论文评语范文： 1、论文选题比较适当，观点正确，但缺少独创性的思想，论证内容比较充分，但缺乏论证深度。英语表达比较通顺，但存在少量语法错误。论文格式符合规范要求。 2、论文选题缺乏新意，论证不够充分，具体例证较少，老生常谈的内容偏多，引用他人观点的比例偏大。英语表达基本达意，但存在较多的语法错误。论文格式基本符合要求。 3、选题不适当;观点不正确;语法错误过多;抄袭现象严重;论文格式不符合规范要求;没有按时间要求完成论文。 4、论文选题有新意，有实际应用价值，论文有自己独到的观点，能够反映出学生的创造性劳动，结构安排合理，论证充分、透彻，有足够的理论和实例支撑，英语语言表达顺畅、得体，没有语法错误，论文格式符合规范要求。 5、本论文选题有很强的应用价值，文献材料收集详实，综合运用了所学知识解决问题，所得书记合理，结论正确，有创新见解。另外论文格式正确，书写规范，条理清晰，语言流畅。 6、该论文的文献调研全面系统，立题指导思想明确，实验设计合理可行，能够按照实验计划进行，并达到预期效果。 7、论文撰写思路清晰，语言流畅简练，层次清晰，逻辑性较强，用词准确，各种数据、图表齐备、规范，文献引用正确，科学性较强。表明该学生具有一定的理论基础和科研能力。 8、该论文选题正确,结构合理,内容丰富,数据资料充分,分析方法先进,写作进度安排合理,结论和建议具有区域现实意义,建议推荐为校级优秀毕业论文 9、论文选题适当，有一定的独立见解，论证充分，占有资料广泛，但理论和实例支撑不够。英语语言表达基本顺畅，仅存在个别语法错误，论文格式符合规范要求。
依式行文,文笔素朴,结构严谨 Formational style of writing and strict in 内容丰富,结构严谨,体系完备,博大精深 rich contents,perfect system,broad andprofound meaning, 简洁流畅,层次井然,结构严谨,文字生动,颇富幽默,笔调轻松 Simple and smooth,orderly hierarchy,rigorous structure,vivid characters,quite humorous,delightful
对比观点题型 （1） 要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。 1． 有一些人认为。。。 2． 另一些人认为。。。 3． 我的看法。。。 The topic of ①-----------------（主题）is becoming more and more popular There are two sides of opinions of Some people say A is their They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------（支持A的理由一）What is more, ③-------------理由二) Moreover, ④---------------(理由三) While others think that B is a better choice in the following three Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一) Secondly (besides),⑥------------------（理由二） Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三) From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------（我的观点） The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因) As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my For me, the former is surely a wise choice （2） 给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点 Some people believe that ①----------------（观点一） For example, they think ②-----------------（举例说明）．And it will bring them ③-----------------(为他们带来的好处) In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the For one thing,④-------------(我不同意该看法的理由一) For another thing, ⑤-----------------(反对的理由之二)． Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥------------------(我对文章所讨论主题的看法)． 阐述主题题型 要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述． 1． 阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义． 2． 分析并举例使其更充实． The good old proverb ----------------（名言或谚语）reminds us that ----------------(释义) Indeed, we can learn many things form First of all,-----------------(理由一) For example, -------------------(举例说明) Secondly,----------------(理由二) Another case is that ---------------(举例说明) Furthermore , ------------------(理由三)． In my opinion, ----------------(我的观点) In short, whatever you do, please remember the say------A If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you”ll necessarily benefit a lot from it 解决方法题型 要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径 1． 问题现状 2． 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点) In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more First, ------------(说明A的现状)．Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状) Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the For one thing, ---------------(解决方法一) For another -------------(解决方法二) Finally, --------------(解决方法三) Personally, I believe that -------------(我的解决方法) Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because --------------(带来的好处) 说明利弊题型 这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度（利或弊）出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度（或对事物前景提出预测） 1． 说明事物现状 2． 事物本身的优缺点（或一方面） 3． 你对现状（或前景）的看法 Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily Generally, its advantages can be seen as First ----------------(A的优点之一) Besides -------------------（A的优点之二） But every coin has two The negative aspects are also One of the important disadvantages is that ----------------(A的第一个缺点)．To make matters worse,------------------(A的第二个缺点)． Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法)． (From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are Only by this way, ---------------(对前景的预测)．) 议论文的框架 (1) 不同观点列举型（ 选择型 ） There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____ But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to A majority of people think that _ 观点一________ In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____ So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____ People, however, differ in their opinions on this Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______ In their point of view, on the one hand， ___原因一_______ On the other hand, ____原因二_____ Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______ As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______ It is not only because ________, but also because _________ The more _______, the more ________ （2）利弊型的议论文 Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)___作文题目______ In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____ Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as Firstly, ___优点一______ And secondly ___优点二_____ Just As a popular saying goes, "every coin has two sides", __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative To begin with, ___缺点一______ In addition, ____缺点二______ To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___ ( 3 ) 答题性议论文 Currently, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)__作文题目_______ It is really an important concern to every one of As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this First of all, __途径一______ In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途径二_____ Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文题目______, we should find a number of various But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, ____方法_____ ( 4 ) 谚语警句性议论文 It is well know to us that the proverb: " ___谚语_______" has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our It means ____谚语的含义_______ The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as ( also theoretically ) A case in point is ___例子一______ Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____谚语_____ With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____谚语_____ The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and 图表作文的框架 as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table(graph/picture/pie/chart), ___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/ decrease (goesup/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____ From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________ There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______ On the one hand, ________ On the other hand, _______ is due to the fact that ________ In addition, ________ is responsible for _______ Maybe there are some other reasons to show ________ But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______ I am sure my opinion is both sound and well- 实用性写作(申请信) Your address Month, Date, year Receiver's address Dear , I am extremely pleased to hear from / to see your advertisement for the position in And I would like to write a letter to tell you / I am confident that I am suitable for the kind of the job you are / I feel I am competent to meet the requirements you have On the one hand, On the other hand, I am enclosing my resume for your kind consideration and I shall be much obliged if you will offer me a precious opportunity to an I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/ I am looking forward to your replies at your earliest Best regards for your health and Sincerely yours, X X X 作文的开头 一篇文章通常可分为三个部分，即开头、正文和结尾。这三个部分安排是否得体，直接影响到文章的质量。 文章的开头一般来说应尽量做到开门见山，用简单明白的叙述引出文章的话题，使读者了解文章要谈论什么，一下于引起读者的兴趣。 作文常见的开头形式大致有以下几种： 1．开门见山，揭示主题 文章一开头，，就交待清楚文章的主题是什么。如“How I Spent My Vacation”(我怎样度假)的开头是： I Spent my last vacation happily． 下面是题为"Honesty"(谈诚实)一文中的开头： Honesty is one of the best virtues．An honest man is always trusted and respected．On the contrary, one who tells lies is regarded as a "liar"，and is looked upon by honest people． 2．交代人物、事情、时间或环境开头 在文章的开头，先把人物、事件和环境交待清楚。例如"A Trip to Jinshan" (去金山旅游)的开头： The day before yesterday my class went on a bus trip to J The bus ride there took three The long trip made us very tired, but the sight of the beautiful sea refreshed 回忆性的开头 用回忆的方法来开头。例如"A Trip to the Taishan Mountain"(泰山游)的开头是： I remember my first trip to the Taishan Mountain as if it were 4．概括性的开头 即对要在文章中叙述的人或事先作一个概括性的介绍。如“The Happiness of Reading Books”(读书的快乐)的开头： People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the But I say that to read books is more valuable than anything else, because books give us knowledge and knowledge gives us 5．介绍环境式的开头 即开头利用自然景物或自然环境引出要介绍的事物。如“An Accident”(一场事故)的开头是: It was a rainy and windy The sky was gloomy, the temperature was low, and the street was nearly I was on my way back to Suddenly, a speeding car came round the 6．交待写作目的的开头。 在文章的一开头就交待写作目的，如通过文章要表扬谁，批评谁，或说明一个什么问题等。如 "Pollution Control" (控制污染)的开头： In this article I shall draw your attention to the subject of pollution control
一、引出开头1：It is well-known to us that……（我们都知道……）==As far as my knowledge is concerned, …（ 就我所知…）2：Recently the problem of…… has been brought into ==Nowadays there is a growing concern over ……（最近……问题引起了关注）3：Nowadays（overpopulation）has become a problem we have to （现今，人口过剩已成为我们不得不面对的问题）4：Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as （互联网已在我们的生活扮演着越来越重要的角色，它给我们带来了许多好处但也产生了一些严重的问题）5：With the rapid development of science and technology，more and more people believe that……（随着科技的迅速发展，越来越多的人认为……）6：It is a common belief that……==It is commonly believed that……（人们一般认为……）7：A lot of people seem to think that……（很多人似乎认为……）8:It is universally acknowledged that + 句子（全世界都知道）二、表达不同观点1：People's views on……vary from person to Some hold that……However, others believe that……（人们对……的观点因人而异，有些人认为……然而其他人却认为……）2：People may have different