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雅思讨论文模板

雅思的大作文是议论文,可以背模板,但是小作文是描述图表,背模板没有什么用,最主要是把图表所表示的都写出来就是了但是最基本用得上的单词要背,例如描述速度的rapidly,slowly,swiftly描述上升下降的increas,decreas,climb,unchange还有就

写作中最常出现的讨论文是关于某个社会问题或事物产生的原因、造成的影响、找出解决方法。但是不会三个一起出来,一般都是这三个方面中挑出两个来考。当然,最常见并不等于不出现别的情况,下面有例题读者一看就一目了然了。讨论文由于其写作手法比议论文简单,出题专家往往在题目设计时采用增加难度的方法,考生必须特别注意。

讨论文的基本写作原理:

1.讨论文不可以argue。

2.由题目问法确定focus是产生的原因还是造成的影响还是找出解决方法,或者是别的,two questions就一定有两个focuses。

3.绝不能否定题目背景中确定的前提。

写讨论文有几个方面要注意:

1.题目中往往出现两个questions,必须确定都是讨论文而不是混合题,混合题也有two questions,其中一个question是议论文或利弊题。

2.考生最常出现的逻辑错误是混淆原因和结果,假如题目要求写出产生的原因,考生却写成造成的影响,就被当作跑题处理,反之亦然。

3.假如题目问法中要求写出解决方法,solutions应该无需顾及对比,但最好与之前提到的causes或effects有明确的所谓对应关系。

4.一般情况下,two questions分别用两段主体来完成。

5.由于focus被定格在题目问法中,对比又往往覆盖不了所有题目背景的内容,所以审题时必须多次将题目背景所讲的整个情况结合focus和对比来考虑,以免漏掉重要信息。

2011雅思小作文写作万能模板1、通过第一个曲线图,我们可以知道____,也说明了结果是___According to the first graph, it can be seen that ______________, it can also be concluded from it that 、一张有趣、有教育意义的、(内容)的图片(这句模板在雅思小作文中的应用非常的广泛。)There is an interesting and instructive picture which goes like this: 、当前有一张涉及______的增长曲线图,许多人______,然而其他人倾向于___Nowadays there is a growing concern over ______________. Many people like ______________, while others are inclined to 、目前,共同之处是_________,许多人喜欢______因为_______除此之外还由于_____Nowadays, it is common to ______________. Many people like______________ because ______________. Besides, 、(图表所示)_____,就像许多其他事物,被____更加喜爱,然而这一观点正被________所抨击,一些人认为_________,他们指出_________________________, just like many other things, are preferred by being attacked by the idea that ______________, some people consider ______________. They point that according to the chart```2 the date lead us to the conclusion that```3 the date show```4 the tree diagram reveals how```5 the figures show```6 this is a cure graph which describes the trend of```7 the pie graph depicts```8 the graph provides some interesting date regrarding```9 the table shows the changes in the number of ``` over the periodfrom ```to ```10 as is shown in the table ```11 from the table ,we can clearly see that ```12 this table shows the changing proportion of X and Y from ``` to ````13 the graph,presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in```14 as can be seen from the grape ,the two curves show the flutuation of ```15 over the period from ```to ```the```remained in the year between ```and ```.17 in the 3 years spanning from 2005 through the number of ``` remained steady from ```to ````.19 the number sharply went up to ```20 the percentage of ``` stayed the same between ``` and ```21 the percentage remainede steady at```22 the percentage of ```is sightly large than that there is not a great deal of differece between ```and ```24 the graphs show a three fold increase in the number of ```25 ```decreased year by year while ```increased there is an upward trend in the number of ```27 a considerable increase occurred from ```to ```28 from ```to ```the rate of decrease slow from this year on,there was a gradual declinel reduction in the```reaching a figure be similar to ```be the same as31 there are a lot similarities between ```and ```32 the difference between X and Y lies in ```雅思学术性写作考试中Task 1 考查考生解释,说明信息的能力,这些信息通常体现在图解,表格和插图中,这一部分的模式化程度更高一些。下类50个句式是雅思留学类考生需要背诵的最最基础的句子。请同学们自己背诵。在写作小作文的时候,也可以作为参考材料。1. the table illustrates the changes in the number of...over the period from...to...该表格描述了在...年之...年间...数量的变化。2. the bar chart illustrates that... 该柱状图展示了...3. the graph provides some interesting data regarding...该图为我们提供了有关...有趣数据。4. the diagram shows (that)... 该图向我们展示了...5. the pie graph depicts (that).... 该圆形图揭示了... is a cure graph which describes the trend of...这个曲线图描述了...的趋势。7. the figures/statistics show (that)... 数据(字)表明...8. the tree diagram reveals how...该树型图向我们揭示了如何...9. the data/statistics show (that)...该数据(字)可以这样理解...10. the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that...这些数据资料令我们得出结论...11. as is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table...如图所示...12. according to the chart/figures... 根据这些表(数字)...13. as is shown in the table... 如表格所示...14. as can be seen from the diagram, great changes have taken place in...从图中可以看出,...发生了巨大变化。15. from the table/chart/diagram/figure, we can see clearly that...or it is clear/apparent from the chart that...从图表我们可以很清楚(明显)看到...16. this is a graph which illustrates...这个图表向我们展示了...17. this table shows the changing proportion of a & b from...to...该表格描述了...年到...年间a与b的比例关系。18. the graph, presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in...该图以圆形图形式描述了...总的趋势。19. this is a column chart showing... 这是个柱型图,描述了...20. as can be seen from the graph, the two curves show the fluctuation of...如图所示,两条曲线描述了...的波动情况。21. over the period from...to...the...remained level.在...至...期间,...基本不变。22. in the year between...and... 在...年到...期间...23. in the 3 years spanning from 1995 through 1998...1995年至1998三年里...24. from then on/from this time onwards... 从那时起...25. the number of...remained steady/stable from (month/year) to (month/year)....月(年)至...月(年)...的数量基本不变。26. the number sharply went up to... 数字急剧上升至...27. the percentage of...stayed the same between...and......至...期间...的比率维持不变。28. the figures peaked at...in(month/year)...的数目在...月(年)达到顶点,为...29. the percentage remained steady at... 比率维持在...30. the percentage of...is slightly larger/smaller than that of......的比例比...的比例略高(低)。31. there is not a great deal of difference between...and......与...的区别不大。32. the graphs show a threefold increase in the number of...该图表表明...的数目增长了三倍。33. ..decreased year by year while...increased steadily....逐年减少,而...逐步上升。……太多啦,你给个邮箱,我发给你吧!

