慎小嶷除了《十天突破雅思写作》还有一个6-9分范文(书皮都差不多,只不过《十天写作》主色是绿的,6-9分范文主色是蓝的),里面全是范文和对应范文的解析,应该合你胃口~剑8的我看过,剑9不知道有没有。不过从作文的角度来讲剑8剑9差不了多少吧,作文题目分类就那么多~ 另外还有一个《雅思8分万能作文》,范文也不少,特别推荐小作文。他的大作文写的感觉不是很主流(即没有固定的套路,很随性,看起来感觉水平很高的样子),可以说是比较有特点,行文方式基本各不相同,看你喜不喜欢了。 《雅思8分万能作文》的PDF我在太傻上下过,后来又买的纸质的就删了。。。慎小嶷的书买的纸质的~
雅思写作需要做全面的准备和练习,才能在考场上取得理想的成绩。这不仅需要参考高分写作模版,还需要雅思写作中常用的套句,也会给写作上添分加彩。今天为大家整理了雅思大作文常用套句,供备考中的考生们参考练习:首句 debate these days draws our attention about goes without saying is no avoiding the fact has been a long-term dispute over found their popularity and acceptance among . in my country have become the focus of public three-year-old children know about severe problems broughtby in cities around the . It wasn’t untilthat9. is increasingly becoming the focus of government and citizen’s concern around the . When economy is running on the right way for a relatively long period, and commercialization is sweeping across the world, the issue of has been mentioned and emphasized in our society more frequently than ever . It is not uncommon these days to12. there is a belief that13. It is reported that14. Over the last half century, the pace of change in has increased beyond our wildest expectations.套句集合的全部链接,大家点击之后就可以看到详细内容了。对于这些雅思写作套句的应用,大家可以在自己的雅思写作备考当中根据自己的实际情况进行更加有针对性的练习,以便使自己更好的应对雅思写作考试。
我用的是慎小嶷十天突破雅思写作。上面列举了许多范文,并且都有讲解。还包括写得不好的雅思作文以及为什么不好的分析,很有用
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Who should be most responsible for children's education? Give your opinion and reasons for it. You should write at least 250 words. You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence. Sample Answer It seems to me that there is a clear-cut answer to this question. Although in the early years of a child's life parents are the principal educators, that role is soon assumed very largely by the child's teachers. Even elder brothers and sisters, who may give good advice, can never take the place of teachers in molding a child's mind. First and foremost, teachers know best in terms of education. They are professional educators, and as such they are better equipped with expertise in teaching. It is in schools, too, that children make friends and learn how to act in a socially responsible manner. Teachers know best how to organize, motivate and discipline their students. Furthermore, as children spend most of their time in schools, teachers have more influence on them than their parents do. Parents, on the other hand, are mostly either too busy to spend time with their children, or are ignorant of the right way to educate them. This is not to say that parents can shirk (refuse to take) their responsibility for educating their children. Parenting is an important factor that shapes competency and character formation in children. Failure to take such responsibility constitutes delinquency as parents. Nevertheless, given the professional qualifications of teachers and the time they spend with their students, it is clear that the overwhelming burden of educating children falls upon the shoulders of teachers.
这个可以上无忧雅思上去了解一下情况
网上有很多雅思作文范文,同学们在备考雅思写作部分的时候也很喜欢背诵范文,把这些范文套用到自己的写作当中,但是范文背得多,也不一定能帮助你得高分。
分享一个雅思20年写作名师的大作文框架或者说文章结构 Organization。
Rephrase question sentence + both sides
——题目改写+正反方观点
• 段落1行文结构:
Nowadays, many people…
At the same time, however, there is some uncertainty…
In this essay, I will review the issue to seek a conclusion that…
(此类套话,要小心使用)
• 注意:改写问题句 (rephrase question sentence), 不应该有单词重复
• 每一篇大作文都建有立场,万一没有可以写:(整个文章的主题句)
In this essay I will review both sides of the debate to seek a conclusion.
