感觉好像是英语周报(或者测试报?- -)上的作文……我什么时候写过的给忘了= =写全文的话……好吧我承认自己比较懒……就来几个重点的 单词+短语+句子 救救急吧！！内容，包括 content一名高三学生 a student of grade nine给。。写一封信 write a letter to sb某英文报社编辑 a editor of a certain English newspaper agency压力大 The pressure is very 父母对我期望高 My parents show high expectation to 我很苦恼 I'm so 希望对你有所帮助^ ^
Dear Editor,I’d like to tell you some of my problems with my parents in daily My parents tend to make almost all decisions for They choose the school and subjects for Sometimes even clothing and daily timetables have to be decided by In my opinion, deciding everything for children does not help them but harm them in many Firstly, it will make children lack independence, which is unfavorable to their development in the long Secondly, in many cases parents’ decisions go against children’s personal ideas and interests, which will make children form resistance and naturally influence their I do believe to grow to be independent is a natural way for Parents should give us chances to make our own They may help us make choices instead of replacing us to make Yours sincerely,Li Hua 试题分析：本文是一篇提纲类作文，但是只是大概的提纲没有具体的要点，对考生的要求非常高，需要考生有较强的组织语言的能力和运用语言的功底。本文的话题是父母总是喜欢包办一切，考生所熟悉的，具有可写性。在写作之前，注意谋篇布局，文章应该是三段，第一段提及这种现象，第二段谈弊端，第三段分析原因提出建议。在写作时要注意选词如independently，Gradually，accompany等高级词汇的运用。同时运用合适的连接词和句型。最后要注意对文章的润色。【亮点说明】My parents tend to make almost all decisions for 这里有固定短语：tend to do In my opinion, deciding everything for children does not help them but harm them in many 这句话用了动名词做主语， it will make children lack independence, which is unfavorable to their development in the long 这句话用了非限制性定语从句， in many cases parents’ decisions go against children’s personal ideas and interests, which will make children form resistance and naturally influence their 这句话也是非限制性定语从句， I do believe to grow to be independent is a natural way for 这句话用了强调，还有范文还使用了 Firstly, Secondly,这样的关联词，使文章更加连贯。
Dear editor: I have something to trouble you !My English is very poor at When I work choic ,I often hesitate betten two Untfill the answer come out ,I often choose the wrong answer,And ,when I doing cloze,I usually forget the front when I doing the next hese are most difficults to face and to dsal with Due to these reasons,I couln't understand what's teacher's say,what's more ,I fall behand with others ,and lose heart to learn it ! Facing these quesions ,could you give me some Hope you write to me soon ,and I will appriate you very much ! Your student
感觉好像是英语周报(或者测试报?- -)上的作文……我什么时候写过的给忘了= =写全文的话……好吧我承认自己比较懒……就来几个重点的 单词+短语+句子 救救急吧！！内容，包括 content一名高三学生 a student of grade nine给。。写一封信 write a letter to sb某英文报社编辑 a editor of a certain English newspaper agency压力大 The pressure is very 父母对我期望高 My parents show high expectation to 我很苦恼 I'm so 希望对你有所帮助^ ^
Dear Li Hua, Thank you for your trusting on You told me in your letter that your old friends didn't like the new ones you have just Actually,this is quite common in the society,there are so many kind people in theworld,but everyone on earth has his own character,I think all of your friends are kind to you,so,in my opinion,you should communicate with your old friend and tell them the advatages of your new ones,try your best to reduce the misunderstanding between them,I believe after a period of knowing each other,they may be as good friend as Yours XXXX
My dear editor, i'm Lihua, a normal student in the middle I write to you because i really want to know about your points and your advice on the birthday parties for middle school Some of my classmates think it a waste of time and money, and it makes students to compare with each other who's richer and who's poor, it's not good for school education and a healthy growing up of But my other classmates love it because they think birthday parties create chances for schoolmates to know each other and build friendship, also it's a relax for students after busy school What's your opinion, please? i'm expecting to listen to
感觉好像是英语周报(或者测试报?- -)上的作文……我什么时候写过的给忘了= =写全文的话……好吧我承认自己比较懒……就来几个重点的 单词+短语+句子 救救急吧！！内容，包括 content一名高三学生 a student of grade nine给。。写一封信 write a letter to sb某英文报社编辑 a editor of a certain English newspaper agency压力大 The pressure is very 父母对我期望高 My parents show high expectation to 我很苦恼 I'm so 希望对你有所帮助^ ^
自己写，高考没人帮你写
Dear Li Hua, Thank you for your trusting on You told me in your letter that your old friends didn't like the new ones you have just Actually,this is quite common in the society,there are so many kind people in theworld,but everyone on earth has his own character,I think all of your friends are kind to you,so,in my opinion,you should communicate with your old friend and tell them the advatages of your new ones,try your best to reduce the misunderstanding between them,I believe after a period of knowing each other,they may be as good friend as Yours XXXX
退修文章要指出稿件的不足，退修信的主体内容，需要修改的地方明确的说清楚，别含糊，要不然你俩就来回折腾吧，但是语气要客气，要尊重人家的学术观点和见解。再就是详略得当，重要的内容多花笔墨，不重要的就一笔带过。退修就是把稿件退还给作者，让其按照要求进行修改。经过退修后的文章一般质量会有明显提升，只要作者按照杂志社给出的修改意见修改，会逐渐达到见刊要求的，见刊就不是问题了。
Dear Li Hua, Thank you for your trusting on You told me in your letter that your old friends didn't like the new ones you have just Actually,this is quite common in the society,there are so many kind people in theworld,but everyone on earth has his own character,I think all of your friends are kind to you,so,in my opinion,you should communicate with your old friend and tell them the advatages of your new ones,try your best to reduce the misunderstanding between them,I believe after a period of knowing each other,they may be as good friend as Yours XXXX