投稿被拒的原因分析作者都希望自己辛辛苦苦撰写的文章能够尽快发表，而实际情况往往会事与愿违，投出去的稿件遭到拒绝。投稿被拒的原因中，除了稿件的质量问题外，恐怕不乏投稿技巧等问题，其主要表现如下：1. 作者未细读征稿简则大多数期刊都有相应的征稿简则，比如投稿内容、页数、字体、公式、图表及文献写法等。国外一些期刊还有字数或页数的算法要求。如果没有细读相关说明或者不遵守相应的标准规范，就很可能影响稿件的录用。2. 稿件内容与期刊主题不符投稿被拒的原因中，最常见的是稿件提交给了错误的期刊，超出了所投期刊的学科领域或栏目范围等。例如，一篇心理学的文章投到了化学期刊上，投稿内容与期刊的风格、栏目或热点相差甚远，就很容易遭到拒绝。3. 其他原因投稿被拒的原因还有许多，诸如书面表达差、实验数据欠缺、没有创新或者图表错误等，其中较为严重的是有的作者稿件标题都写错了，其责任心遭到质疑；有的作者写完文章之后，不做任何检查，文中错别字较多，严重影响了编辑的阅读，进而影响了稿件的录用。所以要提起注意，在投稿之前，一定要选择合适的投稿期刊，如果期刊的风格或水平与自己的文章不匹配，只会浪费投稿的时间，拉长我们投稿的周期。可以以该期刊最新发表的同类文章为参考标准，来判断自己的文章是否合适该期刊。投稿前一定要进行文章内容的反复检查，并按照期刊要求修改论文的排版格式以及参考文献格式。投稿前建议先自行查重，但注意查重要选择官方的渠道，不要被一些虚假的小网站所欺，未发表的文章有泄露的风险。稿件的再投递一般来说，著名期刊的退稿会远远超出录用稿件。稿件被拒后，作者要调整心态，按照专家的评审意见认真修改，重新投稿。具体来说，要做好以下几点。1. 提升稿件质量稿件的质量是投稿成功的关键因素。撰稿后，最好的办法是多检查几遍，看是否还有需要改进的地方：题目是否合适，结构是否合理，是否存在错别字，再看看文字是否可以压缩，要简而精。2. 寻找合适期刊每种期刊都有自身的办刊宗旨和相对稳定的稿源。有的作者好高骛远，喜欢投著名期刊，结果常被退稿。稿件被退既浪费时间又打击信心。因此，作者要客观评价稿件，确定几个适合投稿的期刊，了解所投期刊的写作形式和风格，以确定最适合自己的期刊。通常每个期刊都由数个栏目组成，投稿前，应先搞清该刊的出版周期，了解该刊开设的栏目，还应大致了解该刊近年发表的文章。将自己的文章与相关文献进行比对，分析一下自己的文章适合哪类栏目，投稿时最好注明栏目名称，以便编者在看稿时能准确、及时地归档处理。编者都喜欢省事省心的作者。3 细读投稿须知通常在每期现刊中都会找到投稿须知之类的信息（如征稿简介、期刊站点介绍等），也可使用通用搜索引擎，如Google，Baidu等，快速获取相关信息。当然，还可直接联系编辑部。在基本了解投稿须知后，可下载该刊的文章，按照该刊的内容和格式编排自己的文章。4 熟悉投稿流程确定再投稿期刊后，应了解该刊的投稿流程，可免去许多麻烦。期刊的投稿流程一般包括作者投稿、编辑处理、专家审稿、作者修改和最终结果等，这些过程中，需要作者耐心等待和认真解决相关问题。(1) 作者投稿。应严格按照投递期刊的排版格式和写作要求撰写文章——包括题目、关键词、中图分类号、作者简介和联系电话等。例如，有的期刊要求上传的稿件不能是PDF格式，有的期刊在投稿时要求稿件的文字、图表要分开上传。(2) 编辑处理。一般在两周内完成，主要看编辑的处理情况，有的期刊稿件先到主编手里，主编再派给归口的编辑。(3) 专家审稿。过程较为漫长，主要取决于审稿专家的审稿速度。如果被邀请的专家不想审，编辑只好另请专家评审，这就会延长审稿时间。通常正规期刊不用催，到了承诺的时间就会回信。没到时间就催稿是不礼貌的行为。(4) 作者修改。要求修改就很可能被录用。修稿时，作者应直入主题，逐条回答专家的提问，按照专家的建议认真修改。另外，还要吃透编辑提出的修改建议，因为只有编辑才知道栏目要的是什么样的文章。(5) 最终结果。编辑部通常要等所有专家的评审意见返回后，才通知作者审稿结果。有的编辑部会要求作者推荐审稿专家，作者理应按照编辑部的要求积极推荐审稿专家，提供专家的详细信息。现在有些著名期刊采用一票否决制，只要有一位审稿专家否决就退稿。尽早准备，提前发表通常，论文从投稿到发表需要经历漫长的等待过程。有的热门期刊审稿周期就达5个月之久，发表周期更是在1年半以上（主编需要综合专家的评审意见、来稿量以及热点问题等情况，才能最后作出明确的答复）。而且，随着期刊杂志社整改，期刊版面大大减少，每期可以刊登的文章有限，但接收到的投递稿件数量不减反增，这就导致许多刊物的拒稿率都提高了不少，随之版面费也不得不上涨。