雅思的大作文是议论文,可以背模板,但是小作文是描述图表,背模板没有什么用,最主要是把图表所表示的都写出来就是了但是最基本用得上的单词要背,例如描述速度的rapidly,slowly,swiftly描述上升下降的increas,decreas,climb,unchange还有就是比较,例如major part, rank the first, the least important 哪些然后再自己找几题练练就差不多了还有就是,如果要求成绩高于分的话,就不要背模板了,人家看得出来,模板就算再好也不过6分,一般套的模板就是分

雅思驳论文模板

雅思议论文论证方法

雅思写作部分要求考生在一小时内完成两篇文章,一是150单词以上的图表说明文,二是250单词以上的议论文。说到雅思议论文,它的考查点可以从三个方面进行概括,即结构、内容、语言。本文将就其中内容方面进行探讨。雅思写作通常都围绕着几大类话题展开,如2009年到现在较常出现的教育类、科技类、媒体类等,所以考生要在考试前做好论据扩展的准备,争取每个话题都练习几个常考题目。

雅思议论文,不管是双边论证还是单边论证,论据的扩展是非常重要的,只有合理逻辑的对一个理由进行论证,才能说服考官相信你的论证是有理的。而合理的扩展有了素材后还需要一些方法的补充。常见的方法有解释说明(explanation)、举例子(exemplification)、列数据(raising figures)、对比对照(contrast & comparison)、让步(making concession)、引用(quotation)等。

1、 解释说明(explanation)

句型:

This is to say, …

To be more precise,…

By this I mean,…

中国学生思维方式有个最大的特点就是拐弯抹角,不会开门见山,这往往与西方人的思维方式有着巨大的区别,西方人通常习惯一针见血,而不是含蓄的说话。这就导致很多考生在论证过程中用讲道理的论证方法时容易出现离题偏题的现象,从而降低考分。比如,一次课上,笔者请一位学生来分析一下“the reason why it is difficult for university students to find a job after graduation”,学生的答案为“the increasing world population”,考生给出答案后进行了分析,他认为人口多了,意味着大学生人数增多,那就是说大四学生变多了,找工作竞争激烈了,所以他们找工作困难了,这样就将看上去风马牛不相及的两个东西转了好几个圈终于联系在一起。中国学生喜欢去研究一个问题的根本原因,但事实上,这个原因与题目根本没联系,就可以被判定为离题,所以还不如直接说“the increasingly fierce competition”,更有说服力。根据这一特色,朗阁海外考试研究中心的老师建议考生在讲道理的时候只围绕topic sentence进行解释说明,这样就不会出现离题的现象了。我们看下面一个topic sentence,通过explanation来进行扩展。

. The retired people tend to offer service for the benefits of the family and the community.

读完这个句子,我们可能对其中the benefits of the family and the community感到疑惑,到底是什么利益,提供什么服务。

This is to say, the elderly always spend their time in taking care of the family and doing household chores for the family as well as organizing charitable activities for the community.

这样就能很好的对上述句子进行解释说明了。

2、 举例子(exemplification)

句型:

For example, for instance, to illustrate, …

Take… as example, …

举例子也是中国考生较常用的论证方法,只是在使用的过程中往往也会出现一些不符合西方思维的问题。既是举例子,顾名思义,我们要列举一个具体的例子,比如某某人,或某事件而不是在for example后面还出现some people,这根本就不能算是个具体的例子。笔者在上课时请一位学生来举例论证“the students in high school suffer from increasing pressure”学生的例子是(中文):某年某月某日,我经过我家邻居的门前,刚好看到他们家女儿因为压力过大而跳楼自杀了。这个例子有三个地方不合理,一是某年某月某日,过于具体,不可信;二是我亲眼看到她跳楼自杀,就算是真的也不可信,最好说是报纸或新闻中读到;三是压力过大,难道她在跳楼前还大喊一声“我压力太大了”告知大家跳楼的原因吗?显然又是不合理的。所以上述三个方面的问题请考生引起重视。接着我们也通过一个练习来对topic sentence进行举例的扩展。

. Most parents tend to overuse punishment in their education of the kids.

看到这样一个句子,我们脑中第一步要想到一个具体的事件,再想具体的人,就可以得出下面的例子。

For example, only because of the bad performance in primary school, the child of my neighbour was inflicted corporal punishment. In this case, it does nothing but harm to the child’s physical and mental development.

从例子中得出一个结论,这样使得论证过程更加有说服力。

3、 列数据(raising figures)

句型:

As is reported/ investigated/ researched, …

It is reported that …

A recent research conducted by …Bureau reveals that…

列数据的论证方法较讲道理更有说服力,我们要在平时生活中多做积累才能应付列举考试中出现的各个话题的一些相关数字。雅思考试中的数据其实可以分成两大类,一类是有科学依据的,明确记载的数据,如一些新闻事件,四川地震、公交车自燃等的死亡或受伤人数,这些都是可查询的,如若考生对这些数据没有切实的把握就不需列举。另一类是指一些调查报告的数据,如大学生平均一天花多少时间自习,初中生平均一天花多少时间玩电脑游戏等,这类数据无据可依,考生完全可以自己根据论证内容给出数据,但一定要符合逻辑。我们通过一例来使用列数据的论证方法:

Eg. The retired people tend to offer service for the benefits of the family and the community.

要对这样一个topic sentence做列数据的扩展,我们首先要找到可列数据的点,此题有两处,一是退休老人的年龄,二是所花时间。结合上述句型,得出论证过程如下:

As is reported, the average time that the retired within the age group above 65 spend on the family and the community is at its length of about 5 hours per day.

