如果你在最大程度的凝聚自己时，你能通过不超过3遍以上的回看这篇文章，就可以精准的理解作者全部或者大部分的意思，就说明你可以和作者的思想高度契合，一般的，这篇文章，可能就是最适合你的。如果你不需要凝聚自己，或者你很随意的读这篇文章，你就可以轻松的看懂这篇文章，说明这篇文章太简单了，你不要读之。反之，即使你最大程度的凝聚自己，且你一遍又一遍的读这篇文章，你仍然不能很精准的读懂这篇文章，则说明这篇文章对于你来说就是太难了，你应该放弃这篇文章。从思维的角度：真正的好书或者阅读材料思维密度很大，文章内容所包含的问题的数量很多，深度很深，思维极限很大，思维方向也很多。从看书时的感觉的角度，你可以无数遍的看，但看了很多遍，好像没看过般。每次都有不同的心得体会。
不适合。碎片化的东西读完大多没什么印象，对你也没有实质性的帮助，除非你由此去深入了解某个方面，增加这方面的阅读量和了解，而我认为，作为大学生，还是多点时间深度阅读，少一点碎片阅读。对任何时代的任何学生来说，碎片化阅读都不能占主要地位，也是不好的，因为碎片化阅读对我而言只是一种打发时间的消遣，并不能在脑海中留下实质的印象，对你产生实质的影响。碎片化阅读是一个大概的浏览 没有深度的认识 过后很快就忘了 费时费力的
1.什么是碎片化阅读就是指通过手机短信、电子书、网络等电子终端接收器进行的不完整的、断断续续的阅读模式。毫无疑问，我们现在已经进入了碎片化阅读的时代。每天从手机、网络等电子终端接收器上，我们能接触到海量信息，似乎一切信息、知识唾手可得，阅读显得如此轻松、容易。2、 碎片化阅读产生原因分析。 科技进步、阅读载体的变化、人们的浮躁求快心理…… 3、 表达对碎片化阅读现象的褒贬态度。 碎片化阅读虽然碎片，也是“一片”，也是一种阅读的方式。 碎片化阅读太浅，不够深度。 4、 碎片化阅读的利弊分析。 阅读便捷，可充分利用每日零碎时间，上班途中、午睡前等边角时间都可以用来阅读；阅读更广博，可以让更多人进行海量资讯浏览，来了解世界；阅读者可以更有选择性进行个性化阅读；更容易抓住关键信息…… 催生“标题党”“头条控”等；更容易断章取义，易造成误读，淹没真相；看了大量的信息，却似乎什么都没有留下；微博微信等碎片化信息占用人们大量的时间，影响正常的工作学习，侵占人的生活；不利于学术研究；会造成一代人的浅薄盲从…… 5、碎片化时代，该怎么做？ 各种客户端等信息推送者有责任推送那些准确且更有深度更有含金量的信息；阅读者要形成随手积累碎片信息的习惯，碎片化时代更考验每个人对知识的整理能力；传统阅读不可废，享受碎片化阅读的便捷的同时可以多进行经典阅读；对待满天飞的碎片化信息，要更清醒，能辨识，不盲从……
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是的，庞晟写的莫让碎片化阅读剥夺你的思考中心论点是一个很有意义的题目。碎片化阅读是指在网络环境中，用户以浏览网页的形式，以快速、简短、碎片化的方式阅读信息。这种阅读方式可以让人们快速获取信息，但也有一个负面影响，就是会剥夺人们的思考中心。碎片化阅读会让人们只注重浅显的信息，而忽略深度思考，从而影响人们的思维能力和判断力。因此，我们应该让自己养成良好的阅读习惯，不要被碎片化阅读剥夺思考中心，而是要培养深度思考的能力，从而更好地理解信息，做出更正确的判断。
1.什么是碎片化阅读就是指通过手机短信、电子书、网络等电子终端接收器进行的不完整的、断断续续的阅读模式。毫无疑问，我们现在已经进入了碎片化阅读的时代。每天从手机、网络等电子终端接收器上，我们能接触到海量信息，似乎一切信息、知识唾手可得，阅读显得如此轻松、容易。2、 碎片化阅读产生原因分析。 科技进步、阅读载体的变化、人们的浮躁求快心理…… 3、 表达对碎片化阅读现象的褒贬态度。 碎片化阅读虽然碎片，也是“一片”，也是一种阅读的方式。 碎片化阅读太浅，不够深度。 4、 碎片化阅读的利弊分析。 阅读便捷，可充分利用每日零碎时间，上班途中、午睡前等边角时间都可以用来阅读；阅读更广博，可以让更多人进行海量资讯浏览，来了解世界；阅读者可以更有选择性进行个性化阅读；更容易抓住关键信息…… 催生“标题党”“头条控”等；更容易断章取义，易造成误读，淹没真相；看了大量的信息，却似乎什么都没有留下；微博微信等碎片化信息占用人们大量的时间，影响正常的工作学习，侵占人的生活；不利于学术研究；会造成一代人的浅薄盲从…… 5、碎片化时代，该怎么做？ 各种客户端等信息推送者有责任推送那些准确且更有深度更有含金量的信息；阅读者要形成随手积累碎片信息的习惯，碎片化时代更考验每个人对知识的整理能力；传统阅读不可废，享受碎片化阅读的便捷的同时可以多进行经典阅读；对待满天飞的碎片化信息，要更清醒，能辨识，不盲从……
是的，庞晟在论文《莫让碎片化阅读剥夺你的思考》中提出，碎片化阅读会剥夺人们的思考中心，这是他的论点。他认为，碎片化阅读会导致人们不能深入思考，而是仅仅浏览信息，从而导致他们的思考中心受到剥夺。他认为，人们应该把更多的时间放在思考和分析上，而不是浏览和记忆信息。因此，庞晟的论点是，碎片化阅读会剥夺人们的思考中心。
在学习、工作、生活中，大家都写过作文，肯定对各类作文都很熟悉吧，作文是由文字组成，经过人的思想考虑，通过语言组织来表达一个主题意义的文体。你写作文时总是无从下笔？以下是我整理的碎片化的阅读作文，供大家参考借鉴，希望可以帮助到有需要的朋友。
如今我们的阅读已经变得越来越碎片化。那碎片化究竟是好是坏，在其中我们该何去何从呢？
在以前我若想买书，总得和妈妈去书店，而现在我只需要在专门的网站，动动手指头输入书名，就可以了，真是足不出门，群书尽可购。书店买书虽然没有网络便捷，但是可以提前浏览一下书的内容，看看是否合自己的兴趣，是否真的值得买。而且有时候同一本书有好几版本，我可以仔细比较一下，选择自己喜欢的，这个过程让我虽然不看书也心情愉悦。那么网络购书，有什么好处呢？首先，网络上的书真可谓应有尽有，基本我想要的，都能找到，书店就未必了；其次，那就是节约时间啊，我只需网上下了订单，然后做自己的事情，书过个几天就会送上门来；最后，不得不提的那就是省钱啊！我可以用在书店买两本书的钱在网上购买三本或者更多的书，这太令人兴奋了！