中文论文题目一般字数不超过25个字。字体：宋体；字号：二号；字形：加粗；居中排列。
摘要、关键词题头分别用中括弧括住，前空两格，字体：黑体；字号：小四号。摘要内容文字楷体；字号：小四号。 摘要、关键词下空一行接正文。
标题及正文
论文采用四级标题，格式为：
一、××××××××××（黑体四号；前空两格）
（一）××××××××（宋体小四；加粗；前空两格）
1、×××××（宋体小四；前空两格）。×××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××。
（1）××××××（宋体小四；前空两格）。×××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××。
论文正文字体：宋体；字号：小四号。
6、注释
毕业论文（设计）中有个别名词或情况需要解释时，可加注说明。其格式为：①,②,③ ；宋体小五。注释采用脚注形式（将注文放在加注页的底端），脚注只能写在注释符号出现的同页，不得隔页。
7、参考文献
参考文献另起一页。参考文献题头字体：黑体；字号：小四号；居中排列。
所有参考文献均以尾注形式列在论文篇末，字体：宋体；字号：五号；顶格排列。参考文献排列顺序一般先写中文后写英文，文中标注编号的则一般按编号顺序排列。参考文献不得少于6篇（部）。
各类参考文献条目的编排格式为：
（1）专著、论文集、学位论文、报告
［序号］主要责任者.文献题名［文献类型标识（专著：M；论文集：C；学位论文：D；报告：R）］.出版地:出版者，出版年.起止页码.
（2）期刊文章
［序号］主要责任者.文献题名［J］.刊名，年，(期).
（3）报纸文章
［序号］主要责任者.文献题名［N］.报纸名，出版日期(版次).
（4）电子文献
参考文献下空一行接外文题目、摘要与关键词。
8、外文题目、摘要与关键词
外文题目不超过15个实词，不使用标点符号，中外文题名应一致。标题中尽量不用外文缩写词，必须采用时，应使用本行业通用缩写词。外文题目字体：Times New Roman，字号：四号，字形：加粗，实词首字母大写，居中排列；英文摘要、关键词题头分别顶格排列，字体：Times New Roman，字号：五号，字形：加粗。英文摘要内容字体：Times New Roman，字号：五号；关键词各词条间用分号“；”隔开，字体：Times New Roman，字号：五号。
9、页码设置
毕业论文（设计）必须标注页码，其格式为“第×页共×页”，宋体小五，居中排列。
应该是先写摘要，再写前言的哦！摘要的写法 论文摘要是全文的精华，是对一项科学研究工作或技术实践的总结，对研究目的、方法和研究结果的概括。房地产。 摘要置于主体部分之前，目的是让读者首先了解一下论文的内容，以便决定是否阅读全文。一般来说，这种摘要在全文完成之后写。字数限制在100～150字之间。内容包括研究目的、研究方法、研究结果和主要结论。也就是说，摘要必须回答“研究什么”、“怎么研究”、“得到了什么结果”、“结果说明了什么”等问题。 简短精炼是学术期刊论文摘要的主要特点。只需简明扼要地将研究目的、方法、结果和结论分别用1～2句话加以概括即可。引言的写法 引言也叫绪言、绪论、前言。引言的主要任务是向读者勾勒出全文的基本内容和轮廓。它可以包括以下五项内容中的全部或其中几项：城市规划 。 1）介绍某研究领域的背景、意义、发展状况、目前的水平等; 2）对相关领域的文献进行回顾和综述，包括前人的研究成果，已经解决的问题，并适当加以评价或比较； 3）指出前人尚未解决的问题，留下的技术空白，也可以提出新问题、解决这些新问题的新方法、新思路，从而引出自己研究课题的动机与意义； 4）说明自己研究课题的目的； 5）概括论文的主要内容，或勾勒其大体轮廓。
序言当然在前言前面了!!前言和序言有本质的区别的!前言主要是对作者和书的大体内容概括介绍的,而序言,是书的发行社的一种评价!!(自己的理解)
