you'll be fined two yuan correct
he temperature in the next few days will decrease by 10 Celsius（有拼错）其他没有什么错误