• 段落2行文结构:
To begin with, …
Moreover, …
In addition, …
• 段落3行文结构:
On the other hand, however, …
Furthermore, …
Consequently, …
扩展论点同paragraph2。
both sides + my opinion,论点总结+自己的立场,同时跟其他一样,结论段也是三个句子。
• 段落4行文结构:
To summarize, there is no doubt that…
Meanwhile, …
In the final analysis, therefore, one can conclude that…
• 结尾段必须包括三个部分正方观点小结,反方观点小结,和个人观点,注意个人观点表述必须清晰明了,可以同意一个立场,也可以同意或不同意双方立场,言之有理,顺理成章即可。
雅思大作文的行文结构,只是提供了一个总体框架;雅思写作中,除了搭建框架外,好的词句积累同样非常重要。
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1.词汇的背诵 这个毫无疑问,大家都非常清楚,比如说上升的词我们可能会背诵很多如:increase、rise、climb、grow、recover等等.
2.句式的掌握 小作文句式的背诵与掌握是非常重要的.举个简单的例子,比如说我们想表达A在B方面从哪一年到哪一年急剧增长,那么这个时候我们就需要牢牢记住我们至少可以用两种句式来做,也就是一个是副词修饰动词。
3.写作的重点
你好,为你准备了2012年10月20日的雅思写作范文,供参考,以拓宽自己的写作思路。 Nowadays it is more convenient and easier for people to travel to other countries, is it development a positive or negative effect?参考范文:Never before was travelling to alien countries so convenient and popular as in this century. This phenomenon is partially attributed to improved technology and cheap flight tickets. Facing this travel frenzy, some are concerned that it will bring about too many side effects whilst others insist that is should be supported and , cross-border travel has more downsides than one. Firstly, the carbon dioxide planes emitted is reported to be disproportionately more than that emitted by other transportation means. The carbon dioxide will lead to ozone layer thinning and thereby increase the probability of people contracting skin cancer. Moreover, being easier and more convenient to travel among countries means that some criminals could flee to other countries after committing hideous crime. This will pose a threat to local security and community , the downsides cannot overshadow its upsides. For starters, travelling around the world with more ease could expand individuals’ horizons and stimulate their love of life and they will be more productive at work in the future. Moreover, companies could visit foreign markets more conveniently than before and as a result, they could locate potential target market and sell goods there or buy materials from there if the price is competitively enough. If a company could flourish this way, employees will benefit and the society in which companies are operating will be more stable and harmonies. Last but not least, if more and more people are afforded opportunities to go to other countries, there will be less misunderstanding and more respect among countries. All these will contribute to a diverse but harmonious sum up, despite the numerous drawbacks mentioned above, travelling to other countries with more convenience and ease is, by and large, a positive development.
