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第一句：Most businesses tend to propagandize themselves to the public through internet, television, promotion flyers, magazines and so (promote 一般习惯用于推销产品，用与宣传公司，显得比较怪）第二句：For a it would be hard to understand them 第三句：To propagandize a 第四句：It's unworthy for tourists to spend a long time at just one shop within one tourist spot, because they sometimes find the place not interesting enough when adequate information on it is not 最后一句：On the other hand, they may not have a chance to visit other appealing shops as they may find the some of the shops are closed, partly because they previously had to depend on themselves to discover relevant information on them through common travel brochures or
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你好!润色polish 英[ˈpɒlɪʃ] 美[ˈpɑ:lɪʃ] 磨光; 润色; 擦光; 修改; 光泽剂，擦亮剂; 擦亮，磨光; 优美，优雅，精良; [例句]The still air smelt faintly of furniture 凝滞的空气中隐隐有股家具上光剂的味道。
润色是指通过对文字进行修饰，使其文采丰富，以下例子是对句子进行润色，希望对理解有帮助： I realized the importance of English when I entered senior high (强调句强调句强调句强调句) It was when I entered senior high school that I realized the importance of E We can live a happy life only by this (倒装) Only by this means can we live a happy He fell The lights were still (with结构) He fell asleep with the lights When I heard that, I was much (非谓语动词) Hearing that, I was much They carried out a survey among 260 (被动语态) A survey was carried out among 260 They were faced with many They didn’t lose (非谓语动词) Faced with many problems, they didn’t lose heart． It was getting And it began to (插入语) It was getting What was worse, it began to He worked very He made great progress in his (改为复合句) He worked so hard that he made great progress in his He offered me a piece of advice that I should cheer up and start all over (what引导的主语从句) What he offered me was a piece of advice that I should cheer up and start all over I got on a There were already too many people on (定语从句) I got on a bus on which there were already too many 50% of the students surveyed choose super stars as their (强调数字) As many as 50% of the students surveyed choose super stars as their
英文润色包含对文章语法、标点检查，专业术语进行优化，文风修饰、文章格式的调整。英文文章进行润色，首先自己英语写作能力要好，如果英文水平不过关，润色后的文章也打不到要求。如果文章用于发表，找靠谱的润色机构合作还是有必要的。无忧润色的专家编辑团队，不仅语言功底雄厚，而且有相关领域的学术背景。我们会根据您的论文研究领域选择对应专家进行英语母语化润色和校对，确保论文的结构清晰，语言母语化，让您的研究论文掷地有声，推动审稿进程。
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润色是指通过对文字进行修饰，使其文采丰富，以下例子是对句子进行润色，希望对理解有帮助： I realized the importance of English when I entered senior high (强调句强调句强调句强调句) It was when I entered senior high school that I realized the importance of E We can live a happy life only by this (倒装) Only by this means can we live a happy He fell The lights were still (with结构) He fell asleep with the lights When I heard that, I was much (非谓语动词) Hearing that, I was much They carried out a survey among 260 (被动语态) A survey was carried out among 260 They were faced with many They didn’t lose (非谓语动词) Faced with many problems, they didn’t lose heart． It was getting And it began to (插入语) It was getting What was worse, it began to He worked very He made great progress in his (改为复合句) He worked so hard that he made great progress in his He offered me a piece of advice that I should cheer up and start all over (what引导的主语从句) What he offered me was a piece of advice that I should cheer up and start all over I got on a There were already too many people on (定语从句) I got on a bus on which there were already too many 50% of the students surveyed choose super stars as their (强调数字) As many as 50% of the students surveyed choose super stars as their
完成，结束
润色是指通过对文字进行修饰，使其文采丰富，以下例子是对句子进行润色，希望对理解有帮助： I realized the importance of English when I entered senior high (强调句强调句强调句强调句) It was when I entered senior high school that I realized the importance of E We can live a happy life only by this (倒装) Only by this means can we live a happy He fell The lights were still (with结构) He fell asleep with the lights When I heard that, I was much (非谓语动词) Hearing that, I was much They carried out a survey among 260 (被动语态) A survey was carried out among 260 They were faced with many They didn’t lose (非谓语动词) Faced with many problems, they didn’t lose heart． It was getting And it began to (插入语) It was getting What was worse, it began to He worked very He made great progress in his (改为复合句) He worked so hard that he made great progress in his He offered me a piece of advice that I should cheer up and start all over (what引导的主语从句) What he offered me was a piece of advice that I should cheer up and start all over I got on a There were already too many people on (定语从句) I got on a bus on which there were already too many 50% of the students surveyed choose super stars as their (强调数字) As many as 50% of the students surveyed choose super stars as their
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finishing touches收尾例A Thai artist puts finishing touches on a decorated ostrich eggshell in B在泰国曼谷，一名艺术家在一颗彩绘鸵鸟蛋壳上做最后的修饰。
embroidery；retouch；polish；larded with
英文润色包含对文章语法、标点检查，专业术语进行优化，文风修饰、文章格式的调整。英文文章进行润色，首先自己英语写作能力要好，如果英文水平不过关，润色后的文章也打不到要求。如果文章用于发表，找靠谱的润色机构合作还是有必要的。无忧润色的专家编辑团队，不仅语言功底雄厚，而且有相关领域的学术背景。我们会根据您的论文研究领域选择对应专家进行英语母语化润色和校对，确保论文的结构清晰，语言母语化，让您的研究论文掷地有声，推动审稿进程。
retouch 英[riː'tʌtʃ]美[,ri'tʌtʃ] 润饰；修整部分 润饰；修整 润饰；修整[ 第三人称单数retouches 过去式retouched 过去分词retouched 现在分词retouching ] 同近义词润饰；修整trim up, give shape 润饰；修整trim up, give shape to 双 21世纪大英汉词典retouch [,ri:'tʌtʃ; 'ri:tʌtʃ] 润色；修改：The artist retouched the painting several 画家对这张画作了几次润色。 【摄影术】修描(底片等)：This photograph has been 这张照片已经过修整。 补染(新长出的头发) 【考古学】修磨(石器毛坯等) 润色；修整 补染 润色；修饰 润色时的增删部分 【摄影术】修描过的照片(或底片等)；修版 (头发的)补染 【考古学】(石器毛坯的)修磨
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