4、 比较(contrast & comparison)

考生可以拿相同或相反的事物做比较,相同关系叫对照(comparison),相反关系叫对比(contrast)。此类论证我们重点掌握一些对比对照关系的连词:

In contrast, by contrast, on the contrary, while, whereas

Likewise, similarly

5、 引用(quotation)

在写作论证的过程中,表达一些观点的时候,如果能拿名人名言来进行论证则更有说服力,说明某位名人的观点和你的观点是达成一致,形成共鸣的。但引用要求考生要有相当大的积累,由于备考时间紧迫,此类论证可以少用。此外,朗阁海外考试研究中心的专家提醒考生要紧记,引用名人名言就意味着引用别人的观点,所以只要引两到三句起到论证自己观点的作用的话就可以了,点到为止,而不是中文写作中,引用越多越好。

6、 让步(making concession)

让步的论证是中国考生较陌生的一个概念,其实在学状语从句时,我们就学过让步的关系,先退一步承认一个与自己观点相反的事实,再转折给出自己的观点,否定前者。句型如下:

Although/ though/ in spite of the fact that …

As is granted/ Admittedly, …

Opponents would argue that …

举个简单的例子,一个男生向女生告白,被女生拒绝,她就会委婉的用让步的论证来表达自己的想法,她会先承认男生的一些优点,再转折说自己并喜欢他。这样既能表达自己的观点,又不至于伤害对方。让步这种方法的优点为能较全面的看待一个问题,而且反驳更能有的放矢。具体例子如下:

Eg. People don not believe that saving money is a good idea in modern society.

这个Topic sentence的观点很明确,存钱在当代社会不是好主意,显然,用让步论证的话,我们要先承认存钱的优点,再根据所列有点进行反驳。

As is granted, saving money offers people a sense of security in case of emergency. However, people tend to believe that wise investment can get more profits.

"雅思考试有条写作指令叫做:Includerelevantexamplesfromyourownexperience.所以许多考生在考试时都喜爱使用举例法(exemplification)。举例是一种常见的论说办法,特别在论说某一些比较笼统的论题的时分(比方文明类或跟艺术相关的论题)。但是,并不是每个阶段都需求例证法,举例过多或过火勉强会影响文章的正式感,甚至给考官滔滔不绝的感觉。举例是为了更加形象地叙说工作。所以要留意以下准则:(一)要来源于生活,要具有生动的论说作用。不能过于空泛,也不能脱离现实,不然就失去了举例的意义。(二)要客观表达。尽管来源于身边社会,但不可让描绘办法变的太鸡毛蒜皮,拿不上台面。其实这点十分简单办到,只需求把工作中某一个具体的你,我,他,变成是客观集体,比方说peopleacrosstheglobe,students,they之类的人称即可。"

雅思辩论文模板

在很多考生的概念中,雅思议论文是辩论式的文章,需要摆事实、讲道理。他们认为,用"说理"性的文字来证明自己的观点才是最具有说服力的,相对而言,用太多的个人经历、情绪、喜好等"个性化"内容作为论据则会因为缺乏"普遍适用性"不够让人信服。这样的想法也不无道理,确实,有些学生的文章出现了过多的以"?I"引出的个人经历式论据,过多的谈论自己经历的某些事件,使文章偏离了辩论的初衷,反倒有点像记叙文,这就是教师需要题型学生要注意避免的问题了。然而适当地在文章中穿插一些与个人经历或个人喜好有关的一些描述,会使文章变得更富个性化色彩,语言显得更为活泼生动,在千篇一律的说理式文章中显得更为出众,给考官留下好的印象。此外,个性经历式的描述从语言说上比较具体,考生在语言组织方面也会轻松很多。

一提到雅思写作模板,有人想到的是一大篇完整的 文章 ,其中有少许空缺,用来填上某个特定话题的特定内容,一篇及格的雅思文章即出炉。其实这是对模板的误解。最有效且值得初学者模仿的内容,是 句子 。我为大家分享20种经典的雅思大 作文 开头句模板。

雅思大作文模板之20种经典开头句分型

1、According to the first graph, it can be seen that ______________, it can also be concluded from it that ______________.

2、There is an interesting and instructive picture which goes like this: ______________.

3、Nowadays there is a growing concern over ______________. Many people like ______________,

while others are inclined to ______________.

4、Nowadays, it is common to ______________. Many people like ______________ because ______________. Besides, ______________.

5、 ______________, just like many other things, are preferred by ______________. While being attacked by the idea that ______________, some people consider ______________. They point that ______________.

6、Everything has two sides and ______________ is not an exception, it has both advantages and disadvantages.

7、For years ______________ had been viewed as ______________. But people are taking a fresh look at it now.

8、It has stipulated by the government that ______________. To this stipulation, many people respond actively because ______________.

9、______________ is a common occurrence in our daily life. Whatever we do, ______________ can't be avoided.

10、______________ has become a hot topic among people, especially among the young, and heated debates are right on their way.

11、Recently, ______________ has become the focus of the society, and in this way.. People swarm to ______________.

12、______________ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought us a lot of benefits but created some serious problems as well.

13、Man is now facing a big problem-______________, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ______________ second, ______________.

14、Nowadays more and more people are beginning to be aware of the seriousness of ______________.

15、It is only during the last years that man has become generally aware that ______________.

16、There is an old saying, ______________. It's the experience of our forefathers, however, it is correct in many cases ever today.

17、The English proverb says, ______________. This is quite true because ______________.

18、______________ is now______________, and at the same time ______________. These two factors have caused ______________. Then what shall we do to solve ______________ in the face of such a situation.

19、One of our ancient philosophers said, ______________. Chinese people have always been holding this idea to be one of their standards of morality.

20、One of the great early writers said that ______________. If this is true, the present situation should make us ponder over ______________.

雅思大作文:the old age is more valued , while in some cultures the youth is more valued

雅思大作文题目:In some cultures, the old age is more valued (valuable), while in some cultures the youth is more valued (more useful). Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

作文 范文 :

There have been drastic and constant changes of societies and values in the global context for recent decades. Therefore, some traditional cultures regard old age valuable for their civilization whereas other utilitarian ones may deem the youth, energetic and willing to accept challenges, to more precious.

What the senior brings about to all areas is mainly experience and the sense of security to all. It is well acknowledged that the aged, whichever field they have served, have accumulated more knowledge and skills out of years practice. They may thus grasp some principles that can be utilized in guiding the next generation to cope with matters and, even having undergone modern technological revolutions, ought to be applicablein most cases. Apart from this apparent benefit, another must not be neglected. Everyone without exception goes through the aging process and it is not hard to imagine what it would be like if a society viewed the elderly to be useless and exerted little of its resources in supporting them. Nothing could alleviate the anxiety of the middle-aged and even young adults about their retirement benefits and eventually fade away the sense of security, followed by some possible increase of crime rate.