问题一：毕业论文目录和摘要哪个在前边？ 摘要在前面，目录在后面。至于先写哪个，这个都矗以。可以先把目录弄上了，才在前面写摘要。目录可以自动生成。 问题二：论文摘要是在目录前面还是后面 一般论哗摘要应该放在目录的前面。 摘要的目的是让别人搜索论文的时候可以知道你的论文大概是讲什么的，后面有关键词，方便搜索。摘要不宜长篇大论，扼要介绍论文的背景和解决了什么问题就可以了。目录后面的叫做“引言”或者“绪论”。很多学生的毛病是把该写在引言里的内容都放到摘要里来了。 不过，最保准的方法是问你的论文指导老师。毕竟是他批卷的。 问题三：谁能告诉我,毕业论文是先写摘要还是先写目录啊,急! 先做目录 问题四：我想问一下毕业论文的摘要部分・应该写在目录的前面还是后面 前面。摘要很重要，写得好，才能吸引人家继续读下去。 问题五：一般先写论文还是先写摘要 楼上的回答太嗦了 论文摘要就是提纲的前半部分，一定要表明你的写作意图 当然 如果你是在网上拼凑的论文，先通读全文，弄懂文中的主旨，然后用自己的概括写作意图 问题六：论文格式是先写目录还是写摘要 封面：包括论文大标题、副标题、班级、姓名、学号、指导老师等等 目录 前言：有些学校要求中英文对照，200-500字 摘要 正文：要分章节。 尾声：做个总结 感言：对老师等等作个感谢 关键字 附注：比如正文中某句话引自哪本书。 问题七：word论文摘要放在目录前面了 以word2003为例进行说明：先在目录前一页面即摘要页末点“插入――分隔符”，选“分节符――下一页”。接着移至目录页，双击页脚页码处，会出现一个“页眉页脚”弹出菜单，在里面的图标找到“链接到前一个”，点击一下即可关闭页脚链接到前面页面。此时，可以看见页脚右边已经没有“与上一节相同”字样，即为断开了与前面摘要页的页脚设置。再移动光标至页码处删除。这样，便可以不影响摘要的页码而又删除了目录的页码。 问题八：毕业论文的前言放在什么位置，是放在摘要之前还是目录之后呢 应该是先写摘要，再写前言的哦！ 摘要的写法 论文摘要是全文的精华，是对一项科学研究工作或技术实践的总结，对研究目的、方法和研究结果的概括。房地产。 摘要置于主体部分之前，目的是让读者首先了解一下论文的内容，以便决定是否阅读全文。一般来说，这种摘要在全文完成之后写。字数限制在100～150字之间。内容包括研究目的、研究方法、研究结果和主要结论。也就是说，摘要必须回答“研究什么”、“怎么研究”、“得到了什么结果”、“结果说明了什么”等问题。 简短精炼是学术期刊论文摘要的主要特点。只需简明扼要地将研究目的、方法、结果和结论分别用1～2句话加以概括即可。 引言的写法 引言也叫绪言、绪论、前言。引言的主要任务是向读者勾勒出全文的基本内容和轮廓。它可以包括以下五项内容中的全部或其中几项：城市规划 。 1）介绍某研究领域的背景、意义、发展状况、目前的水平等; 2）对相关领域的文献进行回顾和综述，包括前人的研究成果，已经解决的问题，并适当加以评价或比较； 3）指出前人尚未解决的问题，留下的技术空白，也可以提出新问题、解决这些新问题的新方法、新思路，从而引出自己研究课题的动机与意义； 4）说明自己研究课题的目的； 5）概括论文的主要内容，或勾勒其大体轮廓。 问题九：写毕业论文是先做目录还是先把全文（题目、摘要，关键词，引言，正文，结尾）写完让它自动生成，但是怎么 20分 先写大纲啊，难道你的指导老师不要求你先通过大纲吗？还是我理解错了，你的文章已经全部完成了在做最后的整理？如果是这样的话，建议每个都按论文要求手写输入吧！这样自己有数（绝大部分导师对格式要求严的不像话，导师不严答辩的考官也要看格式的！），格式肯定会反复改的，自己做的改也好改。 问题十：毕业论文目录和摘要哪个在前边？ 摘要在前面，目录在后面。至于先写哪个，这个都矗以。可以先把目录弄上了，才在前面写摘要。目录可以自动生成。
通过论文查重系统是查重你论文跟数据库中的文献期刊比对相似度PAPERRATER论文查重系统收录了很多相关的文献期刊数据库查重要求很严格的
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高中英语作文演讲稿格式范文大全
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高中英语作文演讲稿格式范文一：I have a dream
Every one has his own dream.When I was a little kid ,my dream was even to have a candy shop of my own .But now ,when I am 16 years old ,standing here ,my dreams have already changed a lot.