因为眼睛不太好，我很少用网络阅读，大都还是看纸质书，偶然才会看看电子书。我的爸爸妈妈倒是经常网上看书，据说他们看连载小说为主，他们感觉这样每天都充满期待啊，而且可以利用短时间抽空看。尽管他们这样说了，但我更偏爱看纸质书，我喜欢书本捧在手上的厚实感；我还喜欢书本上精美的插图，它能让我有身临其境的感觉，我更喜欢碰到精彩情节时候，读给家人听和他们分享的乐趣！
在我眼里，碎片化的阅读和传统阅读都是生活中必不可少的，我喜欢阅读！
在互联网大为发展的今天，我们的生活逐渐碎片化，从而产生了碎片化的阅读，碎片化的阅读顾名思义就是把原本应该花费一个整体的时间去做的事，拆开花零碎的时间去阅读。
在公交车上，在排队时，公园里的休息椅上，在各个地方都可以看到人们拿着手机翻阅着实时新闻或者别人在各种社交平台上发布的文章，我有时也会翻阅这些内容，并进行选择，例如大标题的选择或者篇幅的选择，碎片化的阅读由于载体变得便捷，也便于见缝插针地阅读，只要有空就可以拿出手机阅读，不像传统阅读，如果想要随时看书就得背着一本沉重的书到处行走，非常的不方便。
我姑姑是一个喜欢阅读的人，她在读书的时候买了许多的书，现在家里就堆积了许多纸质的书。所以纸质书阅读完后会就会被静置，显得很浪费。现在姑姑常常拿着手机在，阅读，这样就不会产生纸质书的堆积。也符合现在节约用纸的环保要求。而且纸质书与电子书相比，更为昂贵。
但是看纸质书更能让人静下来阅读，更能从书中学到更多的知识。
我觉得我们应该，把碎片化的阅读与传统化的阅读结合一起，在空闲的时候，做一些碎片化的阅读，在周末抽一个整体的时间来读点困难的书，费劲的书，有益的书来充实自己，让自己变得满腹诗书。
让我们把碎片化的阅读与传统化的阅读结合在一起吧！
随着网络的迅速发展，科技的不断进步，我们的生活都被碎片化了。我们可以在地铁、公交车上看电子书，利用作业的间隙听英语。就像我，在手机上报名了百词斩、番茄英语和超有爱英语三个阅读活动。每天有时用早上在车子上的时间看，有时在放学回家的公交车上看。总之，我可以利用一切碎片化的时间。
我认为碎片化的阅读有利有弊。一方面它能让我们抽出时间来做很多事情。我们会认为时间很充足。就像我阅读英语软件，根本没有耗费我任何作业时间。妈妈还在网上帮我报名了英文网课。通过网络，我们可以随时上课。当然这样做也有不好的影响。就像看书吧，你一段一段地看就失去了细细琢磨句子的时间，你只知道一些大概的情节。尤其是阅读散文，没有把优美的词句铭记在心。名著也是需要细细品味的，细细地体验作者的内心世界，分享作者的情感，而不是就这样囫囵吞枣地读完。这样的话，你的阅读能力就不会提高。
以前，我们只能在图书馆借一本完整的书，现在在手机上随便一搜就可以发现。以前手机也只可以打电话，现在手机可以有许多附加功能。如果想去一个陌生的地方，我们也可以用百度地图来导航。我们可以做很多以前人不敢想象的'事情。可是这样倒底是好是坏呢？说实话，手机对人体也是不好的，晚上尽量不要放在床头充电，辐射厉害。
最后，我认为碎片化的生活确实有利有弊，说实话，还是利大！
现在的社会上，人人都处于忙碌中，随着智能手机的普及，一种新兴的阅读方式碎片化阅读逐渐流行开来。它已成为大众阅读的趋势，它是给忙碌地没空看长篇小说提供了一种新的体验。
可当深思熟虑的文章变得碎片化时，人们阅读就发生了变化，像看热闹一样看看这看看那，这对我们有什么帮助呢？今天的人物看上去很忙，可其实不然，有的人是要上班，可他们下班之后不是有时间吗？碎片化的阅读只能怪罪现在的人们。
以前的人们，都会拿本书，拿杯茶，到一个安静的地方去慢慢品书，而现在的人们呢？手里拿个手机，拿杯咖啡，到一个有免费Wi-Fi的地方去看微博！有人说，他在看微博时就像皇上一样，这能说明什么？我们已经成了碎片化的奴隶了。
有碎片化的阅读，就一定会有碎片化的思想，那些为了引人注意的新闻，甚至会传播虚假新闻，也就不具备有新闻的公正报道。碎片化，让人们仅从事物入手，并且形成人云亦云的形象。
我也不是说碎片化的阅读不好，它能帮助人们增加知识面，还能让人们学会收集有用的知识，能让人学会自主学习，现在的互联网几乎所有问题都能解答，人们只要想要知道就能知道。
碎片化的阅读，对我们有利也有弊，我们要合理运用啊！
今天，人们的生活被很多碎片化的内容切分，在信息传播进入网络时代以后，碎片化逐渐成为中国社会传播语境的一种形象性描述。碎片化的时间，碎片化的阅读，碎片化的购物，碎片化的社交现在，我们就来谈谈碎片化的阅读，到底好不好？
碎片化的阅读很好！人们的生活随着科技的发展日渐繁忙，变得快节奏起来。而碎片化的阅读却能很好地节省人们宝贵的时间。
碎片化阅读，为终日劳碌的人们带来全新的阅读体验。人们借助网络，以最迅捷的方式获取最新的消息，使自己的求知欲获得最大的满足。这不就是人们阅读的目的吗？满足自己的求知欲。我们常常会在一条长长的队伍中，捕捉到许多拿着手机指着一条条新闻谈笑风生的人们，这些新闻使人们在这短短的几分钟中得到精神上以及虚荣心上的满足。
碎片化的阅读不好！手机上的新闻往往十分简短精辟，为了便于人们阅读，也会直接点出重点，从而使人们缺少思考，以至于人们能静下来认真阅读的时间越来越少，沉下来思考的时间也越来越少。并且手机的屏幕对人们眼睛的损伤很大，使越来越多的人变成“四眼鸡”。另外，手机上的新闻各式各样，而常常人们会阅读一些娱乐新闻，久而久之手机会自动为你推荐大量的娱乐新闻，真正的国家新闻，文章，却会没了踪影。可这样的“知识”又有什么用呢？
你们又怎样看待碎片化的阅读呢？好还是不好？