Cultures think high of the youth, however, can see benefits on social production and renovations. In the first place, the youth are generally way more dynamic, which offer sufficient labor force to carry out productive activities, and if a greater reward and respect can be given and shown to them, this force can be more active and rewarding in return. Moreover, they generally and more quickly can embrace changes in work and life. This indicates the removal of obstacles in implementing challenging policies, promoting certain businesses, developing new technologies, and boosting economy afterwards within a relatively short period.

To my mind, a justifiable government should keep the balance between the pension for the past devotion of the elder and the incentive for the current contribution from the young, to realize social justice and security.

雅思大作文:the world of work is changing rapidly

雅思大作文题目:The world of work is changing rapidly and people cannot depend on the same job or same conditions of work for life. Discuss the possible causes for this rapid change and give your suggestions on how people should prepare for work in the future?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

作文范文:

In my country, people used to be constrained to a single workplace for lifelong by social security or welfare system. However, this is no longer the case nowadays when people are free to choose their occupation or have to adapt themselves in different positions.

People now change their works and environment based on several reasons, subjectively and objectively. To pursue a better career or break through a bottleneck, rather than secure a stable income, young people usually opt to change their job. In addition, graduates with little working experience have not developed a clear perspective of their life career. It is reasonable for them to be exposed to various workplaces, orienting to the society and trying to find out their strengths and interests. On the negative side, employers have to qualify themselves every couple of years, or else they may get fired and are forced to get other positions. This is because modern technologies have been revolutionizing since the advent of computer and internet and employers from different industries have to adopt the radically changing needs of the market. They thus must recruit those with advanced skills and specialties and cast out those left behind in order to meet the demand.

For better future career and greater possibilities of being always employed, people can take the following pieces of advice. It is certainly feasible that people exert their lifelong time in acquiring new knowledge and skills. This is especially true and cruel for the veteran workers who may find their specialized knowledge outdated comparing to that brought by the fresh and even new graduates. It is only a matter of attitude of being studious and diligent, otherwise laziness would eventually take its toll. Another piece of suggestion is to stand on solid ground before a job-hop and a promotion, which is mainly aiming at those regarding themselves already fully-prepared to get higher position. If one’s strong sense of responsibility is not fostered, maturity not or ability to tackle problems not developed, the newly-promoted will suffer from both disobedience of reports and doubts of bosses.

To sum up, the swift shifting societies offer people less chance to stay vocationally unchanged. Therefore, the path of a successful career would be more even if one is willing to tgeready and embrace.

雅思大作文:the family have a powerful influence on children 's life

雅思大作文题目:Although the family have a powerful influence on children 's life, the influence outside from home isa bigger part for his/her development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

作文范文:

It is known to people from both western and eastern world that some certain features always run within each family, unlikely to alter even after people have become independent from the original family for long. Therefore, I hardly agree with the indication that the life outside from family has greater impact for people.

Schooling and social experience undeniably affect peoplein various aspects. The most obvious one lies in the environment in whichschool students and social persons have more chances to acquire more knowledge and gain richer experience because of far more sources of input, from friends, teachers, bosses, colleagues, acquaintances and even strangers. People thus have to foster a variety of relationships and learn to cope with them skilfully. With extensive knowledge and harmonious relationships, a better development maybe maintained and furthered.

However, the family education, or parenting to be exact, turns out to be more profound and root. In the pursuit of knowledge, one has to foster habits like being able to concentrate and to expand quality attention span at the very beginning of school years. These are required by school authorities and sadly and generally realized at home as teachers can only focus on the overall performance of the class rather than each very individual. Some may argue about private sectors and that leads to the second point, the power of money. The amount of resources that one can utilize not only decide the standard of living, which may support private tutoring for better learning habits but also may formulate his or her value towards wealth, which in the long run, intentionally or unexpectedly is passed to the offspring. As well as that, children’s value towards people, right and wrong and even goal of life is deeply affected.

In conclusion, I don’t agree with the opinion that others factors influence more than family itself as the value is formed there and it can be recognized in nearly all aspects in the later part of life.

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雅思写作参考模板:比较不同观点的优劣

给出两个对立事物或一个事物对立的两个方面,要求考生说明二者为什么不同或比较它们的优缺点,并给出理由。

具体表述如下:

TOPIC: Some people believe that A while others consider B more appropriate. Give advantages and disadvantages of the two positions and explain which position you support.

MODEL (1)

A and B are two totally different ideas that have caused heated debate over a long period of time. Anyway, I agree with the idea of A. However, it is unfair to say which is better than the other if we don’t see both sides of the story in the following paragraphs.

Some people believe B because①. These people point out the fact that②. They also argue that ③.

However, other people stand on a very different ground. They believe that④. They firmly point out that⑤. An example can give the details of this argument: ⑥. In addition, ⑦.

In a word, A is too tempting not to be chosen. A, as shown above, has ⑧. ⑨.

①人们支持B的第一个原因

②进一步阐述支持B的第一个原因

③支持B的第二个原因

④支持A的第一个原因

⑤进一步阐述支持A的第一个原因

⑥举例说明支持A的第一个原因

⑦支持A的第二个原因

⑧选择A的第一个好处

⑨选择A的第二个好处

MODEL (2)

Some people believe that①. Other people take the view that②. While both methods may have their advantages and disadvantages, they can be applied under different circumstances. Afterwards, I will explain my opinion about it.

For A, ③

But this also demonstrates that④

Moreover, ⑤

B, on the other hand, ⑥. For example, ⑦.

In my opinion, the advantages of B are more than those of A because B fits me better in two ways; First⑧. Second, ⑨.