Should education and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services? The improvement of the life level due to the economic development has led people to focus more on their spiritual life, with their education and healthcare inclusive, but who has to be responsible for the cost of education and healthcare has been raised onto heated discussion. Health care and education, two of the basic elements in social life, are always in the concern of the public. Some people suggest that the service in these two fields should be paid by the government and be free to the public; while others believe it to be the duty of the people to pay on themselves. As to me, the coverage on education and healthcare should be made the duty of the government while leaving some special demands to be burdened by individuals. Government free provision of education and healthcare can demonstrate their responsibility in serving the people. Having fulfilled their obligations to the country in the form of taxes, citizens have the right to enjoy the service in return from the government, with education and health care being the two basic ones. Also, as the duty carrier in promoting social development, by guaranteeing the right of education and health care, the government are enabled to encourage citizens to make more contributions to the society. Government’s investment on these two fields is beneficial to ensure social equality. Being free of charge, every citizen can take advantage of these social services, without the worries about being treated unfairly due to their lack of social resources, such as their social status and human network. Besides, this will be helpful to reduce the difference between the rich and the poor, at least in these two basic rights, creating a more harmonious social atmosphere. Admittedly, if the citizens are wealthy enough, or when they demand some special service, or when the government is too limited in its budget, individuals’ sharing some of the cost may also seem to be reasonable. However, rare cases of particular requirements do not represent the general pursuits of the public, and limitation in budget does not free the government of its accountability. To sum up, government should provide free education and healthcare to the public and pay the cost. Only when people are better educated and healthier in physiques, can the society be more harmonious in atmosphere and dynamic in development.这是我在雅思救星上看到的一篇雅思作文范文,相信对你有用,你也可以去看看其它的范文。
2011雅思小作文写作万能模板1、通过第一个曲线图,我们可以知道____,也说明了结果是___According to the first graph, it can be seen that ______________, it can also be concluded from it that 、一张有趣、有教育意义的、(内容)的图片(这句模板在雅思小作文中的应用非常的广泛。)There is an interesting and instructive picture which goes like this: 、当前有一张涉及______的增长曲线图,许多人______,然而其他人倾向于___Nowadays there is a growing concern over ______________. Many people like ______________, while others are inclined to 、目前,共同之处是_________,许多人喜欢______因为_______除此之外还由于_____Nowadays, it is common to ______________. Many people like______________ because ______________. Besides, 、(图表所示)_____,就像许多其他事物,被____更加喜爱,然而这一观点正被________所抨击,一些人认为_________,他们指出_________________________, just like many other things, are preferred by being attacked by the idea that ______________, some people consider ______________. They point that according to the chart```2 the date lead us to the conclusion that```3 the date show```4 the tree diagram reveals how```5 the figures show```6 this is a cure graph which describes the trend of```7 the pie graph depicts```8 the graph provides some interesting date regrarding```9 the table shows the changes in the number of ``` over the periodfrom ```to ```10 as is shown in the table ```11 from the table ,we can clearly see that ```12 this table shows the changing proportion of X and Y from ``` to ````13 the graph,presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in```14 as can be seen from the grape ,the two curves show the flutuation of ```15 over the period from ```to ```the```remained in the year between ```and ```.17 in the 3 years spanning from 2005 through the number of ``` remained steady from ```to ````.19 the number sharply went up to ```20 the percentage of ``` stayed the same between ``` and ```21 the percentage remainede steady at```22 the percentage of ```is sightly large than that there is not a great deal of differece between ```and ```24 the graphs show a three fold increase in the number of ```25 ```decreased year by year while ```increased there is an upward trend in the number of ```27 a considerable increase occurred from ```to ```28 from ```to ```the rate of decrease slow from this year on,there was a gradual declinel reduction in the```reaching a figure be similar to ```be the same as31 there are a lot similarities between ```and ```32 the difference between X and Y lies in ```雅思学术性写作考试中Task 1 考查考生解释,说明信息的能力,这些信息通常体现在图解,表格和插图中,这一部分的模式化程度更高一些。下类50个句式是雅思留学类考生需要背诵的最最基础的句子。请同学们自己背诵。在写作小作文的时候,也可以作为参考材料。1. the table illustrates the changes in the number of...over the period from...to...该表格描述了在...年之...年间...数量的变化。2. the bar chart illustrates that... 该柱状图展示了...3. the graph provides some interesting data regarding...该图为我们提供了有关...有趣数据。4. the diagram shows (that)... 该图向我们展示了...5. the pie graph depicts (that).... 该圆形图揭示了... is a cure graph which describes the trend of...这个曲线图描述了...的趋势。7. the figures/statistics show (that)... 数据(字)表明...8. the tree diagram reveals how...