I have got quite different experience from other girls.While they were playing toys at home,while they were dreaming to be the princesses in the story .I was running in the hard rain,jumping in the heavy snow,pitching in the strong wind.
Nothing could stop me ,because of a wonderful call from my heart -- to be an athlete.Yeah ,of course ,I'm an athlete,I'm so proud of that all the time .
When I was 10 years old ,I became a shot-put athlete.The training was really hard ,I couldn't bear the heavy shot in my hands .
But I always believe that "god only help those who help themselves".During those hard days,I find I was growing more quickly than others of the same age.
To be an athlete is my most correct choice.But,I quit my team after entering high school because of a silly excuse.I really didn't want to stop my sports career anyway.
Today I say to you my friends that even though I must face the difficulties of yesterday ,today and tomorrow .I still have a dream .It is a dream deeply rooted in my soul.
I have a dream that one day ,I can run,jump and pitch just like I used to be.
I have a dream that one day , I can go back to my dream sports and join the national team.
I have a dream that one day ,I can stand on the highest place at the olympic games.With all the cameras pointing at me.I will tell everyone that I'm so proud to be a Chinese athlete!
This is my hope .This is the faith that I continue my steps with!!!
With this faith ,I will live though the strong wind and heavy rain ,never give up !
So let victory ring from my heart,from all of you.When we allow victory to ring .I must be the one!
In my imagination,I'm a bird ,
,a magical bird.I carry my dreams all with me by my big wings. I fly though the mountains ,though the forests ,over the sea,to the sun ,the warmest place in the aerospace!
Every night ,I have a dream ,I see a girl ---smiling
高中英语作文演讲稿格式范文二：i believe in our future
honorable judges, fellow students:
good afternoon!
recently, ther is a heated debate in our society. the college students are the beneficiaries of a rare privilege, who receive exceptional education at
extraordinary places. but will we be able to face the challenge and support ourselves against all odds? will we be able to better the lives of others? will we be able to accept the responsibility of building the future of our country?
the cynics say the college students are the pampered lost generation, which would cringe at the slightest discomfort. but the cynics are wrong. the college students i see are eagerly learning about how to live independently. we help each other clean the dormitory, go shopping and bargain together, and take part time jobs to supplement our pocket money.
the cynics say we care for nothing other than grades; and we neglect the need for character cultivation. but again, the cynics are wrong.
we care deeply for each other, we cherish freedom, we treasure justice, and we seek truth. last week, thousands of my fellow students had their blood type tested in order to make a contribution for the children who suffer from blood cancer.
as college students, we are adolescents at the critical turning point in our lives. we all face a fundamental choice: cynicism or faith, each will profoundly impact our future, or even the future of our country.
i believe in all my fellow classmates. though we are still inexperienced and even a little bit childish. i believe that we have the courage and faith to meet any challenge and take on our responsibilities.
we are preparing to assume new responsibilities and tasks, and to use the education we have received to make our world a better place. i believe in our future.
高中英语作文演讲稿格式范文三：
Let me begin my speech with a replay of scenes familiar to most, if not all, of those present here today.
Mum, im sorry, but i need 3,000 yuan for my tuition this year.
Mmum, it is my friends birthday tomorrow, i must buy her a present.
Mum, this jacket was out of fashion long ago, would you do me a favor?
Take. the relationship between a mother and a child always seems to follow such a pattern.
I know my mother is always there for me, providing me with everything i need; from food to clothing, from tuition to pocket money.
I never thought twice about all she did until one day she said, will there be a time that youll say you have taken enough from me?
Like a child endlessly asking, we humans, throughout history, have been continually demanding what we desire from nature.
We enjoy the comfort and beauty of our furniture, yet we never bother to think about the serious soil erosion caused by deforestation.
We take it for granted that we must warm ourselves in winter times, yet we seldom realize the burning away of precious natural resources.
We appreciate all the prosperity from the development of modern industry, yet few would give the slightest consideration to the global air and water pollution caused by industrial wastes.
Our ruthless exploitation has permanently impaired our mother earth.
As we tragically learned from last summers floods.
We cannot continue our carelessness.