论文怎么写 一、标题 标题是文章的眉目。各类文章的标题，样式繁多，但无论是何种形式，总要以全部或不同的侧面体现作者的写作意图、文章的主旨。毕业论文的标题一般分为总标题、副标题、分标题几种。 (一)总标题 总标题是文章总体内容的体现。常见的写法有： ①揭示课题的实质。这种形式的标题，高度概括全文内容，往往就是文章的中心论点。它具有高度的明确性，便于读者把握全文内容的核心。诸如此类的标题很多，也很普遍。如《关于经济体制的模式问题》、《经济中心论》、《县级行政机构改革之我见》等。 ②提问式。这类标题用设问句的方式，隐去要回答的内容，实际上作者的观点是十分明确的，只不过语意婉转，需要读者加以思考罢了。这种形式的标题因其观点含蓄，容易激起读者的注意。如《家庭联产承包制就是单干吗?》、《商品经济等同于资本主义经济吗?》等。 ②交代内容范围。这种形式的标题，从其本身的角度看，看不出作者所指的观点，只是对文章内容的范围做出限定。拟定这种标题，一方面是文章的主要论点难以用一句简短的话加以归纳；另一方面，交代文章内容的范围，可引起同仁读者的注意，以求引起共鸣。这种形式的标题也较普遍。如《试论我国农村的双层经营体制》、《正确处理中央和地方、条条与块块的关系》、《战后西方贸易自由化剖析》等。 ④用判断句式。这种形式的标题给予全文内容的限定，可伸可缩，具有很大的灵活性。文章研究对象是具体的，面较小，但引申的思想又须有很强的概括性，面较宽。这种从小处着眼，大处着手的标题，有利于科学思维和科学研究的拓展。如《从乡镇企业的兴起看中国农村的希望之光》、《科技进步与农业经济》、《从“劳动创造了美”看美的本质》等。 ⑤用形象化的语句。如《激励人心的管理体制》、《科技史上的曙光》、《普照之光的理论》等。 标题的样式还有多种，作者可以在实践中大胆创新。 (二)副标题和分标题 为了点明论文的研究对象、研究内容、研究目的，对总标题加以补充、解说，有的论文还可以加副标题。特别是一些商榷性的论文，一般都有一个副标题，如在总标题下方，添上“与××商榷”之类的副标题。 另外，为了强调论文所研究的某个侧重面，也可以加副标题。如《如何看待现阶段劳动报酬的差别——也谈按劳分配中的资产阶级权利》、《开发蛋白质资源，提高蛋白质利用效率——探讨解决吃饭问题的一种发展战略》等。 设置分标题的主要目的是为了清晰地显示文章的层次。有的用文字，一般都把本层次的中心内容昭然其上；也有的用数码，仅标明“一、二、三”等的顺序，起承上启下的作用。需要注意的是：无论采用哪种形式，都要紧扣所属层次的内容，以及上文与下文的联系紧密性。 对于标题的要求，概括起来有三点：一要明确。要能够揭示论题范围或论点，使人看了标题便知晓文章的大体轮廓、所论述的主要内容以及作者的写作意图，而不能似是而非，藏头露尾，与读者捉迷藏。二要简炼。．论文的标题不宜过长，过长了容易使人产生烦琐和累赘的感觉，得不到鲜明的印象，从而影响对文章的总体评价。标题也不能过于抽象、空洞，标题中不能采用非常用的或生造的词汇，以免使读者一见标题就如堕烟海，百思不得其解，待看完全文后才知标题的哗众取宠之意。三要新颖。标题和文章的内容、形式一样，应有自己的独特之处。做到既不标新立异，又不落案臼，使之引人入胜，赏心悦目，从而激起读者的阅读兴趣。 二、目录 一般说来，篇幅较长的毕业论文，都没有分标题。设置分标题的论文，因其内容的层次较多，整个理论体系较庞大、复杂，故通常设目录。 设置目录的目的主要是： 1．使读者能够在阅读该论文之前对全文的内容、结构有一个大致的了解，以便读者决定是读还是不读，是精读还是略读等。 2．为读者选读论文中的某个分论点时提供方便。长篇论文，除中心论点外，还有许多分论点。当读者需要进一步了解某个分论点时，就可以依靠目录而节省时间。 目录一般放置在论文正文的前面，因而是论文的导读图。要使目录真正起到导读图的作用，必须注意： 1．准确。目录必须与全文的纲目相一致。也就是说，本文的标题、分标题与目录存在着一一对应的关系。 2．清楚无误。目录应逐一标注该行目录在正文中的页码。标注页码必须清楚无误。 3．完整。目录既然是论文的导读图，因而必然要求具有完整性。也就是要求文章的各项内容，都应在目录中反映出来，不得遗漏。 目录有两种基本类型： 1．用文字表示的目录。 2．用数码表示的目录。这种目录较少见。但长篇大论，便于读者阅读，也有采用这种方式的。 三、内容提要 内容提要是全文内容的缩影。在这里，作者以极经济的笔墨，勾画出全文的整体面目；提出主要论点、揭示论文的研究成果、简要叙述全文的框架结构。 内容提要是正文的附属部分，一般放置在论文的篇首。 写作内容提要的目的在于： 1．为了使指导老师在未审阅论文全文时，先对文章的主要内容有个大体上的了解，知道研究所取得的主要成果，研究的主要逻辑顺序。 2．为了使其他读者通过阅读内容提要，就能大略了解作者所研究的问题，如果产生共鸣，则再进一步阅读全文。在这里，内容提要成了把论文推荐给众多读者的“广告”。 因此，内容提要应把论文的主要观点提示出来，便于读者一看就能了解论文内容的要点。论文提要要求写得简明而又全面，不要罗哩罗嗦抓不住要点或者只是干巴巴的几条筋，缺乏说明观点的材料。 内容提要可分为报道性提要和指示性提要。 报道性提要，主要介绍研究的主要方法与成果以及成果分析等，对文章内容的提示较全面。 指示性提要，只简要地叙述研究的成果(数据、看法、意见、结论等)，对研究手段、方法、过程等均不涉及。毕业论文一般使用指示性提要。举例如下： ●市场经济条件下的政府，固然应服从上级规划部署的全局，但主要的着眼点应放在对下负责，对本地的经济发展，对本地的人民生活水平提高负责，这才是发展全局经济的前提，从而也自然在根本上符合对上负责。 ●变部门“齐抓共管”企业为共同服务于企业，应成为部门工作的主要重点。(摘自《政府在市场经济中 如何定位》一文的内容提要) 内容提要的写作要求可以概括为“全、精、简、实、活”。具体说来： 1．内容提要要求具有完整性。即不能把论文中所阐述的主要内容(或观点)遗漏。提要应写成一篇完整的短文，可以独立使用。 2．重点要突出。内容提要须突出论文的研究成果(或中心论点)和结论性意义的内容，其他各项可写得简明扼要。 3．文字要简炼。内容提要的写作必须字斟句酌，用精练、概括的语言表述，每项内容不宜展开论证说明。 4．陈述要客观。内容提要一般只写课题研究的客观情况，对工作过程、工作方法以及研究成果等，不宜作主观评价，也不宜与别人的研究作对比说明。一项研究成果的价值，自有公论，大可不必自我宣扬。因而，实事求是也是写作内容提要的基本原则。 5．语言要生动。提要既要写得简明扼要，又要生动活泼，引人入胜，在词语润色、表达方法和章法结构上要尽可能体现文彩，以求唤起读者阅读正文的欲望。 四、正文 正文包括绪论、本论、结论三部分。这是毕业论文最重要的组成部分，其它章节有专门详细论述，这里不再重复。 五、参考文献 参考文献又叫参考书目，它是指作者在撰写毕业论文过程中所查阅参考过的著作和报刊杂志，它应列在毕业论文的末尾。列出参考文献有三个好处：一是当作者本人发现引文有差错时，便于查找校正。二是可以使毕业论文答辩委员会的教师了解学生阅读资料的广度，作为审查毕业论文的一种参考依据。三是便于研究同类问题的读者查阅相关的观点和材料。 当然，论文所列的参考文献必须是主要的，与本论文密切相关的，对自己写成毕业论文起过重要参考作用的专著、论文及其它资料。不要轻重不分，开列过多。 列出的参考文献一般要写清书名或篇名、作者、出版者和出版年份。
