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日记形式的 It is fine today. I made an appointment with my foreign friend Peter to visit the Great Wall on Badaling. We set out early in the morning. We first took the subway and then the bus. On reaching the foot of the Great Wall, Peter was attracted by the landscape immediately."What a won der!" he said repeatedly and pulled me onto the cable car at once. We got a view of the beautiful scenery. After a while, we got to the Great Wall. Peter was very excited. He touched the bricks frequently. I explained to him when and how' we Chinese built the wall. He listened with great interest. When we entered a turret, Peter was more curious. I told him what the turret was and what it was built for. "It was really an amazing achievement!" Peter gasped with admiration and took several photos. Unconsciously, we found we had reached the Stele of Brave Man, the symbol of the Great Wall. A lot of visitors gathered around it and took photos. I translated the words on the stele for Peter. "Only the one who can reach the Great Wall is a brave man." "Really?" Peter asked jokingly. We both laughed. It the time to go back. We were fascinated by the scenery and reluctant to leave. We really had a pleasant time.。
The Great Wall
The Great Wall runs across North China like a huge dragon, It winds its way from west to east, across deserts, over mountains, through valleys till at last it reaches the sea. It's the longest wall on the earth, also one of the wonders in the world.
The Great Wall has a history of more than 2000 years. The first part was built during the Spring and Autumn Period. All the walls were joined up in Qin Dynasty.All tile work was done by hand. Thousands of people died while building the wall.Thus the Great Wall came into existence.
Since then, it has been rebuilt and repaired many times. Now the Great Wall,the admiration of the world, has taken on a new look. It's visited by large numbers of people from all parts'of the'country and the world.
As we all know, the Great Wall is a great building, I am proud of the Great Wall.
众所周知,长城是个奇迹,我为它感到自豪!
First, the Great Wall o thousand years of history; It is located in northern China. East from Shanhaiguan, west to Jiayuguan, total length of 8851.8 km.
长城有两千多年的历史;它位于中国的北部。东起山海关,西至嘉峪关,全长8851.8千米。
Second, the Great Wall is China's ancient people created one of the great miracles on behalf of China's long history.
长城是我国古代人民创造的伟大奇迹之一,代表了中国悠久的历史。
Third, in the past, the Great Wall was built to withstand enemy attack on the; Today, the Great Wall has bee a popular tourist attraction, which every year attracts many tourists from around the world.
过去,长城是为了抵御敌人进攻而修建的;如今,长城已经成为了著名的旅游景点,每年都吸引着许多来自世界各地的游客。
我给你写的~~~~~ As we all know, the Great Wall is a great building, I am proud of the Great Wall. First, the Great Wall o thousand years of history; It is located in northern China. East from Shanhaiguan, west to Jiayuguan, total length of 8851.8 km. Second, the Great Wall is China's ancient people created one of the great miracles on behalf of China's long history. Third, in the past, the Great Wall was built to withstand enemy attack on the; Today, the Great Wall has bee a popular tourist attraction, which every year attracts many tourists from around the world.。
您好,我是被保送到英语专业的一本大学生,按照您的要求写了这篇文章,不知能否帮上您的忙: It was pretty sunny last Monday , I , together with a few my alien friends and gusts cycled to your holley destination —— the Great Wall. To tell you the truth , we have been imagining visiting there for quite a long time , and eventually we fulfilled our dream . After approximately one hour's cycling , the grand splendid construction appeared in front of us . “our efforts count!” one of my foreign friends shouted stimulatedly. The Great Wall, which looks much likely a huge stationary dragon , lies silently on the beautiful , historical ground . “That's regarded as the symbol of China ! ” I said proudly ,'It is one of the ten architecture miracles on the earth ! ' With a delightful and modest sensation , we walked upwards the respectable construction , feeling the incredible intelligence of ancient Chinese architects and labours . In the process of climbing , I sincerely wish that China would bee stronger and stronger. We spent the whole afternoon on the wall , and no one felt like going back until too late in the evening . We do enjoy this significant journey ! 逐句的中文翻译:(为了更通俗易懂,部分语句采取意译) 上周一天气很好,我跟一些老外朋友、客人们骑着自行车驶向我们神圣的目的地—— 长城。
