期刊修改说明怎么写

1，变量单一，就是说你的数据还不够，只做了某一个单变量分析，最好是多做几个影响因素的单变量分析。2，文字粗糙，这个让导师或者课题组论文老手帮你润色一下。3，总字数可能没达到期刊投稿要求，最好再增加些内容。

先说一下Cover letter的框架，一般应注意包括以下内容：

1. 开头注意附上稿件的关键信息，主要包括Title、 Manuscript ID等；

2. 表达对责任编辑的感谢；

3. 表达对审稿人（Reviewers）的感谢；

4. 表明你（们）已对编辑和审稿人提出的建议做出相应的修改（Revisions），不用过于详细，细节性的内容可以在Response to reviewers里呈现。

现附范例（粗体部分为备注，非正文内容），仅供参考。

May 12, 2022

Joseph S. Francisco, PhD（经过第一轮审稿后，你们应该已经知道责任编辑的姓名和Title了）

Editor, Journal of XXX（职务+投稿期刊名称）

Dear Dr. Francisco,

We would like to thank you for the opportunity to revise and resubmit our manuscript ABC-2022-XXXX (Manuscript ID), entitled "XXX" by XXX et al. We found the reviewers' comments to be helpful in revising the manuscript and have carefully considered and responded to each suggestion, corresponding changes to the resubmitted manuscript are highlighted in yellow. （说明对修改内容是如何标记的，便于责任编辑查看）

We also included a response to reviewers in which we addressed comments the editor and the reviewers made （修改细节在response to reviewers中呈现）, we hope that these modifications can fulfill the requirements to make the manuscript acceptable for publication. Please let us know if you have any concerns about the manuscript and we would like to address them as soon as possible.

Thank you again for your consideration of the revised manuscript.

Sincerely,

XXX, PhD

On behalf of the authors (可有可无)

University of XXX

(Email)

以上。

设计不具创新性，没有深入。 文笔欠佳，版面要求字数不符。

开门见山说明来意就行. Dear xxx: Many thanks for the insightful comments and suggestions of the have made corresponding revision according to their in blue are the changes I have made in the text（为了便于审稿人重审,一般把修改过的地方用醒目颜色标出）. 按照审稿人的意见逐条进行了修改 The following is the answers and revisions I have made in response to the reviewers' questions and suggestions on an item by item basis. 1. 2.