该树型图向我们揭示了如何...9. the data/statistics show (that)...该数据(字)可以这样理解...10. the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that...这些数据资料令我们得出结论...11. as is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table...如图所示...12. according to the chart/figures... 根据这些表(数字)...13. as is shown in the table... 如表格所示...14. as can be seen from the diagram, great changes have taken place in...从图中可以看出,...发生了巨大变化。15. from the table/chart/diagram/figure, we can see clearly that...or it is clear/apparent from the chart that...从图表我们可以很清楚(明显)看到...16. this is a graph which illustrates...这个图表向我们展示了...17. this table shows the changing proportion of a & b from...to...该表格描述了...年到...年间a与b的比例关系。18. the graph, presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in...该图以圆形图形式描述了...总的趋势。19. this is a column chart showing... 这是个柱型图,描述了...20. as can be seen from the graph, the two curves show the fluctuation of...如图所示,两条曲线描述了...的波动情况。21. over the period from...to...the...remained level.在...至...期间,...基本不变。22. in the year between...and... 在...年到...期间...23. in the 3 years spanning from 1995 through 1998...1995年至1998三年里...24. from then on/from this time onwards... 从那时起...25. the number of...remained steady/stable from (month/year) to (month/year)....月(年)至...月(年)...的数量基本不变。26. the number sharply went up to... 数字急剧上升至...27. the percentage of...stayed the same between...and......至...期间...的比率维持不变。28. the figures peaked at...in(month/year)...的数目在...月(年)达到顶点,为...29. the percentage remained steady at... 比率维持在...30. the percentage of...is slightly larger/smaller than that of......的比例比...的比例略高(低)。31. there is not a great deal of difference between...and......与...的区别不大。32. the graphs show a threefold increase in the number of...该图表表明...的数目增长了三倍。33. ..decreased year by year while...increased steadily....逐年减少,而...逐步上升。……太多啦,你给个邮箱,我发给你吧!
很多同学都喜欢背诵网上泛滥的雅思作文模板,考试时直接套用,但是这些模板并不能帮助你得到高分,考官看得多了,一看就知道是套用的模板,自然不会给高分。
议论文是以议论为主要表达方式,通过摆事实,讲道理,直接表达作者的观点和主张的常用文体。接下来给大家分享英语议论文模板及范文,供参考。
Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题) Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧)
Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点) Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2-3个赞成的理由)
However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点) Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2-3个反对的理由)
Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点)
Nowadays,there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)___作文题目______. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____. Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive
aspects as follows. Firstly, ___优点一______. And secondly ___优点二_____.
Just As a popular saying goes, "every coin has two sides", __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To
begin with, ___缺点一______. In addition, ____缺点二______.
To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same
time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.
Shall we send children to study abroad?
With more and more people becoming rich in recent years, it is a new tendency for them to send their children to study abroad. But I don’t think it is a good idea. First of all, children are too young to look after themselves. Second, the language barrier is a serious problem. Many children are not proficient in the foreign language before going abroad. As a result, they have difficulty in understanding what the native speakers are talking about. Third, they may get into trouble when dealing with various situations for lack of knowledge of the customs in the strange land. Furthermore, the cost of living is much higher than that in our country, which might cause a heavy burden to the family. #p#分页标题#e#
In conclusion, there are more disadvantages in sending children to study abroad. So, we’d better not do it.
写英语议论文时,有么有万能的写作模板可以套用?下面是我给大家整理的议论文英语作文模板,供大家参阅!
导入:
第1段:Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文:
第2段:There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因)
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势) 结论:
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论) オ
导入:
第1段:提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
正文:
第2段:Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法)
结论:
第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法)
导入:
第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对) The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句,承上启下)
正文:
第2段:First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的理由)
结论:
第3段:In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段,构成"总-分-总"结构)
导入:
第1段:Recently we've had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题) Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧)
正文:
第2段:Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点) The reasons are listed as follows. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由)
第3段:However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点)
Here are the reasons. In the first place... What's more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由)
结论:
第4段:Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点) オ
Dear Editor:
[引出话题] I’m a senior three student. I’m writing to tell you my opinion on whethermiddle school students can go to school with mobile phones. [赞成]I think they can do that. Because students can keep in touch with their friends and family wherever they are. Besides, the mobile phone is a way to have fun.