因为在当今的社会，天才其实是极少数的，大部分的人都是平凡的而又普通的，我们应该学会的是直面频繁，拥抱平凡，敬畏平凡，而且有北大的毕业生说出了平凡就尤其了，引起了很多人的共鸣，并不是所有的人都是天才。
北京大学本科优秀毕业论文的水平要求非常高，要求学生能够深入探讨一个问题，提出有说服力的观点，并能够准确、系统地表达出来。
北大本科要达到93分的毕业论文才是优秀级别，优秀毕业论文的比例是5%，能被评为毕业论文也是不容易的，一个班级也就1～2人。
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复旦大学日前推出的《上海大学生发展报告》对当代大学生阅读习惯进行了一次调研，结果显示经常阅读人文社会科学典籍和学术类著作期刊的大学生不足三成，大多数学生课外阅读只是为了休闲消遣。有关专家表示，除了学生自身偷懒外，整个社会的阅读风气和学校教学上的忽视也是改变大学生阅读习惯的原因。【调查】学专业不爱看专业书籍该报告指出，现代社会发达的传播条件使大学生的阅读面扩大，但非学术类阅读占的比例升高；相比之下学术类阅读显得单薄，专业期刊与外文文献阅读更是稀少。调查显示，经常阅读本专业经典著作、人文社会科学典籍、专业学术期刊、外文学术文献的学生比例分别为％、％、％、％。而经常或偶尔阅读通俗文学读物、时尚报刊、外文报刊的比例则高达％、％、％。华师大外语学院三年级学生小张表示，学语言的学生去读人文或语言专业书籍没什么价值，学语言就是为了应用。上师大生物系学生小冯认为，“专业学术读物太过枯燥，看专业教材就够呛了，课外再读专业期刊简直是自我折磨，至多是写毕业论文时我才会去看专业书籍。”调查还显示，医科类学生的阅读率是各专业中最低的，仅有23％的学生课外阅读学术读物。复旦大学医学院学生小沈表示，读医科的学生课业负担很重，各门医学知识均要熟记于心，他们无暇再去读什么人文或学术经典。【分析】受社会阅读影响是主因复旦大学哲学系教授张汝伦不无遗憾地告诉记者，大学生不爱读自己的专业书籍，却热衷读小说、休闲报刊读物的现象，其实主要还是受到整个社会阅读风气的影响。他直言，现在社会上大多数人都把阅读当作消遣娱乐，甚至有不少专家、学者在媒体上给读者开的阅读书单里面，也尽是武侠等通俗小说，“大学生在这样的大环境影响下，又有几个能静下心来读一些严肃的书籍？”同济大学计算机系博士生导师张大陆教授则告诉记者，“不要说本科生了，硕士生能潜心看看书的也屈指可数。”张教授在面试几位报考博士学位的硕士生时，叫他们说几个世界权威的学术期刊、学术会议的名字，居然鲜有能对答如流者。而他发现这与学校教学上的忽视有关，很多老师在指导学生时也往往关心实用技术，轻视对理论、学术的指导，不提供教材外的参考书目，或者提供参考书只流于形式。【建议】提升兴趣开放资源张汝伦教授在复旦给学生开读书讲座时多次说：“千万不要放弃阅读人类文明几千年留存下来的宝贵精华，否则真的是人生一大损失。”他认为，大学生阅读不应功利和贪图消遣，而应加大对人文学科和本专业经典著作的涉猎；学校也可以通过组织书友会和阅读讲座来提升学生的阅读兴趣和品位，增加积累。张大陆教授也指出，由于学科理论的最新发展反映到课本上，至少要有两三年时间，因此除了学习教科书知识外，对于理工科、医科等专业学生来讲，多看外文学术著作和刊物是必须的。他建议，各高校的外文学术图书馆不该仅允许研究生进入，也应该向本科生全面开放，以提供更多的阅读资源。此外，通过要求学生在看参考书后写读后感、综述类的文章，并且把参考读物的知识反映在专业课考试内容上，不失为促进学生扩大学术类读物阅读量的好方法。
接上面二然而,近两年来,“大学语文”课程在有的院校出现了滑坡,甚至很不景气。有的院系用“应用写作”或“演讲与口才”取代“大学语文”,有的院系干脆直接取消“大学语文”,有的院系象征性地开一个学期,每周2课时。出现这种情况,原因可能是多方面的。有的院系领导认为学生从小学到高中,学了12年语文,到了大学没有必要再学“大学语文”,就是再学一学期,也不能提高多少语文水平,不如开“应用写作”、“演讲与口才”急功近利。诚然,开一学期“大学语文”,并不能把学生的语文水平提到一个很高的程度。学语文是一个潜移默化的过程,不能一蹴而就。但学一点语文,至少可以让学生不忘记自己的母语和民族文化,可以培养阅读兴趣,营造文化氛围。读、说、听、写是学习语文的四门基本功。“应用写作”、“演讲与口才”不能取代“大学语文”,相反,它们被“大学语文”所涵盖。一部分大学语文教师不能摆正自己的位置,不认真钻研教材,不改进课堂教学,不追求教学效果,是导致学生厌学的重要原因。很多人有一种观念,认为只要是一个人,能认识几个字,就可以教“大学语文”。一些兼职教师沿袭过去中小学语文课的教法,教学程序就是介绍作者、解释词语、划分段落、归纳中心思想、指出写作特点。对文章的分析完全依赖教材的“提示”,不敢越雷池一步,稍加引申和发挥,就可能出现知识性错误。期末考试、考查,采取开卷,又是任课教师命题、阅卷,学生根本不听课也可以及格,甚至获得高分,唯一的一门文化教育和素质教育课,就这样对付过去了。有的专职“大学语文”教师自轻自贱,总认为他们这些公共课教师不如专业课教师吃香,说语文不是一个专门学科,科研没有一个方向,很难晋升职称。其实,“大学语文”涉及到古代汉语、现代汉语、中国古代文学、现当代文学、外国文学、文艺学、写作学等诸多学科,每位教师完全可以根据自己的兴趣爱好和优势特长选择一门学科作为研究的主攻方向,获取教学和科研的丰硕成果。