①人们的第一种观点

②人们的第二种观点

③A的一个优势

④A所隐含的劣势

⑤A的一个大缺点

⑥B的一个明显优势

⑦举例说明B的优势

⑧对我来讲,B的第一个优势

⑨对我来讲,B的第二个优势

雅思写作真题解析:传统购物和网络购物的优劣对比

一、Traditional shopping way 传统的购物方式

(一)Advantages优势

1. Experience goods in person 亲自感受产品

2. Avoid being defrauded 避免上当

3. Bargain with attendant 和服务员砍价

4. Make decision after comparing goods 在比较过产品后决定购买

5. Get goods, receipts, and invoices immediately 可以立即得到货物、 收据 和发票

6. A good chance for family members to communicate via items 是家庭成员通过货物沟通的一个好机会

7. Bridge generation gap and develop same aesthetic concept 解决代沟并培养相同的审美观点

8. A pastime for us to spend leisure time and ease pressure 可以作为一种消遣来打发闲暇时间而且可以缓解压力

9. An opportunity for parents to teach their children how to be thrifty 父母可以借此机会教孩子怎样省钱

10. An opportunity for children to teach their parents how to be fashionable 孩子可以借此机会教父母怎样时尚

(二)Disadvantages劣势

1. Labor-consuming and time-costing 耗体力、费时间

2. The public tastes and styles are unified 公众的品位与风格统一了

3. Shopping expenses are mainly shouldered by men and they will be confronted with more serious economic burden.男性承担了绝大多数的购物费用,他们要面临更为严重的经济负担

4. Buying some unnecessary bargains.买一些不需要的东西。

二、 Other means 其它 方式

(一)Advantages 优势

1. Effective and convenient 高效率、方便

2. Effortlessly comparable 可以不费力气的进行比较

3. Extensive choices on intensive platform在密集的平台上选择广泛的货物

4. Make barter dealing available 使得易货贸易成为了可能

5. Enable consumers to purchase items as a package 使得消费者可以一下买齐所有产品

(二)Disadvantages

1. Extra expenses are required 要花额外的费用

2. Incomplete payment system 不完善的支付系统

3. Adulterated goods 参杂使假的货物

4. Unsuitable for consumers to purchase the goods in eager demand 不适合消费者购买急需的产品

5. Offending copy rights and patents 侵犯版权与专利

6. Pirated misconducts can not be effectively avoided 盗版行为无法有效的避免

7. Booking ticket by e-commerce may delay one’s scheduling 通过电子商务订票会耽误人的安排

8. The information filed in e-commerce websites may reveal one’s privacy 存在电子商务网站的信息会透露隐私

雅思写作 范文 :频换工作的优缺点

Version 114 Some people prefer to stay in the same job for the same company, but others prefer to change jobs frequently. You should use specific reasons to compare the advantages and disadvantages of both sides.

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Introduction( 20 words)

Nowadays very few people intend to go in for a life-time career. Still there

are some advantages to doing so.

Body1( 99 words)

Merits of always taking a position can be examined by three aspects.(topic sentences) First, if you stick at taking a post, all angles of the job will have appeared; after

some time,you will definitely have a good command of it. Consequently you may become

a veteran of the field and earn respect or prestige from others. Second, you can

establish an extensive social connections relating to the field, helping you tear down

most of the barriers standing in the way of your working endeavor. Finally, mistakes

of the routine tasks would be minimized because you have learned the lessons.

Body2 (111 words)

On the other hand, I would like to illustrate the advantages of experiencing different

jobs. (topic sentence) Initially, we look at the issue of bribery. Many high-level staff

are inclined to accept bribes via power in hand. However, if he knows that someone else

will soon take his place, such acts can be avoided. We then look at work motivation.

If one works for the same company for a long time without promotion, he may get sick and

tired of doing the same daily routine. Nonetheless, a manager should have qualities of a

sense of teamwork and the capability of coordination. Therefore, to try various positions

can help you gain ground to be promoted.

Conclusion ( 67 words)

In summary, staying in the same post can cultivate one to cut out for the job but involve

one in a boring career while changing jobs frequently can be both advantageous by keeping

bribery away and providing one with more opportunities of promotion and disadvantageous by

making mistakes occasionally. In my opinion, people should seek a decent and good-paid job and pay little attention to changing it.

雅思写作的四种对比技巧

介绍雅思写作对比技巧是雅思大 作文 写作中的高分 方法 ,因为使用对比可以突出主题,也可以是 文章 更为吸引人。雅思写作对比技巧在雅思大作文写作这种的应用很多,可以把对比应用在事例中,也可以应用在顺序中。

雅思写作的双边讨论型文章一直是老师和学生较为推崇采用的写作结构,除了写作题目本身出题的偏好性 —— 多以两面讨论为主,清晰的结构,多角度的思路更利于学生在较短的时间里构建出符合字数要求和题目立意的文章。但是,笔者在教学中发现,尽管一些学生在规定时间内完成了达到字数的文章,却仍然不能取得理想的分数,与其交流分析后发现,多半是对题目意图理解不够明晰,“言不对题”成为了学生的普遍弊病。许多学生对于“双边”的理解过于笼统,常常抓住题目某个字眼,简单构建赞成和反对的主体结构,或是一味认为“双边”就是“利弊”,因而导致偏题甚至离题。

针对这种现象,写作组的专家分析了近年的考题,对双边讨论型文章的架构进行了较为明确的分类,以帮助学生更好地分析题目,更为准确地构建双边结构。

一、利弊分析

Nowadays, people in some countries can choose to live and work anywhere they want, because of the improvement of the communication technology and transport. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

此类题目中常有利弊字眼,或者在指令部分提出进行利弊对比分析,常见词如“advantage, benefit, usefulness(好处);disadvantage, drawback, limitation(坏处)等”,考生只需对题目细节进行把握,弄清主旨,再构建“好处”—— “坏处”的主体部分,列举观点。

该题主要就“人们可以随意选择生活和工作的地方”的现象进行讨论,考生可多联系社会现状, 总结 利弊即可。

相似考题:

Most countries want to improve standard of living through economic development, however, others think social value is lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages?