opinions on……（人们对……可能会持有不同见解）3：Attitudes towards （drugs）vary from person to ==Different people hold different attitudes towards（failure）（人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异）4:There are different opinions among people as to……（对于……人们的观点大不相同）三、表示结尾1：In short, it can be said that……（总之，他的意思是……）2：From what has been mentioned above, we can come to the conclusion that……（从上面提到的，我们可以得出结论……）3：Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally/reasonably come to the conclusion that……（把所有的这些因素加以考虑，我们自然可以得出结论……）4：Hence/Therefore, we'd better come to the conclusion that……（因此，我们最好的出这样的结论……）5:There is no doubt that (job-hopping)has its drawbacks as well as （毫无疑问，跳槽有优点也有缺点）6：All in all, we cannot live without……,but at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would （总之，我们没有……无法生活，但同时我们必须寻求新的解决办法来面对可能出现的新问题）四、提出建议1：It is high time that we put an end to the (trend)（该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了）2：There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of……（毫无疑问，对……问题应予以足够重视）3：Obviously ,if we want to do something … it is essential that……（显然，如果我们想要做么事，很重要的是……）4：Only in this way can we ……（只有这样，我们才能……）5：Spare no effort to + V （不遗余力的）五、预示后果1：Obviously，if we don't control the problem, the chances are that……will lead us in （很明显，如果我们不能控制这一问题，很有可能我们会陷入危险）2：No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that ……（毫无疑问，除非我们采取有效措施，否则我们很可能会……）3：It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation（很紧迫的是应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展）六、表示论证1：From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the (在我看来，支持第一种观点比第二种更有道理)2：I cannot entirely agree with the idea that……（我无法完全同意这一观点）3：As far as I am concerned/In my opinion,……（就我来说……）4：I sincerely believe that……==I am greatly convinced (that)子句（我真诚地相信……）5：Finally, to speak frankly, there is also a more practical reason why ……（最后，坦率地说，还有另外一个实际的原因……）七、给出原因1：The reason why + 句子 ~~~ is that + 句子 （的原因是） 2:This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons First,……Second,……Third，……。这一现象存在有很多原因的，第一……第二……第三……3：For one thing,…… For another thing，…… ==On the one hand,……On the other hand……一方面……另一方面……4：I quite agree with the statement that……The reasons are chiefly as 我十分赞同这一论述，即……。其主要原因如下。八、列出解决办法和批判错误观点做法1：The best way to solve the troubles is……解决这些麻烦的最好办法是……2：As far as something is concerned,……就某事而言，……3;It is obvious that……很显然……4：It may be true that……but it doesn't mean that……可能……是对的，但这并不意味着……5;It is natural to believe that……but we shouldn't ignore that……认为……是自然的，但我们不应忽视……6：There is no evidence to suggest that……没有证据表明……九、表示好处和坏处1：It has the following 它有如下优势2：It is beneficial/harmful to ==It is of great benefit/harm to 它对我们有益处3:It has more disadvantages than 他有很多不足之处十、表示重要、方便、可能1：It is important(necessary/difficult/convenient/possible)for sb to do 对于某人做……是……2：It plays an important role in our 十一、采取措施1：We should take some effective 我们应该采取有效措施2：We should try our best to overcome/conquer the 我们应该尽最大努力去克服困难3：We should do our utmost in doing 我们应该尽力去做……4：We should solve the problems that we are confronted/faced 我们应该解决我们面临的困难十二、显示变化1：Some changes have taken place in the past five 过去五年发生了很多变化2：Great changes will certainly be produced in the international 在国际交流中理所当然会发生很多大的变化3：It has increased/decreased