事实上,全国高校的“大学语文”教师中就不乏知名教授。匪夷所思的是,有的人教了多年“大学语文”,跻身专业课教师行列后,反过来诋毁“大学语文”,这真令人费解。在个别学校,同样是公共课,“大学语文”与“大学英语”的地位有天壤之别。“大学英语”在各系各专业开4个学期,每周6课时,以每学期授课18周、每周24课时计,“大学英语”两年共开432课时,占总课时的四分之一。除外语系,没有哪个系哪一门专业课开这么多课时,而“大学语文”开一学期,每周2课时,共计36课时,占总课时的百分之二,是“大学英语”的十二分之一。这是何等的比例失衡,是何等的“数典忘祖”?外语和语文的课时如此众寡悬殊,也许是外语有过级考试,语文没有过级考试,外语不好,很多事会一票否决,语文不好,不会一票否决。不过,只是近些年才这样,以前并不这样。当年,钱钟书报考清华大学外语打零分,还是被破格录取,没有一票否决。外语不行,也没有妨碍他成为著名的学者和作家。有些外语学得很好,因从事的工作与外语没有太多关系而派不上用场的也大有人在。有一名牌大学毕业的老先生,外语学得非常好,退休后聊天时有人问他,你的外语特好,一生派上了什么用场?他思索良久后认真回答:“有一次坐飞机和空姐用外语交谈了几句。”他旁边有位同事笑着说:“那次我也和空姐交谈了几句,不过用的是汉语。”这位同事不经意地幽了那位老先生一默。笔者并不反对学外语,要考虑“与国际接轨”,原本就不必考虑“中国国情”。改革开放伊始,英语备受青睐,中央和地方的广播电台开辟英语广播讲座,《英语900句》一时成为畅销书。时髦女郎身着胸前印有“Kissme”的T恤招摇过市,这不知是无知还是作秀。国门打开之后,一些人学习英语到了痴迷的程度,这当然不是坏事,只是全国范围的外语教育高投入,低效益,考研考博,评定职称等,过分强调外语的“一票否决”,“两会”上,人大代表、政协委员及有识之士早有微辞。最近据报载,有十类人员可以不参加职称外语考试,是值得额手称庆的好举措。学习外语也要学好母语。汉语的造字(词)法与英语的构词法颇有相似之处。汉语:用“力”于“田”是“男”人;使“人”传“言”是“信”息;用“刀”判“牛”、“角”是分“解”;用“火”烤“犬”、“肉”是“然(燃)”烧。英语:一片glass是玻璃,两片玻璃(glasses)是眼镜。break(打破)加fast(禁食)是breakfast(早餐)。land(土地)加lord(君主)是land-lord(地主),mother(母亲)加land(土地)是mother-land(祖国),如果把它说成“地主婆”,那只是网络笑话。比较而言,英汉对译则更能显示中文修养的重要。There is no doub,t译成“没有问题”、“没有疑义”、“毫无疑问”、“无庸置疑”就有明显的文野之分、雅俗之别。有些美英学者译我国唐诗,就常常出现错误。例如:贺知章《回乡偶书》:“少小离家老大回,乡音无改鬓毛衰。儿童相见不相识,笑问客从何处来?”有人将第三句译成“And my children, meet-ingme, do notknowme”·“children”有“儿童”和“儿女”二义,译成“my children“就是“我的儿女”。诗人“少小离家老大回”,在村中见到的是家乡的儿童,不是自己的儿女,应译成“the children”。朱庆馀《近试上张水部》:“洞房昨夜停红烛,待晓堂前拜舅姑。妆罢低声问夫婿,画眉深浅入时无?”有人将首句译为“Go out the great red wedding-chamber can-dles”,“go out”是“熄灭”,“停红烛”不是熄灭红烛,而是安排停当,让红烛高烧,彻夜不熄,表现新娘将见公婆的忐忑心情。所幸第二句将“舅姑”译成“your parents”,没有译成“uncle and aunt”。中国出现外语热,海外也出现汉语热,欧美,澳洲,远东,南亚,世界各地迄今共建立“孔子学院”128所,这种学院以“孔子”命名,不只是学习研究儒家学说,而是学习研究汉语和中国传统文化。美、法、日、韩、俄、澳钟情现代汉语方言,日、韩等国还成立专门研究汉字和古典诗词的,“《说文》学会”,“诗词学会”,但他们并不忘记自己的母语和民族文化。三为了加强“大学语文”课程建设、提高教学质量,以下措施可供参考。(一)学校确定“大学语文”为全校各个院系(除中文系外)的必修公共课,由教务处向各院系下达指令性的开课计划,责成中文系安排合格的专职教师实施教学。(二)建立一支文化素质较高、有较丰富的教学经验、爱岗敬业、相对稳定的专职教师队伍,负责计内和自考的“大学语文”教学。以往“大学语文”集中在一年一期开,专职教师人人超工作量,还要聘请大量的兼职教师。兼职教师难于管理,不能有效地保证教学质量。一年二期,专职教师又工作量不足。如果将“大学语文”安排在两个学期上,则可以较好地保证教学质量,还可以为学校节省一笔课时酬金。(三)选用一本好的教材。目前,全国高校使用的“大学语文”教材有几十种,从编排体例看,可分三种类型: 1·按文学史编排; 2·按文体编排; 3·按思想内容编排。按文体分类就是按文章的表达方式分类,它更适合写作教学,与以阅读、欣赏为主的语文教学不大吻合。按思想内容分类,又容易出现类与类的交叉,或所分之类不能涵盖所有作品。现在所用的教材按文学史分类,选入了古今中外的一些优秀作品,所附录各个时期的文学概述,是粗线条的文学简史。另外还附录了较系统的古代汉语、现代汉语知识、应用文体写作知识。可谓一书多用。(四)中文系下设“大学语文”教研室,组织教师集体备课;互相听课;取消任课教师自行命题的做法,建立试题库,考前由教务处或中文系拼题;实行分题流水作业、集体阅卷、交换登分。与教学有关的一切情况和数据均记入教师的业务档案,连续几届教学效果不好、学生反映强烈的教师,应影响其评优和职称晋升,经过帮助,仍无起色的,应调整其工作。(五)树立大语文观。课内学习是有限的,课外学习是无限的。教师要走出课堂,通过多种形式、各种活动作为课堂学习的补充和延伸。例如:指导学生课外阅读和写作;指导学生社团活动;组织作文竞赛、演讲比赛、辩论会、朗诵会;指导撰写毕业论文、调查报告,组织论文、报告评优等。只要各级领导重视,全体师生努力,语文学习的春天就一定会到来!