Finally, standing here at the threshold of the 21st century, we cannot help thinking of our posterity.
Nature is not only the mother of the present generation, but also the mother of the generations to come.
How severely our descendents will criticize us if we leave them a barren and lifeless mother? how much more they will appreciate us if we give them a world of harmony to inherit? let us start respecting and caring for nature from now on.
Let us start the campaign of creating a mutually beneficial relationship between people and nature right from this moment.
With this new start, i firmly believe, that our children, and our childrens children will live in a brand new age of green trees, clean air, crystal water, blue sky and an even more promising world!
高中英语作文演讲稿格式范文四：
For our students, marks is above everything. Teachers will judge us from our marks. With marks we can be enrolled into junior middle schools. With marks, we can be enrolled into senior middle schools.
With marks we can be enrolled into college. With marks we can be enrolled into postgraduate and doctrine studies. Still with marks we can be graded and be allowed to go abroad for further studies. Our parents will be strict with us with the marks.
Our society judge us from marks. However, sometimes we students compare one another with marks directly. We are completely controlled by marks. We like them and we feel sorry for them. But what attitude towards our marks should we take?
Truly, marks functions cannot be underestimated. In terms of test in our study, marks are fair and real. That is the reason why we say "Everyone is equal before marks. "
However, I think marks are the sole standard to judge the success or failure of students in exams. Sometimes, marks more than ten or less than one or two in our exams comparing with others mean not everything.
The success or failure in exams will be influenced by experience on the spot and the examinee's health etc. Once in a while one cannot fail in exams. " Success or failure is common sense for military. " I think everyone is familiar with the famous saying. Don't you think such will be the case with our study? In exams, one cannot be " never-defeated general" .
Even though one will be very good in everyday study, he cannot succeed in every exam sometimes.
We can get proof from the fact that the very best one we call "Number One Scholar" in the entrance exams for college and ordinary middle school and specialized secondary school over the years is not eminent above all others nor top student in every study.
As a matter of fact, "high marks" and "ability" are not unified. Some time ago, a new phrase " high marks but poor competence" came into being. Once I happened to meet such a teacher as this .It is said that the teacher just graduated from a far-famed key university.
But his teaching result is much less than that of the one who just graduated from a not-well-renowned college. When lecturing, the teacher only repeated what the text-books says, which was very dull so the his students' interest in learning was not aroused. His teaching was short of unity of teaching and learning.
At present there is a fact that we know a few brilliant and top college graduates are not qualified for their posts. The reason for it may be lack of the ability to combine knowledge learnt from books with pragmatics in their work.
Students of this kind will be successful in every exam but they will be able to use freely their knowledge in their posts. Don't you think it waste training such persons for the country?
To sum up from the above, I can say marks are not absolutely authoritative for some. If we neglect training and developing the students' ability and competence and if we only seek for the high marks, we will be absolutely wrong.
We should take an objective attitude towards the marks. Neither should we neglect them nor should we overvalue them like a God.
Last sunday, I was on my way to the library with my friend. When we were chatting, the bus stopped all of a sudden. All the passengers were surprised because it was a sudden stop. The driver did not run a red light and there seemed to be no reason to stop. To my surprise, instead of keep driving, the driver opened the door and got off his seat. Then he got off the bus. No one knew what was happening. I looked out of the window, there was a blind person on the sidewalk. The driver stopped the bus to help him crossing the street. The driver is a very kind person.上周日，我在我的方式和我的朋友去图书馆。我们聊天时，汽车突然停下。所有的乘客都感到惊讶，因为这是一个突然的停止。司机没有闯红灯，似乎没有理由停止。让我惊讶的是，而不是继续驾驶，司机打开车门，下车的座位。然后他下车。没有人知道发生了什么事。我看着窗外，人行道上有一个盲人。司机把车停了下来，帮他过马路。司机是一个非常善良的人。
100字左右，句子精简，字词修饰漂亮，格式端好I recently had the fortune of witnessing a moving deed by a heartful bus driver. On last Sunday, October the 20th, I was on a bus to the library along with my friends. The bus was moving so fast that all passengers had to brace themselves. While I doubted the driver had attained her licence legally, the bus was halted abruptly in an unexpected manner. Apart from the inevitable physical injuries we got from the falling and bumping, my eardrums were popped by the creaking braking. Bearing my agony, I curiously raised to find out the cause to that. I saw a blind fellow, being helped by our driver, crossing the busy road. Despite the following traffic jam, all passengers were emotionally touched by such compassionate act. Thank you, driver, for showing us the love and passion we have long unforgotten in our busy days.