from…to…他已经从…增加/减少到…4：The output of July in this factory increased by 15%这个工厂7月份产量以增加了15%十三、表明事实现状1;We cannot ignore the fact that……我们不能忽略这个事实……2：No one can deny the fact that……没人能否认这个事实……3：This is a phenomenon that many people are interested 4:be closely related to ~~ （与息息相关） 十四、进行比较1：Compared with A,B……与A比较，B……2;I prefer to read rather than watch TV十五、常用英语谚语1：Actions speak louder than 事实胜于雄辩2：All is not gold that 发光的未必都是金子3：All roads lead to R条条大路通罗马4：A good beginning is half 良好的开端是成功的一半5：Every advantage has its disadvantage有利必有弊6：A miss is as good as a 失之毫厘，差之千里7：Failure is the mother of 失败是成功之母8:Industry is the parent of 勤奋是成功之母9:It is never too old to 活到老，学到老10:Knowledge is 知识就是力量11:Nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to 世上无难事，只怕有心人
第五档（很好）：（21~25分）完全完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点。应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档（好）：（16~20分）完全完成了试题规定的任务。虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。达到了预期的写作目的。第三档（适当）：（11~15分）基本完成了试题规定的任务。虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。第二档（较差）：（6-10分）未恰当完成试题规定的任务。漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第一档（差）：（1~5分）未完成试题规定的任务。明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。信息未能传达给读者。不得分：（0分）希望能帮助到你，望采纳！！！
一、正反观点式议论文万能句（对比观点型）作文框架模版给出观点——正反观点二选一（有的人认为，有的人认为，你的观点）There is a widespread concern over the issue that________（作文题目）But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to (开头一般题目给出)The majority think that________（观点一） First of all,________（原因一）Furthermore, ________（原因二） So it goes without saying that________（观点一）People,however,differ in their opinions on this Some people hold the view that________（观点二） On the one hand，________（原因一） On the other hand,________（原因二） Therefore, there is no doubt that ________（观点二）As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that观点一或二It is not only because ________(原因一), but also because ________（原因二）It's high time that________ (喊口号) Only in this way eventually can we ________（支持这一观点的结果）模版译文：有一个广泛引起关注的问题________。但众所周知有关这个热点话题的观点因人而异。绝大多数人认为________。首先，________。而且，________。因此不言而喻________。然而在这个话题上人们的观点各不相同。有的人持有的观点是________。一方面，________。另一方面，________。因此，毫无疑问________。就我而言，我强烈支持________的观点。不仅因为________，还因为________。该是________的时候了。只有这样我们最终才能________。二、“A或者B”类议论文万能句：（说明利弊型）作文框架模版：说明某一事物的优缺点及自己的看法Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily Generally speaking, its advantages can be seen as First of all ,________(A的优点之一)Moreover,________（A的优点之二）Besides ,________(A的优点之三)But every coin has two The negative aspects are also One of the important disadvantages is that ________(A的第一个缺点)．To make matters worse, ________(A的第二个缺点)．Through above analyses, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative Therefore, I would like to________ (我的看法)．或者(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are Only by this way, (对前景的预测)．模版译文：现如今很多人更喜欢A,因为它在我们生活中扮演了一个重要的角色。总的来说。他的优点如下。首先________。而且，________。除此之外，________。但凡事都有利有弊，消极的一面也是很明显的。最重要的缺点是________。更糟糕的是________通过以上分析，我认为积极的一面胜过消极的一面。因此，我更喜欢________。