选一个研究的,而且年轻的就比较好。
毕业生,意思是在学校或训练班学习期满,达到规定的要求,准予结业的学生或学员。
论文题目由教师指定或由学生提出,经教师同意确定。均应是本专业学科发展或实践中提出的理论问题和实际问题。通过这一环节,应使学生受到有关科学研究选题。
查阅、评述文献,制订研究方案,设计进行科学实验或社会调查,处理数据或整理调查结果,对结果进行分析、论证并得出结论,撰写论文等项初步训练。
2020年12月24日,《本科毕业论文(设计)抽检办法(试行)》提出,本科毕业论文抽检每年进行一次,抽检比例原则上应不低于2%。
从文体而言,它也是对某一专业领域的现实问题或理论问题进行 科学研究探索的具有一定意义的论文。一般安排在修业的最后一学年(学期)进行。
学生须在教师指导下,选定课题进行研究,撰写并提交论文。目的在于培养学生的科学研究能力;加强综合运用所学知识、理论和技能解决实际问题的训练;从总体上考查学生学习所达到的学业水平。
如下:
第一,应该做到知己知彼。“知己”包括:自己属于什么水平,研究兴趣是什么,对毕业论文重视与否;“知彼”包括:有哪些导师可选,他们的水平怎么样,研究领域是什么等。在此基础上,选择与自己匹配度高的导师。
第二,可以从任课老师中选择 ,自己哪门课成绩在班里最好就选那个老师。老师一般对成绩最好的同学印象比较深,印象分也很重要。
第三,根据老师的口碑选择导师。先了解老师是否负责任,水平如何等等。
第四,如果有特别心仪的导师 ,应该提前跟老师打招呼,以免被调剂给其他导师。
当然,如果你对毕业论文要求不高,就不必大费周章了,选谁都一样。
毕业论文的基本教学要求是:
1、培养学生综合运用、巩固与扩展所学的基础理论和专业知识,培养学生独立分析、解决实际问题能力、培养学生处理数据和信息的能力。
2、培养学生正确的理论联系实际的工作作风,严肃认真的科学态度。
3、培养学生进行社会调查研究;文献资料收集、阅读和整理、使用;提出论点、综合论证、总结写作等基本技能。
毕业论文是毕业生总结性的独立作业,是学生运用在校学习的基本知识和基础理论,去分析、解决一两个实际问题的实践锻炼过程,也是学生在校学习期间学习成果的综合性总结,是整个教学活动中不可缺少的重要环节。
撰写毕业论文对于培养学生初步的科学研究能力,提高其综合运用所学知识分析问题、解决问题能力有着重要意义。
毕业论文在进行编写的过程中,需要经过开题报告、论文编写、论文上交评定、论文答辩以及论文评分五个过程,其中开题报告是论文进行的最重要的一个过程,也是论文能否进行的一个重要指标。
一、指导导师的基本条件 按照有关规定,大专毕业论文指导导师的条件一般有: 1.具有有关专业的较高理论和政治素养的讲师或相当于讲师以上职称的教员、研究人员。 2,具有本科专业理论素养和文字水平较高的相当于副处级以上的领导干部。 本科毕业论文指导导师条件: 1.具有有关专业的较高理论和政治素养及文字水乎的讲师以上职称的教员或研究人员。 2.具有研究生毕业学历,理论素养、政治水平、文字功底较高的相当于正处级以上的领导干部。(引自中共中央党校函授学院《毕业论文工作规程》) 二、指导导师的修养 从以上基本条件可以看出,担任函授学员指导导师的人,其本身必须具有较高的素质和修养,主要是思想方面的修养、理论方面的修养和文字方面的修养。 (一)思想修养 身为指导导师,首先应具有较高的政治觉悟、思想水平和强烈的责任感,有“燃烧自己、照亮别人”的“蜡烛”精神和甘为“人梯”的精神。要把帮助学员顺利撰写并通过毕业论文,看成是学校交给自己的一项严肃任务,作为教师的神圣职责。 学员对待毕业论文的态度大致有三种:第一种是非常认真,积极性很高,主动向指导导师请教的;第二种是比较认真,想写好毕业论文,也希望得到指导导师指教的;第三种是敷衍了事,被动应付,导师不催不动笔,迟迟不同指导导师见面的。对第一种学员,指导教师应悉心指教,提出高标准、严要求,鼓励和帮助他写出高质量的毕业论文。对第二种学员,教师应满腔热情予以接待,鼓励他树立信心,并从多方面给以具体指导。对于第三类学员,指导导师应不避“皇帝不急,倒急死太监”之讥,放下架子,主动找他谈话,帮助他提高认识,端正态度,督促并指导他及时完成毕业论文写作任务。 指导导师不仅要凭自己的业务水平帮助学员提高毕业论文质量,更要以自己的思想品格影响学员,表现出为人师表的良好风范。(二)理论修养 俗话说:“要给学生一杯水,教师就要有一桶水。”指导导师的理论修养、学术水平直接影响学员毕业论文的质量。学员毕业论文所涉及的学科是非常广泛的,不但有马克思主义哲学、政治经济学、科学社会主义、党史、党建诸方面,还有政治学、管理学、法学、公共关系学以及系统论、信息论、人口理论、宗教理论……等等,应有尽有。担任毕业论文指导导师的人,应当是个“通才”和“杂家”,对马克思主义基础理论要有扎实的基础,对当代各种新理论、边缘科学要有广泛的涉猎,还要有丰富的自然常识与社会知识。否则,学员写的文章尚且看不借,又何从指导!即使可以通过分工,实行分类指导,但往往不可能分得那么细,学员论文中所涉及的知识也不可能那么单纯专一。更何况学员论文的一个通病是写得太实,理论性欠强,指导教师应帮助他们在文章里“加进”理论分析的内容。而要做到这一点,非有一定的理论素养不可。 (三)文字修养 毕业论文是以中文形式写的,故指导导师的中文写作水平起码应不在学员之下。他们不但要熟练地掌握论文写作知识,具备一定的语法、修辞和逻辑知识,而且要有扎实的文字功底和较高的实际写作能力。 学员论文中出现的语病较多,指导老师应帮助他们纠正。例如;由于各种利益关系的调整,人们的思想和情绪都发生了强烈碰撞[情绪如何“碰撞”?跟谁碰撞?可改为震荡],其冲击波不可避免地在青年人身上反映出来[冲击波怎么“反映”?可改为:其冲击波不可避免地撞击在青年人身上,引起他们的强烈反应]。 当前我国已进入社会主义现代化建设新时期,祖国现代化建设宏图需要青年人接替、继承[宏图可以描画、实施、实现,不能“接替”,也不说“继承”]。 造成这种状况的原因,除了放松对青年思想教育外,舆论导向失误,一度宣传阵地中“雷锋”消失,改革开放过程中西方一些资产阶级思想侵入我国,没有及时地批判这句话不完整,可在“原因”后面加上“很复杂”,在“批判”后面加上“也是一个重要原因”,形成两个并列分句]。 俗话说,名师出高徒。指导教师不必都是“名师”,但都应有“名师意识”。要意识到,教师是在有意无意地以自己的面貌塑造学生的,因而要重视自身素质的养成和水平的提高。否则,“以其昏昏,使人昭昭”,是不行的.