二、补充说明

Some people believe that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others think that this has little effect and other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

此类题目特点十分突出,一方面有“the only, the most…”等强调字眼,另一方面提出“other”的其他观点,细想之下,后者似对前者的补充,主体段可先对前者进行承认,但不要承认其绝对性,为后文做好铺垫,在论述另一方面时,主要使用列举法进行说明。

该题是对“如何提高公众健康”的 措施 进行讨论,首先可分析建设体育设施的好处所在,再列举一些其他有效措施,便可以达到两面兼顾又不至于偏颇的目的。

相似考题:

Air travel can only benefit the richest people in the world. The ordinary people can get no advantage with the development of air travel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

三、对立比较

Students at schools and universities learn far more from lessons with teachers than from other sources (such as the Internet, television). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

此类题目的特点是:两方面在某种层面上属于对立关系,可以分别讨论其利弊,以达到比较的效果。就该题而言,“跟老师学还是从其他资源上获得知识”是个老话题,分别讨论教师的作用和其他来源的好处,进行对比便是应对此题的最好办法,有时双方互为优劣,仅提及好处即可。

相似考题:

Some people think that politicians have the greatest influence on the world. Other people, however, believe that scientists have the greatest influence. Discuss both of views and give your opinion.

四、分类说明

Some people think museums should be enjoyable places to attract and entertain young people. Others think the purpose of museums is to educate, not to entertain. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

这类题目常让考生觉得棘手,两个方面似乎都有道理,但处理不好又会“搬起石头砸自己的脚”,前后论述自相矛盾。这个时候,如果能够对题目进行分类说明,便豁然开朗。

该题主要讨论的是“博物馆的功能”是 教育 还是娱乐,科技、自然博物馆及一些主题博物馆如杜莎夫人蜡像馆都是属于后者,而历史、军事乃至革命博物馆就有前者意义。

相似考题:

A hundred years ago, people think that human race is steadily improving in every area of life. Nowadays, there is no certainty of this case. In which areas do you think we have made important progress nowadays? In which areas do you think we still need to make progress?

针对这四种类型的分析方法,考生可利用提供的历年真题进行分析练习,做到“胸有成竹”,在下笔之前有个清晰明确的脉络,做到“事半功倍”。

雅思议论文开头模板

一提到雅思写作模板,有人想到的是一大篇完整的 文章 ,其中有少许空缺,用来填上某个特定话题的特定内容,一篇及格的雅思文章即出炉。其实这是对模板的误解。最有效且值得初学者模仿的内容,是 句子 。我为大家分享20种经典的雅思大 作文 开头句模板。

雅思大作文模板之20种经典开头句分型

1、According to the first graph, it can be seen that ______________, it can also be concluded from it that ______________.

2、There is an interesting and instructive picture which goes like this: ______________.

3、Nowadays there is a growing concern over ______________. Many people like ______________,

while others are inclined to ______________.

4、Nowadays, it is common to ______________. Many people like ______________ because ______________. Besides, ______________.

5、 ______________, just like many other things, are preferred by ______________. While being attacked by the idea that ______________, some people consider ______________. They point that ______________.

6、Everything has two sides and ______________ is not an exception, it has both advantages and disadvantages.

7、For years ______________ had been viewed as ______________. But people are taking a fresh look at it now.

8、It has stipulated by the government that ______________. To this stipulation, many people respond actively because ______________.

9、______________ is a common occurrence in our daily life. Whatever we do, ______________ can't be avoided.

10、______________ has become a hot topic among people, especially among the young, and heated debates are right on their way.

11、Recently, ______________ has become the focus of the society, and in this way.. People swarm to ______________.

12、______________ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought us a lot of benefits but created some serious problems as well.

13、Man is now facing a big problem-______________, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ______________ second, ______________.

14、Nowadays more and more people are beginning to be aware of the seriousness of ______________.

15、It is only during the last years that man has become generally aware that ______________.

16、There is an old saying, ______________. It's the experience of our forefathers, however, it is correct in many cases ever today.

17、The English proverb says, ______________. This is quite true because ______________.

18、______________ is now______________, and at the same time ______________. These two factors have caused ______________. Then what shall we do to solve ______________ in the face of such a situation.

19、One of our ancient philosophers said, ______________. Chinese people have always been holding this idea to be one of their standards of morality.

20、One of the great early writers said that ______________. If this is true, the present situation should make us ponder over ______________.

雅思大作文:the old age is more valued , while in some cultures the youth is more valued

雅思大作文题目:In some cultures, the old age is more valued (valuable), while in some cultures the youth is more valued (more useful). Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

作文 范文 :

There have been drastic and constant changes of societies and values in the global context for recent decades. Therefore, some traditional cultures regard old age valuable for their civilization whereas other utilitarian ones may deem the youth, energetic and willing to accept challenges, to more precious.

What the senior brings about to all areas is mainly experience and the sense of security to all. It is well acknowledged that the aged, whichever field they have served, have accumulated more knowledge and skills out of years practice. They may thus grasp some principles that can be utilized in guiding the next generation to cope with matters and, even having undergone modern technological revolutions, ought to be applicablein most cases. Apart from this apparent benefit, another must not be neglected. Everyone without exception goes through the aging process and it is not hard to imagine what it would be like if a society viewed the elderly to be useless and exerted little of its resources in supporting them. Nothing could alleviate the anxiety of the middle-aged and even young adults about their retirement benefits and eventually fade away the sense of security, followed by some possible increase of crime rate.

Cultures think high of the youth, however, can see benefits on social production and renovations. In the first place, the youth are generally way more dynamic, which offer sufficient labor force to carry out productive activities, and if a greater reward and respect can be given and shown to them, this force can be more active and rewarding in return. Moreover, they generally and more quickly can embrace changes in work and life. This indicates the removal of obstacles in implementing challenging policies, promoting certain businesses, developing new technologies, and boosting economy afterwards within a relatively short period.

To my mind, a justifiable government should keep the balance between the pension for the past devotion of the elder and the incentive for the current contribution from the young, to realize social justice and security.

雅思大作文:the world of work is changing rapidly

雅思大作文题目:The world of work is changing rapidly and people cannot depend on the same job or same conditions of work for life. Discuss the possible causes for this rapid change and give your suggestions on how people should prepare for work in the future?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

作文范文:

In my country, people used to be constrained to a single workplace for lifelong by social security or welfare system. However, this is no longer the case nowadays when people are free to choose their occupation or have to adapt themselves in different positions.

People now change their works and environment based on several reasons, subjectively and objectively. To pursue a better career or break through a bottleneck, rather than secure a stable income, young people usually opt to change their job. In addition, graduates with little working experience have not developed a clear perspective of their life career. It is reasonable for them to be exposed to various workplaces, orienting to the society and trying to find out their strengths and interests. On the negative side, employers have to qualify themselves every couple of years, or else they may get fired and are forced to get other positions. This is because modern technologies have been revolutionizing since the advent of computer and internet and employers from different industries have to adopt the radically changing needs of the market. They thus must recruit those with advanced skills and specialties and cast out those left behind in order to meet the demand.