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Story of Regret There was this guy who believed very much in true love and decided to take his time to wait for his right girl to believed that here would definitely be someone special out there for him,but none came. Every year at Christmas,his ex-girlfriend would return from Vancouver to look him was aware that she still held some hope of rekindling[1] the past romance with did not wish to mislead her in any he would always get one of his girl friends to pose as his steady whenever she came back. That went on for several years and each year,the guy would get a different girl to pose as his romantic whenever the ex-girlfriend came to visit him,she would be led into believing that it was all over between her and the guy. The girl took all those rather well,often trying to casually tease[2] him about his different girl friends,or so,as it seemed!In fact,the girl often wept in secret whenever she saw him with another girl,but she was too pround to admit Christmas,she returned,hoping to rekindle some form of each time,she returned to Vancouver feeling disappointed. Finally she decided that she could not play that game any confronted him and professed[3] that after all those years,he was still the only man that she has ever the guy knew of her feelings for him,he was still taken aback and had never expected her to react that always thought that she would slowly forget about him over time and come to terms that it was all over between he was touched by her undying love for him and wanted so much to accept her again,he remembered why he rejected her in the first place---she was not the one he he hardened his heart and turned her down then,three years had passed and the girl never returned never even wrote to each guy went on with his life... still searching for the one but somehow deep inside him he missed the girl. On the Christmas of 1995,he went to his friend's party alone."Hey,how come all alone this year?Where are all your girl friends?What happened to that Vancouver babe who joins you every Christmas?"asked one of his felt warm and comforted by his friend's queries[4] about her,still he just surged[5] on. Then,he came upon one of his many girl friends whom he once requested to pose as his wanted so much to ignore her...not that he was impolite,but because at that moment,he just didn't feel comfortable with those girl friends was alomst like he was being judged by girl saw him and shouted across the floor for to avoid her,he went up to acknowledge her. "Hi...how are you?Enjoying the party?" the girl asked. "Sure...yeah!" he replied. She was slightly tipsy[6]... must be from the whiskey on her continued,"why...?Don't you need someone to pose as your girlfriend this year?" Then he answered,"No,there is no need for that anymore..." Before he could continue,he was interrupted,"oh yes!Must have found a girlfriend!You haven't been searching for one for the past years,right?" The man looked up,as if he has struck gold,his face beamed and looked directly at the drunken replied,"Yes...you are right!I haven't been looking for anyone for the past years." With that,the man darted[7] across the floor and out the door,leaving the lady in much bewilderment[8].He finally realized that he had already found his dream girl,and she was...the Vancouver girl all along!The drunken lady has said something that awoken him. All along he had found his was why he did not bother to look further when he realized she was not coming was not any special girl he was seeking！It was perfection that he wanted,and yes...perfection! Realizing that he had let away someone so important in his life,he decided to call her whole mind was flooded with was afraid that she might have found someone new or no longer had the same feelings anymore...For once,he felt the fear of losing someone. As it was Christmas eve,the line was quite hard to get through,especially an overseas tried again and again,never giving got through...precisely at 12:00 confessed his love for her and the girl was moved to seemed that she never got over him!Even after so long,she was still waiting for him,never giving up. He was so excited to meet her and to begin his new chapter of their decided to fly to Vancouver to join was the happiest time of their lives!But their happy time was days before he was supposed to fly to Vancouver,he received a call from her had a head-on[9] car collision[10] with a drunk passed away after 6 hours in a coma[11]. The guy was devastated[12],as it was a complete did fate play such cruel games with him?He curses the heaven for taking her away from him,denying even one last look at her!How cruel he cursed!How he hated himself...for taking so long to realize his mistake!!That was in 1996.
励志学，不仅仅是要激活一个人的'财富欲望，更要激活一个人的生命能量，唤醒一个民族的创造热情。以下是我整理的关于大学生英语励志文章，欢迎阅读参考。
The significant inscription found on an old key - "If I rest, I rust." - would be an excellent motto for those who are afflicted with slightest bit of idleness. Even the most industrious person might adopt it with advantage to serve as a reminder that, if one allows his faculties to rest, like the iron in the unused key, they will soon show signs of rust and, ultimately, cannot do the work required of them.
Those who would attain the heights reached and kept by great men must keep their faculties polished by constant use, so that they may unlock the doors of knowledge, the gates that guard entrances to the professions, to science, art, literature, agriculture-every department of human endeavor.
Industry keeps bright the key that opens the treasury of achievement. If Hugh Miller, after toiling all day in quarry had devoted his evenings to rest and recreation, he would never have become a famous geologist. The celebrated mathematician, Edmund Stone would never have published a mathematical dictionary, never have found the key to science of mathematics, if he had given his " moments to idleness. Had the little Scotch lad, Ferguson, had allowed the busy brain to go to sleep while he tended sheep on the hillside, instead of calculating the position of the stars by a string of beads, he would never become a famous,astronomer.
Labor vanquish all-not inconstant, spasmodic or ill-directed labor; but faithful, unremitting daily effort toward a well-directed purpose. Just as truly as eternal vigilance is the price of liberty, So is eternal industry the price of noble and enduring success.
We are a symbol of too much, and too much. But I believe that my image is not "the gentlest hands, skin, such as Diorskin" Lin Daiyu, nor is the modern "unkempt and shabby", "Su Qier". We are a symbol of hope and vitality. So we show in front of others should be ed without pleats, face without scale, modest and polite gestures exudes a stream of heroic spirit, the image of the vigor and vitality of the modern new youth, a into the embodiment of the spirit of nature.
Someone once said, life is a kind of hardness, integrity and dignity of life is propped up the hardness of bone. "Better life" and "the Kui back in the day, and not ashamed on the ground", which is always the traditional virtue of the China. Li Bai's "the eyebrow nengcui Zheyaoshan powerful thing, so that I may not be happy Yan" this awe inspiring atmosphere of the verse and whether it will make those no self-esteem people to shame? Loss of self-esteem is a worthless person, and we as the vanguard of the times, if drown in the darkness forever, or to do a dauntless hero, a flower in the wind and rain sonorous rose. The answer is self-evident.
Desert desolate also has the monument stands, Castle Peak again proud, but also have the great wall around, the river again quiet, also there is a dragon in the recumbent. But the time can be changed, our image, our glory remains the same. Because we pride, because we are confident, because we have a fresh life. And because of this, it is a vast desert riparian long, Qingshan was evergreen, the hardness of life is forever.
The ancients cloud: "where there is a will, there is a way." The so-called, is refers to & mda sh; Individual for themselves to establish "ambition", establish the goal of life. Goal in life, is the guide and light of life, the source of power, if lost it, would have lost the way forward. Determine the goal in life, can choose the road of life, and was able to grasp and control their own life.
Had a target, life becomes full of meaning, - cut seem clear, clear in front of you. What to do, be what is should to do, why to do, for who, all of the elements are less obvious and clear. So life will add more vitality and passion. So that we fully burst their hidden potential, in order to realize high quality life to lay a solid foundation.
Reminiscing about history, any age, any country, the social structure are close - kind of pyramid. A lot of people at the bottom of the pyramid, only - a small number of people at the top of the pyramid. At the bottom of the people can only do ordinary work, there are ordinary income, not achieve their ideal and baggage, and at the top of the tower is a thriving, enjoy substantial wealth, development prospects. But people often ignores, these people who are in the top of the tower, ever also at the bottom, is an obscure, ordinary people, steps - - to climb to the top of the pyramid.