三、观点论述类议论文万能句：（现象说明型）作文框架模版现象说明型：说明某一现象及其产生的原因和自己的看法Nowadays, there are more and more ________ (某种现象) in ________ (某种场合) It is estimated that________ (相关数据) Why have there been so many ________ (某种现象)? Maybe the reasons can be listed as To begin with, ________ (原因一) Besides, (原因二) Last but not least, ________ (原因三)Personally, the main cause of ________ (某种现象) is due to ________ (最主要原因) It is high time that something were done upon For one thing,________ (解决办法一) For another, ________ (解决办法二) All these measures will certainly reduce the amount of ________ (某种现象)模版译文：现如今在________(某种场合) 有越来越多的________。(某种现象) 据统计，________。为神马有如此多的________?也许原因如下。首先，________。除此之外，________。最后但同样重要的是，________。我认为，引起________的主要原因是________。该是时候采取些措施了。一方面，________。另一方面，________。所有这些措施都将会解决________。阐述主题型：要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述．四、"How to"类议论文万能句：（问题解决型）作文框架模版模版①要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径 1．问题现状 2．怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)In recent days, we have to face a problem________A, which , surprisingly , is becoming more and more First of all, ________(说明A的现状)．Secondly, ________(举例进一步说明现状)Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the For one thing,________(解决方法一) For another, ________(解决方法二) Finally, ________解决方法三)Personally, I believe that ________(我的解决方法) Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ________(带来的好处)模版译文：现如今我们不得不面对一个问题________A，这个问题正变得越来越严重。首先，________。其次，________。面对A，我们应该采取一系列的措施来解决这个处境。一方面，________。另一方面，________。最后，________。就我而言，我认为________。因此，我相信一个崭新的未来正在等待着我们，因为________。图表作文写作万能句（图表分析型）（常给出折线图、饼状图、条形、扇形等统计图）描写图表变化趋势的词：（建议使用斜体加横线的词，个人认为比较形象）上升：increase / rise / go up / rocket（迅速增加） 下降：decrease / reduce / come down/ decline快：quickly / rapidly / sharply / dramatically 慢：slowly / gradually作文框架模版As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table (graph/ picture /pie /chart ), ________(作文的议题)has been on rise (increases /drops /decreases ), significantly /dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from_％ in _年_ to _％_ in _年_ From the sharp /marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that________(现象总结)There are at least two good reasons accounting for________(总结的现象) On the one hand, ____ On the other hand, ________ is due to the fact that ________ In addition, __ is responsible for ________ (Maybe there are some other reasons to show ______But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly )As far as I am concerned,I hold the view that _______ It's high time that________ (喊口号) Only in this way can ________（支持这一观点的结果）模版译文：正如图表所展示的那样，________一直在增长。从图表中飞速的增长，不言而喻________。至少有两个原因来解释________。一方面，________。另一方面，________是因为________除此之外,________是________的原由就我而言,我持有________的观点该是________的时候了只有这样我们最终才能________。
最近在我们的辅导过程中，发现很多同学尤其是本科生同学们（也包括一部分研究生同学们）在法律论文的写作中喜好如下的模式：先分析某一法律制度存在的缺陷或者不足，随后提出应该如何完善这一法律制度。
针对论文存在的利弊方面写写，比如选题的好坏，论文中存在的不足之处什么的
评阅时，请参照以下几个方面提出意见 论文选题是否恰当，有何意义； 论文结构是否完整，写作是否认真，文字是否通顺； 对论文质量的评价（设计、方法、结果、创新性等）； 存在的主要问题； 建议。评 语：该文选题得当，论文对校园网新闻发布系统进行了系统设计，有一定的实用价值。该文结构完整，写作认真，文字通顺该文在进行设计方面表现了一定的能力。同意进行答辩。
该生能在带教老师的指导下、独立完成论文的写作、符合要求、同意提交
学术堂整理了五份毕业论文指导老师意见范例供大家参考： 1、论文思路清晰，语句通顺。能很好的调查——存在的问题。作者对于论文内容有一定的了解和熟悉。思路清晰，层次清晰，逻辑结构合理。观点表达准确。研究原理采用恰当。在论证过程中能有效的将专业原理与要研究的主题结合起来。个别地方论证的观点不是很明确，总体上达到毕业论文要求。 2、全文——为题。重点探计——的问题，然后针对问题提出有效的建议。全文结构符合要求，逻辑思路清晰，论据较充分，观点表达准确，语言流畅，论证方法教合理。参考的资料与主题结合紧密。 3、全文以——为题。重点探讨分析——的问题及原因，然后针对问题提出—些具有可操作性的对策。全文选题新颖，具有很强的研究性。全文结构符合要求，逻辑结构严谨，思路清晰，观点鲜明，论据具有较强的说服力。论证方法合理，了大量的数据来论证，更增加了论证的可靠性。能综合运用行政管理专业知识来分析——但不足之处主要是语言不是很精炼。 4、该文参考的文献资料充分且符合论题的需要。该文以——为例，重点探讨——。该文选题符合行政管理专业要求，结构完整，思路清晰，观点表达准确，格式规范，能较好的将行政管理-专业知识运用来分析现实中的行政管理实践问题。但个别观点论证还不充分。总体上符合毕业论文要求。 5、该文选题具有较强的现实性、针对性和实用性。结构安排科学合理，思路清晰，层次分明。各部分之间联系紧密,观点表述准确，论证内容比较具有说服力，但文章缺乏自己原创的内容。
