修改文章、优化表达方式、美化语言
文字润色:Embellishment
双关语是pun
文字润色 written polishing
双关语是pun
修改文章、优化表达方式、美化语言
润色是指通过对文字进行修饰,使其文采丰富,以下例子是对句子进行润色,希望对理解有帮助: I realized the importance of English when I entered senior high (强调句强调句强调句强调句) It was when I entered senior high school that I realized the importance of E We can live a happy life only by this (倒装) Only by this means can we live a happy He fell The lights were still (with结构) He fell asleep with the lights When I heard that, I was much (非谓语动词) Hearing that, I was much They carried out a survey among 260 (被动语态) A survey was carried out among 260 They were faced with many They didn’t lose (非谓语动词) Faced with many problems, they didn’t lose heart. It was getting And it began to (插入语) It was getting What was worse, it began to He worked very He made great progress in his (改为复合句) He worked so hard that he made great progress in his He offered me a piece of advice that I should cheer up and start all over (what引导的主语从句) What he offered me was a piece of advice that I should cheer up and start all over I got on a There were already too many people on (定语从句) I got on a bus on which there were already too many 50% of the students surveyed choose super stars as their (强调数字) As many as 50% of the students surveyed choose super stars as their
双关语是pun
其实如果你将短语优化放在语法优化里面也是可以的,但是将其特意拿出来说,作为一个单独的润色特点而言,也是可以的。在英文论文里面,增加必要性的幽默化的词语是非常重要的。
推荐用editsprings,觉得还不错。
英文水平一般,还是有找的必要的,在EditSprings润色,省了不少时间。
Grammarly这样的软件,可以进行单词和语法检查,包括一些句子易读性也能提出不错的建议。但是它们能做的也只有这些了。它们是不会管你文中的逻辑如何,有没有矛盾或者误解之类
如果原文问题比较多,可能一天也只能完成2000字词的润色,这也是完全正常的速度。赶时间可以交给北京译顶科技。