Under careful observation - the vast majority of people in society - born in mediocrity, although they also in hard work, a lifelong struggle, but only minor minor role, its basic reason lies in their lack of real power. Social demands, the restriction of others, that they treat life, work is responsible, but seldom to think how to let oneself have a sea change in life. In other words, most people in the bottom of the pyramid and at the top of the pyramid, compared to a few people the height of the gap lies in the eye, is the goal of life.
What kind of goal, there will be what kind of life. Maybe you think you now is how humble, or engaged in the work is so insignificant, but as long as you strongly desire to climb the peak of success, will himself in the great world of the whole society, the life earnestly positioning, clear goals, and is willing to pay the arduous efforts, so there you'll get it - day, to be successful.
Hope our every personal goal for life from now on, start from the intravenous drip, implement the goal in life. Drop the repeating yourself a mediocre life, try to explore their inner potential, inspire their sparkle, believe that the gold no matter where is the light of truth sooner or later, no matter what difficulties and obstacles encountered, will eventually succeed. New life is start from the date of target.
Story of Regret(悲情罗曼史） There was this guy who believed very much in true love and decided to take his time to wait for his right girl to believed that here would definitely be someone special out there for him,but none came. Every year at Christmas,his ex-girlfriend would return from Vancouver to look him was aware that she still held some hope of rekindling[1] the past romance with did not wish to mislead her in any he would always get one of his girl friends to pose as his steady whenever she came back. That went on for several years and each year,the guy would get a different girl to pose as his romantic whenever the ex-girlfriend came to visit him,she would be led into believing that it was all over between her and the guy. The girl took all those rather well,often trying to casually tease[2] him about his different girl friends,or so,as it seemed!In fact,the girl often wept in secret whenever she saw him with another girl,but she was too pround to admit Christmas,she returned,hoping to rekindle some form of each time,she returned to Vancouver feeling disappointed. Finally she decided that she could not play that game any confronted him and professed[3] that after all those years,he was still the only man that she has ever the guy knew of her feelings for him,he was still taken aback and had never expected her to react that always thought that she would slowly forget about him over time and come to terms that it was all over between he was touched by her undying love for him and wanted so much to accept her again,he remembered why he rejected her in the first place---she was not the one he he hardened his heart and turned her down then,three years had passed and the girl never returned never even wrote to each guy went on with his life... still searching for the one but somehow deep inside him he missed the girl. On the Christmas of 1995,he went to his friend's party alone."Hey,how come all alone this year?Where are all your girl friends?What happened to that Vancouver babe who joins you every Christmas?"asked one of his felt warm and comforted by his friend's queries[4] about her,still he just surged[5] on. Then,he came upon one of his many girl friends whom he once requested to pose as his wanted so much to ignore her...not that he was impolite,but because at that moment,he just didn't feel comfortable with those girl friends was alomst like he was being judged by girl saw him and shouted across the floor for to avoid her,he went up to acknowledge her. "Hi...how are you?Enjoying the party?" the girl asked. "Sure...yeah!" he replied. She was slightly tipsy[6]... must be from the whiskey on her continued,"why...?Don't you need someone to pose as your girlfriend this year?" Then he answered,"No,there is no need for that anymore..." Before he could continue,he was interrupted,"oh yes!Must have found a girlfriend!You haven't been searching for one for the past years,right?" The man looked up,as if he has struck gold,his face beamed and looked directly at the drunken replied,"Yes...you are right!I haven't been looking for anyone for the past years." With that,the man darted[7] across the floor and out the door,leaving the lady in much bewilderment[8].He finally realized that he had already found his dream girl,and she was...the Vancouver girl all along!The drunken lady has said something that awoken him. All along he had found his was why he did not bother to look further when he realized she was not coming was not any special girl he was seeking！It was perfection that he wanted,and yes...perfection! Realizing that he had let away someone so important in his life,he decided to call her whole mind was flooded with was afraid that she might have found someone new or no longer had the same feelings anymore...For once,he felt the fear of losing someone. As it was Christmas eve,the line was quite hard to get through,especially an overseas tried again and again,never giving got through...precisely at 12:00 confessed his love for her and the girl was moved to seemed that she never got over him!Even after so long,she was still waiting for him,never giving up. He was so excited to meet her and to begin his new chapter of their decided to fly to Vancouver to join was the happiest time of their lives!But their happy time was days before he was supposed to fly to Vancouver,he received a call from her had a head-on[9] car collision[10] with a drunk passed away after 6 hours in a coma[11]. The guy was devastated[12],as it was a complete did fate play such cruel games with him?He curses the heaven for taking her away from him,denying even one last look at her!How cruel he cursed!How he hated himself...for taking so long to realize his mistake!!That was in 1996. [1]、rekindle V. 重新点燃 [2]、tease V.取笑，欺负 [3]、profess V.表示 [4]、queries n.查询 [5]、surge V.汹涌，澎湃 [6]、tipsy adj.喝醉的 [7]、dart V.飞奔 [8]、bewilderment n.困惑，慌张 [9]、head-on adj.正面的 [10]、collision n.碰撞，冲突 [11]、coma n.昏迷 [12]、devastate V.毁坏 由于金山快译出问题了，没法给你发译文。我还是诚实的。呵呵。
写英语作文，最重要的是头脑清晰不是吗?就算是到了大学，这一点也不会改变。下面是我给大家整理的大学英语作文，供大家参阅!
A seven day long holiday has flown away. Mourning my happy hours during the vacation, I've been looking forward to winter holidays. People around me seemed to have enjoyed the vacation, too. Then, is it fair that people have the same amount of holidays regardless of their occupations?
Nevertheless, divergent views emerge on the matter in question. Some people are of the opinion that laborers should have the same length of holiday. They hold the view that people are born equal and should be treated equally. The same amount of leisure time may eliminate the unfairness among people who might be upset psychologically if otherwise. At first sight, it may seem to be an attractive idea, but it doesn't bear much analysis.
To begin with, people do different kinds of jobs featuring different labor intensity and so the time needed to refresh their physical condition varies. For example, blue collar workers may work longer hours before they get tired physically, while white collar workers such as doctors and teachers are more mentally stressed. Unable to work continuously as long as those physical labor workers, white collars need more time to pull through the mental weariness than physical tiredness. All in all, people in different jobs assume different responsibilities and have different degrees of pressure.
Secondly, different tasks and duties are required for different professions, resulting in the variety of holiday periods for people in different walks of life. Some employees cannot have their legal holidays and even have to work overtime, such as policemen, construction workers and people in the service professions just can't be interrupted for a mornent;other wise the society will be in a mess. Even for some people in the same occupation, they cannot have the same holidays entitled to them due to many factors out of human control, such as special assignments, and health conditions etc, then not to say people in different fields.
Suppose we, as teachers do, all have three months' holiday in a year. Then factories have to employ considerably more workers because some of them are enjoying happy 's obviously against the principles of doing business at lower cost and efficiency.