For better future career and greater possibilities of being always employed, people can take the following pieces of advice. It is certainly feasible that people exert their lifelong time in acquiring new knowledge and skills. This is especially true and cruel for the veteran workers who may find their specialized knowledge outdated comparing to that brought by the fresh and even new graduates. It is only a matter of attitude of being studious and diligent, otherwise laziness would eventually take its toll. Another piece of suggestion is to stand on solid ground before a job-hop and a promotion, which is mainly aiming at those regarding themselves already fully-prepared to get higher position. If one’s strong sense of responsibility is not fostered, maturity not or ability to tackle problems not developed, the newly-promoted will suffer from both disobedience of reports and doubts of bosses.

To sum up, the swift shifting societies offer people less chance to stay vocationally unchanged. Therefore, the path of a successful career would be more even if one is willing to tgeready and embrace.

雅思大作文:the family have a powerful influence on children 's life

雅思大作文题目:Although the family have a powerful influence on children 's life, the influence outside from home isa bigger part for his/her development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

作文范文:

It is known to people from both western and eastern world that some certain features always run within each family, unlikely to alter even after people have become independent from the original family for long. Therefore, I hardly agree with the indication that the life outside from family has greater impact for people.

Schooling and social experience undeniably affect peoplein various aspects. The most obvious one lies in the environment in whichschool students and social persons have more chances to acquire more knowledge and gain richer experience because of far more sources of input, from friends, teachers, bosses, colleagues, acquaintances and even strangers. People thus have to foster a variety of relationships and learn to cope with them skilfully. With extensive knowledge and harmonious relationships, a better development maybe maintained and furthered.

However, the family education, or parenting to be exact, turns out to be more profound and root. In the pursuit of knowledge, one has to foster habits like being able to concentrate and to expand quality attention span at the very beginning of school years. These are required by school authorities and sadly and generally realized at home as teachers can only focus on the overall performance of the class rather than each very individual. Some may argue about private sectors and that leads to the second point, the power of money. The amount of resources that one can utilize not only decide the standard of living, which may support private tutoring for better learning habits but also may formulate his or her value towards wealth, which in the long run, intentionally or unexpectedly is passed to the offspring. As well as that, children’s value towards people, right and wrong and even goal of life is deeply affected.

In conclusion, I don’t agree with the opinion that others factors influence more than family itself as the value is formed there and it can be recognized in nearly all aspects in the later part of life.

1)场景或background信息,即题目中出现的phenomenon。

2)某些人的观点(some people’s opinion),这部分在改写文章首段时可根据实际情况选择是否需要。

3)个人观点,这一部分在有些文章的开首段中也可以不要。

大作文要求字数至少达到250字,在写作中考虑到字数的合理安排,第一段比较好写3-5句话,大约45字左右,并且切忌在第一段就把outline的内容都说完。因此大作文开头段方式通常有以下几种情况:

a)题目中包含了背景信息(background information),有时也出现一些人的观点,并且题目中字数较多。这种情况下比较保险的办法是将题目中的背景信息及一些人的观点重新表达(paraphrase),可以做:

●某些近义词互换

●主谓宾<=>主系表

●主动语态<=>被动语态

Example:

At present, it is hard for college students to find jobs. Many people claim that college teachers should give priority to practicalcourses like computer science and business over such traditional ones as history and geography. To what extent do you agree?

→ The number of college graduates is surging while a substantial proportion of them have difficulties in finding employment after their graduation. Numerous people blame this on the university education and believe that more emphasis should be laid on practical courses such as computer science and business than on traditional courses like history and geography. 其后再加考生自己的观点即可。

b)题目中包含了背景信息,有时出现一些人的观点,但题目中字数较少,若直接重新表达,字数凑不到45字左右。这种情况下我们有2种开头方式来保证字数。

◆把笼统信息细节化即通过举例来解释说明题目中的背景信息。(比较好衔接得自然一点)

Example:

International tourism has become a big industry in the world. Do the benefits outweigh the problems?

→The acceleration of globalization and high-tech development contributes to International tourism’s gaining momentum virtually all over the world. Each year,millions of tourists from other countries swarm into china to appreciate the scenery and Chinese traditional culture. 其后加入考生个人观点即可。

◆回顾历史,古今对比。

Example:

International tourism has become a big industry in the world. Do the benefits outweigh the problems?

→Prior to the early 1900s, the proportion of people traveling abroad was considerably low and the majority of them preferred domestic travel. However, the advent of the motorized flight has greatly changed our life and it makes international traveling more convenient. International tourism is gaining momentumand has become a big industry. 其后加入考生个人观点即可。

c)题目中仅出现一部分人的观点,而没有背景信息。这种情况下,我们可以根据这部分人的观点所涉及的information在开首段附加对背景信息的描述。

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The best way to solve the world’s environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel. Do you agree or disagree?

→In the process of industrialization and urbanization, the scope of environmental problem facing the world is getting immense. From Mexico City and New York to Singapore and China new solutions to this problem are being proposed, tried and implemented. Some people believe increasing the price of fuel is the best approach to this problem. 其后加入考生个人观点即可。