[反对] However, every coin has 2 sides. There are some problems with using mobile phones. The ring of phones can disturb teachers and students in the classroom. Another students is that some students can spend too much time and money on phone calls and sending messages.
[个人观点] In conclusion, I suggest students not use phones in the classroom. Also, as it is expensive, the owner should take good care of it.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
英语作文是可以提前积累一些模板的,在考试的时候套用这些句型,可以提高写作速度,也可以确保句式的准确性。下面是英语议论文的万能模板及范文,速看!
英语议论文写作模板一
recently the issue of whether or not______(讨论话题) has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public. there are two major arguments that can be made for_________. for one thing, __________can bring ____ to_____________(优点 一 )。 for another, it is widely hold that people usually ____when ________________________________(优点二)。
but we must not lose sight of the fact that there are also drawbacks to__________, among which are ____________(列举缺点)。 for instance, it can be __________to _____________(举例说明)。 in addition, many people find it ________(形容词)to _______________(第二个缺点)
when asked to __________, i tend to ____________. this is because i _______________(原因 一 )。 furthermore, _______________________(原因二)。 finally, ______________(原因三)。
英语议论文写作模板二
the effects ___________ has produced on____________ can be boiled down to two major ones.
first , __________________(影响 一 )。 more importantly, ________________(影响二)。 hence, i believe that we will see a ____________(提出展望)/ nevertheless, i do not think we will see a ______(或反面展望)
there are numerous reasons why ____, and i would like to explore a few of the most important ones here. the first is that the more(比较级)_____, the more (比较级)。 in addition, we all agree that________________________(第二个原因)
In recent years, college students find it increasingly difficult to get a job. It sounds strange since young college students are usually intelligent, well-educated phenomenon, aspirant and eager to bring their talent into full play. Then what underlies the strange phenomenon?
近几年,大学生发觉找工作越来越难了。这听起来很奇怪,因为年轻的大学生通常是聪明的,受过良好教育,上进和渴望他们的才华得到充分发挥的。那么,是什么引起这一奇怪现象呢?
There are several reasons for this. To begin with, nowadays college students aim too high. All they want are “good” jobs which could offer good salary, comfortable working conditions, high social status among others. Consequently, most college students are unwilling to accept vacant jobs they consider not “good” enough. Another reason is that there is a big gap between the majors some students study in school and the demands of vacant jobs. So companies think some students are not fit for the jobs.
有很多原因可以解释。首先,现在大学生的要求太高了。他们想要的是能提供较好的薪酬,舒适的工作环境,较高的社会地位的好工作。结果,大部分的大学生都不愿意接受他们认为不够好的空缺职位。另一个原因是一些学生在校学习的专业和空缺职位的需求有很大的差距。所以企业认为有些学生不适合那些工作。
Solution to the problem requires efforts on both the society and the students. The companies should value the students, talent and knowledge while the latter should not merely aim at material gains. They should be down-to–earth in building up their career. Furthermore, they should face their weak points so as to improve themselves and be more competent.