If we have only three days off in a year, then all the people in our country will be working day after day. No one can squeeze time to visit those tourist resorts leisurely. It goes without saying that the tourist trade and catering industry thus cannot develop rapidly and healthily.
Last, the development of science and technology allows the ways of work to be changed. Computer experts make their programs, doctors give patients diagnosis and tutors give students instructions at home through optical fabric cable 's how the new term SOHO bore. In other words, the way people work is not fixed so that they need different holiday phases.
Some people need more time to recover from the fatigue of labor. And some people cannot make ends meet though they work for 365 days in a year, for whom holiday is a waste of time.
It is neither possible nor necessary for people with different jobs to have the same amount of holiday off. Holiday is a kind of bonus, just as the Chinese idiom goes, distribution according to
work.
简 评
冯佳莹同学的这篇作文思路清晰，分析丝丝入扣，是一篇非常优秀的议论文。
这篇作文的开头清新自然，通过自己对国庆假期的感受，进而联想到其他各行各业的人的想法，引出了本文的主题，显得毫不做作。写这篇作文时，作者显然进行了深入的思考，因而分析有理有据，闪烁着作者的真知灼见和思想火花。作者的语言很出色，句式长短交错，段落层次分明，句与句之间以及句群之间的衔接都非常清晰，作者倾向于使用then，that，those等连词和代词来衔接上下文，而没有使用过多的定语从句，既使句式的长度得到了控制，又避免了中国学生常见的定语长句(尤其是非限定性定语从句)过多的弊病。尽管作者使用了一些短语，但整篇的文体并没有因此而显得过于随意，显示了作者高超的语言驾驭能力。
(点评教师：孙东云)
It's a true story in the summer of 1998 when I was attending a youth conference in L. A... and it feels so good to rewind it in the recollection...
Fog swirls, swallowing the car in front of us. Dense, impenetrable, the wall of white throws back the lights into my eyes. There are four of us in a family van that is creeping along the free way from downtown L. A. to Lancaster. Fog gets even stronger and spreads out like a blanket over the flat land. It's Noah's turn to drive with complaints about the couldn't be lower visibility. But he is whispering so that Eugene and Kikki can sleep still. With eyes slightly closed, I am playing Bob Dylan on the disk, whose rhythm echoes the midnight prays.
Well, we've truly had enough prayers just now. Being off from the annual Vineyard Church International Yough Conference, I find myself deeply buried in the ferment that kids create from all over the world. There are cries and whisper, laughter and tears, bless and pain, confidence and disbelief mixed together, building up a confession of the detours of soul. Bible has recorded all this since centuries ago. It's about God, but it's not all time religion.
A boy from Panama asked me if I eat turkey as an Irish Catholic when pastor David was presenting his speech. I smilingly nodded my head and turned back to Mr. David. He is an authentic English with dark blue pupils, eyes right fixing into his listener while talking. He has truly handsome chins that show up his decency of smile and subtleness of wit.
"There is only one door into heaven and Jesus said, 'I'm the door' (John 10: 9), he quoted, "The way you enter is by expressing faith in the Lord Jesus Christ. Faith in Jesus is a commitment to the one whose life becomes your life and his life within you makes you a new person."
There was a dead silence for praying before a burst of weeping broke the ice. A blonde girl threw herself into the arms of the peer beside her, hiding her face. A boy of crew cut on the first row was bending his knees, forehead down to the ground,whispering his regrets. A black girl standing right beside me was shivering her lips with tears hanging up in her eyes, showing a piece of uncertainty. It was truly heart wrenching when more and more kids were peacefully touched by the power of God,harmonizing their words with tears, rather than screaming out their logo as "we love Jesus yes we dm we love Jesus how about you."
It hasn't been long before I am used to the way of praying here in the States. The melancholies in the air soon put me on the way of figuring out the fact lying behind the tears. It numbed me to see the fear and solitude that root deeply in this materially rich world. There is a false security that drastically reshapes the country by drug, crimes, pre marital sex and racism. And it seemed here every tiny little souls were certain victims. Jesus wasn't truly there, but the void became the savior.
It was then that the mother of pastor David rose to sing "Ave Maria". She came up to piano in a gentle pace, took a breath, closed her eyes, and delivered the goods. Well, never have heard the song offered with more feeling, more passion and fervor. She was seventy years old and magnificent. The plain voice flowing in the air was neither scratchy nor dramatic that you might expect from an aging third rate opera singer. This was actually the voice of a grandmother distilling her life into the music to honor what she loved and believed in. when the last lovely note faded and silence held us firm, the "grandma" opened her eyes, smiled at us, and said, "my lord be with you."
That is basically what received from the journey of soul. I told out my sins with once-in-life-time honesty. I may never get a chance to bump into Pastor David and I truly miss this mid aged gentleman of deep sea pupil, although he didn't succeed making me believe that Jesus died on the cross for my sin and paid my sin debt in full.
Noah is now too sleepy to drive. It's my turn to stay awake in this misty of midnight Los Angeles. Fog stands still when we are inching along the road of this spiritual trip. I don't know what keeps me in such a wild and peaceful excitement. Well, if the fog doesn't lift, may we at least have some lines and reflectors put down along the road to guide us.
简 评
宗教的力量可以是无穷的。作者根据在美国的所见所闻，向我们描述了基督教对美国人的思想所起到的巨大支持与影响作用。
同时作者的美国经历不仅丰富了阅历，也使其语言功底令国内的英语学习者难以望其项背。生动的描述，地道的选词都使得该篇文章成为很好的例文供我们赏鉴。
(点评教师：张雪波)
Lectures and Discussions
提纲
1. 大学里有讲座式和讨论式两种授课方式。
2. 两种授课方式各有利弊。
3. 我的看法。
There are mainly two styles of teaching at universities -- lectures and discussions. Each has its own characteristics.
Lectures are actually the teacher's talk to a class for the purpose of teaching. In this kind of class, the teacher plays a central role, while the students are mainly the listeners. Compared with lectures, discussions are more flexible. Students can examine and argue about a subject with each other in this kind of class. Lectures are especially suitable for big classes hecause it will be easier to keep the students under control, while discussions are typically for small classes for the reason that they are more likely to go out of control.
In a word, lectures and discussions are two quite different styles of teaching, so we should choose either of them or combine them together reasonably according to the circumstances.
Science and Human Beings
提纲
1. 科学使人类进步，生活得更美好。
2. 科学有时也会带来负面效应，如原子能毁掉一切。
3. 就科学与人类的关系谈谈你的观点。
Science enables human beings to progress rapidly and lead a better life. For example, Edison's invention of the light bulb brought our gloomy life to the end and created a bright world for us. Another case in point is Watt's discovery of the steam engine, which triggered the industrial revolution in the western countries, and later all over the world.
Meanwhile, sometimes science does have some side effects. A good illustration of this is atomic energy, which can destroy human beings completdy when used in nuclear weapons.
Anyhow, it is men who develop science. And science, in turn, will do us good in general. As for its side effects, I believe human beings will be rational enough to avoid them or keep them under control.