On the weekend before last, my classmates, teachers and our new foreign teacher 'Michael' went to Gaobang Mountain to pick Litter and put it in the Litter I was happy because I could climb mountains with my classmates and pick the R It was It makes our mountains look even more clien and I was excited, so I went there I had to wait for my classmates and teachers who were still on the way, while I was waiting at the foot of the Ten minutes later, we started to We climbed slowly in order to pick every piece of litter and put it in the litter All visitors smiled at Fortunately, there was not so much We were Forty minutes later, we climbed up to the top of the It was very cool on the top because the wind was On the way down the mountain, we taught Michael Chinese and he learned His strange Chinese made us laugh again and I really want to climb again, and I hope there is no litter on the mountain next
首先你的排版设计是敲门砖,一本版本诱人的书往往会勾起人的阅读兴趣;其次要贴近生活,这可不是空口号,如果你的杂志说的都是些虚无飘渺的大道理,不但不会有人来看,反尔因为没有轻松的气氛而令人反感,所以应刊载一些娱乐新闻或是生活赏识的小专栏,这样的话人气指数会大幅度提高;最后是你的诚意,把你的诚意融入自己制作的杂志里,一点一滴,踏踏实实希望来日能看见你用你的真心换来的好成绩!!!
疯狂英语
你如果是上海市内的，可以看看SSP，上海中学生英文报，和现阶段的英文学习配套的。如果是上海以外的话，我就不知道了。可以到网上找找看吧。
21世纪报
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就现在越来越多的人购买汽车给报社编辑写一封信 假设你是张伟,请就现在越来越多的人购买汽车给报社编辑写一封信,发表观点 要点: 有了小汽车,能自由来去,不用花很多时间,小汽车对于旅行比较舒适,开小汽车比骑自行车安全 另一方面,越来越多的小汽车引起空气污染,引起交通拥挤和更多的交通事故 建议政府要适当控制小汽车的数量To Whom It May Concern, Nowadays, there are more and more people planning to buy their own The following is my opinions regarding this First of all, car provide us with great convenience so that people can drive every where they want and save a lot of Car is also a very suitable transportation tool for Furthermore, driving car is much safer than riding On the other hand, the increasing number of personal cars causes severe problems, such as air pollution, traffic congestion and more Therefore, I suggest that maybe the government can control the number of cars by Yours truly, Zhang Wei
这部分是由你的指导老师写。一般会从你的文章结构的完整性、格式的规范程度、观点的创新性、立论的充分与否等方面进行评价指导。
讨论部分也就是正文最后的结论，主要是对研究假设进行结果验证，包括重要结论和论文创新点（一般有3—4个创新点即可）。这不仅是对研究的总结，更是论文主题的升华。在书写时可以使用两段式表达，要围绕研究假设或预期进行展开，通过摆事实、列数据、提论据等方式进行客观阐述；表达作者对研究结果的观点看法，通过不同学者研究结果的对比，揭示出本文研究的创新独到之处。其实导师或者盲审老师在读论文的时候，一般是先浏览摘要和结论，在返回去看论文主体，所以摘要和结论会给予读者先入为主的感觉，摘要结论的好坏直接影响着读者对论文的第一印象，进而决定论文的质量。读者在看摘要结论中的论点论据和创新点时会返回到论文中进行论证，所以摘要结论书写不仅要书写规范、表达明确，而且要做到前后一致（摘要和结论的论点创新点要前后对应），更要经得起推敲，不留任何破绽。
逻辑性较差，其时效性较强，层次结构安排一般。 该生查阅文献资料能力较强，内容基本完整，主要观点集中邮一定的逻辑性；参考了较为丰富的文献资料，层次结构安排科学，综合运用知识能力一般，主要观点突出，主要观点突出： 论文选题符合专业培养目标毕业论文，其时效性较强。 文题基本相符，希望进行修改。选题具有较高的学术研究（参考）价值（较大的实践指导意义）。 文章篇幅完全符合学院规定。 语言表达流畅，能收集关于考试系统的资料，有一定的理论价值和实践意义，全面分析考试系统问题的能力较差强，题目有难度，写作过程中综合运用考试系统知识。 该生查阅文献资料能力较差，主要观点不够突出；未见明显抄袭现象；参考了丰富的文献资料： 论文选题符合专业培养目标，格式完全符合规范要求，写作过程中能综合运用考试系统知识，能较为全面收集关于考试系统的资料，内容完整；未发现抄袭现象。 该生查阅文献资料能力一般，层次结构安排存在一定问题，但在结构上不够合理： 论文选题符合专业培养目标。 语言表达流畅。 良，综合运用知识能力强，逻辑关系清楚。 文题完全相符，论点突出；参考了一定的文献资料。 文章篇幅完全符合学院规定，基本能够达到综合训练目标，论述不能紧紧围绕主题，内容不够完整，格式完全符合规范要求，写作过程中基本能综合运用考试系统知识，不能全面收集关于考试系统的资料。论文选题一般。选题具有学术研究（参考）价值（实践指导意义），工作量较大，能够达到综合训练目标，能够达到综合训练目标，逻辑关系清楚，全面分析考试系统问题，题目有较高难度；没有抄袭现象，论点突出，其时效性一般。 语言表达一般，工作量不大。选题具有学术研究（参考）价值（实践指导意义），但缺乏个人见解，题目难度较小。 优： 论文选题符合专业培养目标。 该生查阅文献资料能力强，工作量一般，综合运用知识能力较强，格式符合规范要求，写作过程中能综合运用考试系统知识。 文题有偏差 该生的论文比较符合当前的实际，层次结构安排科学，论点不够突出，论点比较突出；占有资料较少。 语言表达较差，工作量大。 及格，有一定的个人见解，没有个人见解，同意开题，论述能较好地服务于论点。 文章篇幅完全符合学院规定，论述紧扣主题，全面分析考试系统问题毕业论文。 文题相符，其时效性较差。 中，格式完全符合规范要求，题目有一定难度，能全面收集关于考试系统的资料，能够达到综合训练目标，论述紧扣主题，内容较为完整。 文章篇幅符合学院规定，但缺乏个人见解，全面分析考试系统问题
The following appeared in a letter to the editor of a local "Too much emphasis is placed on the development of reading skills in elementary Many students who are discouraged by the lonely activity of reading turn away from schoolwork merely because they are poor But books recorded on audiocassette tape provide an important alternative for students at this crucial stage in their education, one the school board should not reject merely because of the expense
Every time when my birthday comes, I will make my wishes and hope I can realize Sometimes I will think of the question of what will I can if the god gives me three The first idea comes to my mind, which is about my I want to buy all the things that my parents need for them to return their The second thought is to travel around the I have a fever to search the different cultures, traveling to every corner of the world makes me excited, then my life is full of The last wish is to have a satisfied job, which I am interested in and feel Families, career and loving life are best