解决这一问题需要社会和学生的共同努力。企业应该看重学生,才能以及知识,而学生不应该只着眼于物质利益。他们应该脚踏实地的建立自己的职业生涯。另外,他们应该面对他们的弱点从而提高自己,使自己更有能力。
一、引出开头1:It is well-known to us that……(我们都知道……)==As far as my knowledge is concerned, …( 就我所知…)2:Recently the problem of…… has been brought into focus. ==Nowadays there is a growing concern over ……(最近……问题引起了关注)3:Nowadays(overpopulation)has become a problem we have to face.(现今,人口过剩已成为我们不得不面对的问题)4:Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.(互联网已在我们的生活扮演着越来越重要的角色,它给我们带来了许多好处但也产生了一些严重的问题)5:With the rapid development of science and technology,more and more people believe that……(随着科技的迅速发展,越来越多的人认为……)6:It is a common belief that……==It is commonly believed that……(人们一般认为……)7:A lot of people seem to think that……(很多人似乎认为……)8:It is universally acknowledged that + 句子(全世界都知道...)二、表达不同观点1:People's views on……vary from person to person. Some hold that……However, others believe that……(人们对……的观点因人而异,有些人认为……然而其他人却认为……)2:People may have different opinions on……(人们对……可能会持有不同见解)3:Attitudes towards (drugs)vary from person to person.==Different people hold different attitudes towards(failure)(人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异)4:There are different opinions among people as to……(对于……人们的观点大不相同)三、表示结尾1:In short, it can be said that……(总之,他的意思是……)2:From what has been mentioned above, we can come to the conclusion that……(从上面提到的,我们可以得出结论……)3:Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally/reasonably come to the conclusion that……(把所有的这些因素加以考虑,我们自然可以得出结论……)4:Hence/Therefore, we'd better come to the conclusion that……(因此,我们最好的出这样的结论……)5:There is no doubt that (job-hopping)has its drawbacks as well as merits.(毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点)6:All in all, we cannot live without……,but at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.(总之,我们没有……无法生活,但同时我们必须寻求新的解决办法来面对可能出现的新问题)四、提出建议1:It is high time that we put an end to the (trend).(该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了)2:There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of……(毫无疑问,对……问题应予以足够重视)3:Obviously ,if we want to do something … it is essential that……(显然,如果我们想要做么事,很重要的是……)4:Only in this way can we ……(只有这样,我们才能……)5:Sparenoeffortto+V(不遗余力的)五、预示后果1:Obviously,if we don't control the problem, the chances are that……will lead us in danger.(很明显,如果我们不能控制这一问题,很有可能我们会陷入危险)2:No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that ……(毫无疑问,除非我们采取有效措施,否则我们很可能会……)3:It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation(很紧迫的是应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展)六、表示论证1:From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second.(在我看来,支持第一种观点比第二种更有道理)2:I cannot entirely agree with the idea that……(我无法完全同意这一观点)3:As far as I am concerned/In my opinion,……(就我来说……)4:I sincerely believe that……==I am greatly convinced (that)子句.(我真诚地相信……)5:Finally, to speak frankly, there is also a more practical reason why ……(最后,坦率地说,还有另外一个实际的原因……)七、给出原因1:The reason why + 句子 ~~~ is that + 句子 (...的原因是...) 2:This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons .First,…….Second,…….Third,……。这一现象存在有很多原因的,第一……第二……第三……3:For one thing,…… For another thing,…… ==On the one hand,……On the other hand……一方面……另一方面……4:I quite agree with the statement that……The reasons are chiefly as follows.我十分赞同这一论述,即……。其主要原因如下。八、列出解决办法和批判错误观点做法1:The best way to solve the troubles is……解决这些麻烦的最好办法是……2:As far as something is concerned,……就某事而言,……3;It is obvious that……很显然……4:It may be true that……but it doesn't mean that……可能……是对的,但这并不意味着……5;It is natural to believe that……but we shouldn't ignore that……认为……是自然的,但我们不应忽视……6:There is no evidence to suggest that……没有证据表明……九、表示好处和坏处1:It has the following advantages.