优秀论文评语。90分以上。窗口范例本论文选题有很强的应用价值。文献材料收集详实，综合运用所学的知识解决问题。创新见解。
其时效性较强;没有抄袭现象。 良: 论文选题符合专业培养目标毕业论文,能够达到综合训练目标,题目有难度,工作量较大。
优秀（90分以上）论文评语参考范例本论文选题有很强的应用价值，文献材料收集详实，综合运用了所学知识解决问题，所得书记合理，结论正确，有创新见解。另外论文格式正确，书写规范，条理清晰，语言流畅。该论文的文献调研全面系统，立题指导思想明确，实验设计合理可行，能够按照实验计划进行，并达到预期效果。良好（80-89分）论文评语参考范例论文选题适当，有一定的独立见解，论证充分，占有资料广泛，但理论和实例支撑不够。英语语言表达基本顺畅，仅存在个别语法错误，论文格式符合规范要求。该论文选题较为新颖，视角较为独特，体现了一定的人力资源管理理论的扎实功底，特别是文章能够结合相关的案例对课题进行论证分析，具有一定的实用价值。经过对论文的审核可以看出，作者在资料和案例收集上花了不少功夫，也能够提出一些较为深刻的观点，但在理论的深度和部分论据的引证上还存在一定的欠缺之处。总体而言，这是一篇合格的论文。中（70-79分）论文评语参考范例论文选题比较适当，观点正确，但缺少独创性的思想，论证内容比较充分，但缺乏论证深度。英语表达比较通顺，但存在少量语法错误。论文格式符合规范要求。及格（60-69分）论文评语参考范例论文选题缺乏新意，论证不够充分，具体
学术堂整理了四条论文评语范例，供大家进行参考： 1、全文结构基本合理科学，逻辑思路清晰，观点表达准确，语言流畅，论证方法较合理，参考的文献资料符合主题要求，从主题到内容符合专业要求，部分与本分之间衔接的比较紧密，但个别引文没有标著出来，真正属于自己创新的内容还不是很多，个别概念比较模糊，总体上达到毕业论文要求。 2、研究内容具有现实性和可操作性。选题社会热点问题，逻辑结构严谨。观点表达清楚，论述全面。语言平实简洁，通俗易懂。在论证过程中也能较好地将专业知识原理与现实问题结合起来。但论据还不够。总体上符合毕业论文要求。 3、选题较具时代性和现实性。全文结构安排合理。观点表达基本准确。全文内容紧扣行政管理专业要求来写，充分体现出行政管理专业特色。查阅的相关资料较多。但不足之处主要是属于自己创新的东西还不多。总体上符合毕业论文要求。 4、研究……为题，充分的体现时代特色性。能为中国行政管理问题的解诀提供参考价值。全文结构合理，思路清晰，观点明显。在论证过程中能教好的将论证与案例论证结合起来。不足之处是部分论点的论据还缺乏说服力。
优秀（90分以上）论文评语参考范例本论文选题有很强的应用价值，文献材料收集详实，综合运用了所学知识解决问题，所得书记合理，结论正确，有创新见解。另外论文格式正确，书写规范，条理清晰，语言流畅。该论文的文献调研全面系统，立题指导思想明确，实验设计合理可行，能够按照实验计划进行，并达到预期效果。良好（80-89分）论文评语参考范例论文选题适当，有一定的独立见解，论证充分，占有资料广泛，但理论和实例支撑不够。英语语言表达基本顺畅，仅存在个别语法错误，论文格式符合规范要求。该论文选题较为新颖，视角较为独特，体现了一定的人力资源管理理论的扎实功底，特别是文章能够结合相关的案例对课题进行论证分析，具有一定的实用价值。经过对论文的审核可以看出，作者在资料和案例收集上花了不少功夫，也能够提出一些较为深刻的观点，但在理论的深度和部分论据的引证上还存在一定的欠缺之处。总体而言，这是一篇合格的论文。中（70-79分）论文评语参考范例论文选题比较适当，观点正确，但缺少独创性的思想，论证内容比较充分，但缺乏论证深度。英语表达比较通顺，但存在少量语法错误。论文格式符合规范要求。及格（60-69分）论文评语参考范例论文选题缺乏新意，论证不够充分，具体例证较少，老生常谈的内容偏多，引用他人观点的比例偏大。英语表达基本达意，但存在较多的语法错误。论文格式基本符合要求。不及格（60分以下）论文评语参考范例选题不适当；观点不正确；语法错误过多；抄袭现象严重；论文格式不符合规范要求；没有按时间要求完成论文。
毕业论文的评语有两种：一是指导导师意见，二是答辩委员会意见。(一)指导导师意见的写法指导导师意见，主要是从写作角度对全篇论文作出评价。评价要点是：1．观点是否正确、鲜明；2．论据是否充分；3，分析是否全面；4．结构是否合理；5．语句是否通顺；6．有无现实指导意义。该文从对企业文化（Corporate Culture）的理解入手，讨论了企业文化的主要内容，然后着重论述了企业文化建设在hiring, training和assessing三个方面的问题，并强调创新在企业文化建设中的重要性。文章选题有一定的现实意义，说明作者平时比较注意资料和知识的积累，并善于总结。全文层次比较合理，条理基本清晰，说理过程中利用著名公司的案例来阐述论点，增强了文章的说服力。文章内容、形式和语言比较合乎规范。但是定稿中仍存在少量格式和语言错误，全文的逻辑性稍差，如果能提出具体建议会比较有参考价值。初稿评语：论文题与论文的内容基本相符，结构基本完整，语言也比较通顺，没有大的语法错误。问题是，全文引用的部分太多，自己的分析太少。应当说，完成这篇论文所需的材料已经具备，作者可以在此基础上对材料进行分析归纳以得出自己的结论[例二]初稿评语:论文涉及的内容对跨国公司内文化冲突的解决有一定的指导意义。论述比较充分，条理比较清晰。在东西方文化的对比中，作者举了很多有趣的例子，但对近在眼前的中国的例子却很少。东方文化的例子多取自日本文化，这是一个很大的缺陷。文章层次分得过细是另一个缺点，几乎一个自然段一层，如不仔细看反而更令人糊涂。在打印格式、拼写、用词上有不少错误，特别是论文的后半部分。参考文献部分尚缺出版社地点。定稿评语:论文结构完整，各部分基本符合英语论文的写作规范。作者试图从东西方文化对比的角度分析跨国公司内的文化冲突并寻找解决的途径。为了写好这篇论文作者显然查阅了大量的资料，论述比较充分，条理也很清晰。遗憾的是，由于作者本人没有跨国公司的工作经历，也没有去跨国公司作相应的考察，因此，她的论述只能基于阅读中获得的二手资料，而所谓东方文化又多以日本的资料为代表，要解决人们更为关心的在华跨国公司内的文化冲突问题，读者更需要的则是中西文化的对比，这方面作者虽然在以后各稿中补充了一些，仍显不足。[例三]初稿评语:论文的选题很好，有创意。作者对Maslow的心理学理论及Jack London的原著都有所研究。问题主要表面在：1：对英语论文的格式很不了解，Introduction部分又是图表又是分节。论文的后边没有结语，参考文献的排列也不规范；2：观点方面的错误在于竟然认为人类心理学的理论也适用于动物。其实杰克伦敦作品中的那条狗在某种程度上说是拟人化了的，是体现所谓权力意志的超人，或super dog。此外语法上也有一些错误。二稿评语:作者在一稿的基础上作了比较认真的修改。论文从内容到形式上都有很大的改进。从网上下载的两个与文章内容关系不大的流程图已被删除。前言中的部分内容已按要求移到了正文部分。添加了结论部分，尽管内容还有待充实。参考文献部分已重排但仍有不规范的地方。