跟你说句明白话吧,我们已经有好长时间想象着去那儿了,这回总算实现了我们的心愿。 大概过了一个小时的车程,那雄伟豪迈的建筑在我们面前出现了。
“我们的努力是值得的!”我的一个外国友人激动地叫着。 长城,它好像一条静止的巨龙,平静地躺在美丽而历史悠久的土地上。
“长城被认为是中国的象征,”我骄傲地说着,“它是世界十大建筑奇迹之一!” 怀揣着既兴奋又谦卑的心情,我们在这值得尊敬的建筑上 向上行走,并感受着古中国建筑师、劳动人民难以置信的智慧。在这登山的过程中,我由衷地祝愿中国变得越来越强大。
整整一个下午,我们呆在了长城上,直到晚上很晚的时候才有人想要回家。我们确实很享受这次富有意义的旅行! 不知您需要什么难度的作文,如果在难度方面您有额外的要求,就跟我说一声吧,我可以再写,随便什么难度的,我都能写得出来。
呵呵 顺便提一句,问问团队作文之家给您的那篇文章,我觉得写得有点过分简单了,简单句用得太多,显得句式很单调。内容也不太丰富,还有一些语法小错误,感觉一个团体写出来的文章还是让人大失所望。
比如: After o hours the Great Wall appeared before my eyes 这句中 before 就用错了,这多是指时间方面的,这里应该用in front of 。 before my eyes 有点Chinglish ,in front of me 就显得地道多了。
所以整句应该是 After o hours the Great Wall appeared in front of me 比较好。 我感觉他们团队写的那篇习作用语上不太考究,很多句子都是 I 或者 the Great Wall 作为主语的,这样会显得累赘、欠灵活,在考试中很容易打低分。
这点 也请您稍稍注意一下,我们在批改 中高考作文时,对这种累赘用语现象 扣分比较严格。您可以把我写的跟他们的对比一下,谁用语灵活、丰富,就显而易见了。
呵呵。
The Great Wall
The Great Wall of China is considered to be the only man-made project visible from the moon. Although it was once thought to have been built entirely during the Qin Dynasty beeen 221 and 208 BC, it is now believed to have been started earlier.
The 15-foot-high, 25-foot-wide, 1,500-mile-long structure was undoubtedly built to keep out invading enemies. To the mon people of the empire, who had been forced to build the wall, it was not worth it, however. The wall, and other public works pleted by the Qin Dynasty,had caused great losses of wealth and human life in the country. As a result,an angry population rose up in rebellion against the Qin Dynasty,and in 207 BC the Han Dynasty began.
Because of its rich history and magnificent appearance,the Great Wall attracts tourists, scientists, and historians to this day and will continue to do so for generations.
My Sunday
Last Sunday.I got up very early in the morning.After breakfast I went to the bookstore.I wanted to buy a book Robinson Crusoe.I looked for the book for quite some time but couldn't find it.The shop assistant then came to help me.I was very glad that I got the book at last.
In the afternoon I called on my friend Wang Lin.He just came back from Beijing.We talked a lot.
In the evening I watched an interesting play on TV.I
enjoyed it very much.I had a wonderful time
e of the seven wonders of the world---"the Great Wall".It is a tourist attraction which is famous both at home and abroad.Since time immemorial,many men of literature and writing left mendatory poems here.After the overhaul,it shows us a brand-new look at present which attracts more tourists from various of countries.Today,my father brought me to the the Great Wall at Badaling.I know that the Great Wall at Badaling is interlocking stretching and undulating on the far-flung land of our great motherland.It looks like a megalosaurus cross the lofty peaks,go through grassland,stride over big deserts and run to the sea.I also know that more than enty countries had built the Great Wall including Qin Dynasty, Han Dynasty and Ming dynasty.At present,there are still much ancient great wall and beacon towers existing in XinJiang,GanSu,Ningxia,Shanxi,BeiJing and so on.。
The Three Ges of the Yangtze RiverThe Three Ges are situated ① in the middle reaches of the Yangtze River, and are famous throughout the world.The Three Ges are: the Xiling Ge(西陵峡), Wu Ge(巫峡)and Qutang Ge(瞿塘峡). Along with them there are a number of beautiful places of interest, such as, Zhaojun Village, Qu Yuan Temple and Baidi Town.The Gezhouba Dam is at the entrance to the Ges. A big power station has been built here. Since the reform and open policies began to be carried out, great changes have taken place and the Three Ges of the Yangtze River have taken on a new look. At present a large multipurpose water conservancy project ② is under construction.The Three Ges will benefit ③ the people more and make greater contributions to China.【词语解释】①be situated(in) 位于……②large multi-purpose water conservancy project 大型水利枢纽工程③benefit['benifit] v 有益于.。
Last week,I went to Beijing.The weather was fine.I visited the Great Wall.Oh, it was wonderful.Then I went to the Forbidden City,i thought that is really beautiful.After a wonderful meal,I wevt to the Summer Palace.It has a long history.I also saw the lake and the lotus bud, it's so beautiful! I was really happy,though I was so tired.I love this interesting tip.。
日记形式的 It is fine today. I made an appointment with my foreign friend Peter to vi
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