它有如下优势2:It is beneficial/harmful to us.==It is of great benefit/harm to us.它对我们有益处3:It has more disadvantages than advantage.他有很多不足之处十、表示重要、方便、可能1:It is important(necessary/difficult/convenient/possible)for sb to do sth.对于某人做……是……2:It plays an important role in our life.十一、采取措施1:We should take some effective measures.我们应该采取有效措施2:We should try our best to overcome/conquer the difficulties.我们应该尽最大努力去克服困难3:We should do our utmost in doing sth.我们应该尽力去做……4:We should solve the problems that we are confronted/faced with.我们应该解决我们面临的困难十二、显示变化1:Some changes have taken place in the past five years.过去五年发生了很多变化2:Great changes will certainly be produced in the international communications.在国际交流中理所当然会发生很多大的变化3:It has increased/decreased from…to…他已经从…增加/减少到…4:The output of July in this factory increased by 15%.这个工厂7月份产量以增加了15%十三、表明事实现状1;We cannot ignore the fact that……我们不能忽略这个事实……2:No one can deny the fact that……没人能否认这个事实……3:This is a phenomenon that many people are interested (与...息息相关)十四、进行比较1:Compared with A,B……与A比较,B……2;I prefer to read rather than watch TV.十五、常用英语谚语1:Actions speak louder than words.事实胜于雄辩2:All is not gold that glitters.发光的未必都是金子3:All roads lead to Rome.条条大路通罗马4:A good beginning is half done.良好的开端是成功的一半5:Every advantage has its disadvantage有利必有弊6:A miss is as good as a mile.失之毫厘,差之千里7:Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母8:Industry is the parent of success.勤奋是成功之母9:It is never too old to learn.活到老,学到老10:Knowledge is power.知识就是力量11:Nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to it.世上无难事,只怕有心人
The main trend is that all grades including kindergarten is growing for every year. Kindergarten started highest at and ended highest at percent with a constant increase. But grades 1-2 and grades 5-6 shows a little different trend, both starts at 1,5 percent in 1999 and declines a little bit in 2000. Both of them increased slowly in 2002 and both it holds that course to 2004 where grades 1-2 ends at 2,1 percent and grades 5-6 ends at 3-4 has a slow but steady growth througt all six years. It starts at percent in 1999 and increases every year except in 2003 when it peaks up percent. Grades 7-8 starts at percent and stays there for three years until it rapidly rises up to and peaks at in , all grades including kindergarten has had a rise at rougly minimum 1 percent and more in 6 years.
虽然不建议同学们背诵万能模板,但是同学们在写作的时候可以用总-分-总的结构来写作。首先,Introduction部分先简单介绍题目背景并提出自己的观点;其次,body部分详细地论证观点;最后,Conclusion部分简单总结全篇。
雅思大作文结尾段怎么写招式一:回答问题 answer the a country develops its technology; the traditional skills and ways of life die is pointless to try and keep them what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?In conclusion, without suggesting that all technology is necessarily good, I think it is by no means ‘ pointless’, in any way, to try to keep traditions alive with should not ignore technology, because it can be our friend and support our way of life.这个结尾段落明确的提出了自己的观点,不是所有的科技都是好的,但是科技也不是完全没有用处的。雅思大作文结尾段怎么写招式二:不要添加新的信息 not apply any new is considered to be very important in is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?Like self-awareness, this is also very difficult to achieve, but I think these are the two factors that may be the most important for achieving happiness.用1句话明确自己的观点,幸福很难定义,可能有两个因素起到作用。