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雅思大作文开头怎么写能拿高分?对于雅思大作文的开头,大家写起来都较为固定和模板化,而这些模板往往不光词汇简单,句型结构也不够复杂,因此很难从考官那里取得高分。那么雅思作文怎么写能拿高分呢?比如,请看下面这道考试的原题:With the development of computer technology, more and more people are working and studying at home. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?根据通常的雅思写作模板,作文的开头由三个部分构成,即“改写题目或背景+双边观点+我个人认为或这篇文章的观点”。雅思写作答案中最常见的内容结构为:近来越来越多的人在家里工作和学习。一方面,有人认为这给人们的生活带来积极影响。另一方面,有人认为,它对我们的生活是不利的。最后,这篇文章不仅讨论了双边的观点,并且也给出了“我自己”的观点。这样的内容和结构,往往很难把雅思文章写得受到考官的认可。不仅词汇并无良好的表现,句式结构也过分简单。在现实的考试中,这样的开头往往决定了写作分的命运。其实,好的文章不仅体现在文章结构上,用词和表达都应当有所斟酌,这里给大家介绍两则词组的表达,帮助大家取得写作的高分。pale into insignificancePale 这个单词大家肯定都认识,是形容词,意为苍白的。但是大家可能还不知道这个单词也可以做动词,表示变得苍白的,如果再加上 insignificance,就表示:变得不重要。当这个词组连接 when set against something(与......相比),就能够表达出一个很好的句式结构。其准确的用法和应用如下:名词A+pale into insignificance when set against +名词B。意为:与B相比,A微不足道具体举个例子:The shortcomings of computer technology pale into insignificance when set against the great benefits it brings to us - convenience in daily life and office work, and cost saving.日常生活中和办公室工作的方便以及成本的节约是电脑科技带给我们的好处,与此相比,电脑科技的缺点微不足道。这样的表达是不是高大上了?有时,也可以在原本的句式结构上,进行一定程度的调整,让句式看起来更高级。比如,使用 compared to + 名词 替换 when set against +名词 结构。当然,compared to +名词 可以放置于句首,在这个句子结构之上个性化写出自己的句式。那么,下面我们再看另一个句式结构的表达。Much ink has been spilled about + 名词Ink 指墨水,spill 指泼洒,这个句式的字面意思指把笔墨泼洒在某物上。当然,其引申的意思就不止于此了,意为对某事展开了讨论,可以用于替代常用的模板句式 there is a debate about something。再举个例子:Much ink has been spilled about the impact of computer technology on daily life since the application has been popular in the community.自从电脑科技在社会中广泛应用,它对日常生活的影响引起了广泛的争论。这样的写法是不是显得诚意满满呢?那么,高分开头究竟该如何写呢?其实,我们可以把两个句式结构融合在一起,就可以得到一个高大上的开头了。如下:Much ink has been spilled about the impact of computer technology on daily life since the application has been popular in the fact, the shortcomings of computer technology pale into insignificance when set against the great benefits it brings to us - convenience in daily life and office work, and cost saving.在第二个句子开头处的 in fact,表达突出和强调。在这个开头中,首句表达文章所讨论的问题,类似于之前的背景改写。第二句是强调好处大于缺点,所以给出了文章的观点。虽然仅有两句,但是已经给出一个开头应该介绍的内容:文章的话题加文章观点。而且,文章的句式是不是也并不显得简单,反而高大上呢?那么,根据所讲的句式结构,同学们可以自行练习以下两个问题:Q1Multicultural societies, where people of different ethnic groups live together, can bring more benefits than drawbacks to a what extent do you agree or disagree?Much ink has been spilled about the merits and demerits of cultural diversity due to the escalating trend of traveling fact, the shortcomings of multiculturalism pale into significance when set against the great benefits of people think that increasing the number of police officers on the street is the only effective way to reduce crime. Do you agree or disagree?Much ink has been spilled about training substantial police forces in the hope of improving the security of the general public due to the soaring proportion of crimes, while solving this problem is likely to need more than a simple rise in the number of police officers.是否注意到,第二个问题的开头不仅仅有教过的句式,还插入了 in the hope of 。事实上,这些都可以自由组合和发挥。根据题目的具体意义所表达的合适通顺的开头,才是文章最好的开始。说了那么多,是不是瞬间觉得雅思大作文再也不是难事儿?如果你还想对上述问题了解更多,可以购买新航道雅思英语图书,针对中国学生的考试思路,全面覆盖各项考点,对难点进行重点分析,快速突破提分瓶颈!

雅思写作方法的掌握要练习写雅思真题。只有练了雅思真题才能对于雅思的出题思路和题目构成有清晰完整的了解。在雅思写作方法的练习的时候要注意应该在规定时间内完成。只有在有时间限制的压力下写作,考生才能在考试的时候发挥自如。在练习写作的时候也不一定非得要写完整的文章,有时候可以进行段落论证的写作。比如,花时间练一练开头段或结尾段的写作。有时把文章分解了写可以更能磨练写作技巧。有时候也可以专门练习某种论证手法的写作,甚至对于常用的句型可以进行造句练习。在练习频率上,基本应该保持两天写一篇以上。取其所长补之不足。如果只是一味埋头苦练的话,那只能提高速度而在雅思写作方法上不一定会有长足的进步。只有看了好的文章,考生才会知道应该往哪方面努力以及自己的文章到底有什么不足。最重要的是要看考官写的例文,比如剑桥大学出的Cambridge IELTS 2以及Cambridge IELTS 3等。看的时候不要只看懂就行,而要着眼于三个方面:考官范文是如何提出观点并进行论证的,运用了哪些论证手法;范文是怎么安排段落的,段落之间以及句子之间是怎么连接在一起的,运用了哪些衔接手段;范文里有什么精彩的词、词组和句型是值得我们模仿的。雅思写作方法如果考生能够举一反三,仔细思考并且适当借鉴的话,那么看一篇就会有一篇的受益。除了考官范文以外,其它的一些优秀范文也可以参考。各种精彩段落,包括雅思阅读文章里面的一些论证方法和有用表达也可以成为学习的对象。写作贵在发现不足加之修改。有时候考生越看范文会越觉得郁闷甚至沮丧,因为发现自己的低水平文章和高分作文之间似乎存在着不可逾越的巨大鸿沟。要想跨越这条鸿沟,弥补其中的差距,关键在多修改。这种雅思写作方法考生应该自己先在规定时间内完成作文,然后对照范文,看看自己作文中存在的问题。有没有审题错误?结构是否混乱?有没有表达不清的地方?然后仔细琢磨一下,范文是怎么展开论证的?看数遍范文以后可以试着根据刚才学习范文的体会和收获来修改自己原先写过的文章,把论证不够充分的地方重新论证一下,关联不当的地方修补一下,错误表达改正过来。如上所述,有关提高雅思写作方法的相关介绍,需要同学们实践方能取得成效。想要提高自己的写作水平不仅需要多掌握雅思写作方法而且要不断地练习。因此,雅思写作方法归纳为:多读,多练,多改。

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很多同学都喜欢背诵网上泛滥的雅思作文模板,考试时直接套用,但是这些模板并不能帮助你得到高分,考官看得多了,一看就知道是套用的模板,自然不会给高分。

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