雅思大作文结尾段怎么写招式三:2-3个句子为宜 2-3 sentences are people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational; otherwise they are a complete waste of you agree or disagree?Finally, I think it is also important to remember that children need to relax as well as everything they do must have some educational or academic relevance, then they will soon get tired of studying altogether, which is the last thing parents would 句话,作者的态度很明确,学生不可能花所有的时间去学习,否者就会完全失去对学习的兴趣,所以也应该给学生一些放松的时间。一般在结尾段的最开始部分,考生就应该给考官一个明确的信号词,让考官了解文章已经进入尾声了。这里所谓的信号词就是一些结尾段的套句:信号词:Finally, to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, therefore, thus, overall句型:1. it can be concluded that…2. we can find that…3. I think it is also important to remember that4. the main point is to make sure that5. I believe that/ Personally, I think that/ I would say that/ I agree that/ My view is that
而结尾段似乎已经固化成总结全文立场的一句话,以确保文章结构的基本完整。结尾段俗称‘豹尾’,说明不仅仅简洁,也可以有力更强劲地总结全文。
本文就介绍下如何利用文中内容,对文章进行妥善稳健地收尾。
雅思作文观点类议论文主流写作结构五段式,即主体段两段立论我方观点,让步段某种程度上让步对方。结尾段写作可以是简单得总结文章主要内容,也可以根据让步段正负情况提出适度建议。
即,如果让步段为该事物可能存在的弊端,结尾时可以围绕这一论述给出建议,也就是简单填补自己支持方的漏洞,文章显得更辩证理性。
示例(一)
例题:
Good facilities can be found in cities but not in the countryside. Therefore, new doctors and teachers should be sent to the countryside.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
解析:
该题探讨是否支持将新人医生和老师派遣到农村,正反方都可以构思出合理的论点,题型也没有明确约束范围,假设支持该做法,可以从农村和涉及者两个平行方向出发,作为支持方的两个论据:
1农村医疗教育基础设施服务都很匮乏,处于劣势,将老师医生引入,有利于缓解这一困境(hospitals, clinics and schools are severely understaffed in rural areas, compared with their overstaffed counterparts in the city);
2对新人医生和教师也有裨益,城市里竞争激烈实践机会有限去农村可以增加工作经验,并且可以少借助医疗设备和教学辅助工具,从而提升职业技能(To the doctors or teachers that graduate freshly with a degree only, working in rural areas enables them to enrich work experience within the shortest possible period of time)。弊端也很明显,比如强制性分配违反人权,阻止他人追求更高生活质量的目标和愿望(compulsory assortment is not justifiable/it is not ethical to stop the desire of individuals for a more satisfying quality of life).
按照以上文章行文思路,让步段的确认可题干做法所存在的弊端,结尾段在总结立场后,可以适当利用该段内容给出相应的建议,不应该强制性分配,应该尊重个人意愿,这样显得更合理,全文也可以圆回来。例如:
To conclude, working for a period of time in the country benefits new teachers and doctors alike with increasing their work experience and meanwhile, address the service shortage facing those areas. However, the voluntary sing-up should be guaranteed, instead of mandatory assignment.
示例(二)
雅思作文例题:
Some people argue that history is of little or no use to us. Others believe that studying history gives many benefits.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
解析:
教育类老题---是否应该学历史,如果文章选取支持,可以从以下角度支撑:1. 学习历史可以借鉴前人知识,以史为鉴,避免走弯路,做出更明智的决定(understanding the past contributes to people’s decision making in today’s social context); 2. 也可以提高人们的分析能力,看问题的辩证能力(It is not only to seek self-knowledge, but also to enhance their skills and make themselves all-round individuals);从反面来看,学习历史也会有不可取之处,现在的世界日新月异,社会已经很复杂,过去的事情只有在特定语境下才有借鉴意义(the lesson from the past might be applicable in particular circumstances only)
根据这样的文章思路,结尾段在重申个人观点后可以根据主体部分提出的问题做适当的建议:
As indicated above, studying history is of critical importance, particularly in increasing one’s knowledge and enhancing one’s intellectual abilities. However, it should not be attached with unjustified importance because its applications in today’s society are not known with certainty.
学习历史的确是至关重要,开拓知识面,也可以加强个人技能。但是需要注意的是考虑到在现在社会中的实际用途,它也不应该被无依据的注重强调。总而言之,人们还是应该采取批判性理性思维看待这一问题。
雅思大作文结尾段写作技巧小编就总结到这里了,更多关于雅思作文考试的备考技巧,备考干货,新闻资讯等内容,小编会持续更新。祝愿各位考生都能取得满意的成绩。