教授。
如果都没有什么感觉,同等条件下我还是会选择教授。有一同学告诉我,出过留学需要拿导师的推荐信,导师又必须是教授级别的(这个没研究过,也不清楚是不是)。
简介
再知道位高权重,一些东西可能讲师这需要你亲力亲为,教授那直接就让其他人给你弄好了,你只需要说声谢谢。有时候你有事,辅导员不搭理你,你和导师说了,导师说去说一声,比什么都好使。最后一个就是推校级优秀论文也挺好的。
只是教授一般会比较认真和严格,讲师很多查重率在控制内就行了,如果想好好写论文,果断选一个风评不错的老师。
选一个研究的,而且年轻的就比较好。
毕业生,意思是在学校或训练班学习期满,达到规定的要求,准予结业的学生或学员。
论文题目由教师指定或由学生提出,经教师同意确定。均应是本专业学科发展或实践中提出的理论问题和实际问题。通过这一环节,应使学生受到有关科学研究选题。
查阅、评述文献,制订研究方案,设计进行科学实验或社会调查,处理数据或整理调查结果,对结果进行分析、论证并得出结论,撰写论文等项初步训练。
2020年12月24日,《本科毕业论文(设计)抽检办法(试行)》提出,本科毕业论文抽检每年进行一次,抽检比例原则上应不低于2%。
从文体而言,它也是对某一专业领域的现实问题或理论问题进行 科学研究探索的具有一定意义的论文。一般安排在修业的最后一学年(学期)进行。
学生须在教师指导下,选定课题进行研究,撰写并提交论文。目的在于培养学生的科学研究能力;加强综合运用所学知识、理论和技能解决实际问题的训练;从总体上考查学生学习所达到的学业水平。
选择一个好的毕业论文指导老师对于研究生来说非常重要,因为他们会对研究生的研究方向、论文质量和未来职业发展产生深远的影响。以下是一些选择毕业论文指导老师的建议:1. 了解教师的研究领域和经验:选择一个与自己研究方向相符合的教师,可以让研究生得到更好的指导和支持。此外,教师的学术成果和经验也是选择的重要考虑因素。2. 了解教师的性格和风格:研究生应该选择与自己性格相似或者互补的教师,以便更好地进行沟通和交流。此外,教师的指导风格也很重要,研究生应该选择那些能够给予充分支持和指导的教师。3. 了解教师的工作量和时间:研究生应该选择那些有足够时间和精力来指导自己的教师,以避免出现时间上的冲突和指导不足的情况。4. 了解教师的声誉和评价:研究生可以通过查询教师的学术成果、评价和声誉等方面的信息,来评估其是否是一个好的指导老师。5. 与教师进行交流和沟通:在选择毕业论文指导老师之前,研究生应该与教师进行交流和沟通,了解他们的研究方向、指导风格和工作量等方面的信息,以便做出更加明智的选择。总之,选择一个好的毕业论文指导老师需要考虑多个因素,研究生应该根据自己的需求和实际情况来做出选择。
如下:
第一,应该做到知己知彼。“知己”包括:自己属于什么水平,研究兴趣是什么,对毕业论文重视与否;“知彼”包括:有哪些导师可选,他们的水平怎么样,研究领域是什么等。在此基础上,选择与自己匹配度高的导师。
第二,可以从任课老师中选择 ,自己哪门课成绩在班里最好就选那个老师。老师一般对成绩最好的同学印象比较深,印象分也很重要。
第三,根据老师的口碑选择导师。先了解老师是否负责任,水平如何等等。
第四,如果有特别心仪的导师 ,应该提前跟老师打招呼,以免被调剂给其他导师。
当然,如果你对毕业论文要求不高,就不必大费周章了,选谁都一样。
毕业论文的基本教学要求是:
1、培养学生综合运用、巩固与扩展所学的基础理论和专业知识,培养学生独立分析、解决实际问题能力、培养学生处理数据和信息的能力。
2、培养学生正确的理论联系实际的工作作风,严肃认真的科学态度。
3、培养学生进行社会调查研究;文献资料收集、阅读和整理、使用;提出论点、综合论证、总结写作等基本技能。
毕业论文是毕业生总结性的独立作业,是学生运用在校学习的基本知识和基础理论,去分析、解决一两个实际问题的实践锻炼过程,也是学生在校学习期间学习成果的综合性总结,是整个教学活动中不可缺少的重要环节。
撰写毕业论文对于培养学生初步的科学研究能力,提高其综合运用所学知识分析问题、解决问题能力有着重要意义。
毕业论文在进行编写的过程中,需要经过开题报告、论文编写、论文上交评定、论文答辩以及论文评分五个过程,其中开题报告是论文进行的最重要的一个过程,也是论文能否进行的一个重要指标。
撰写教育学研究生论文的第一步就是确定论文的主题。但是,教育这个话题太宽泛了,必须将其缩小到更具体的内容。
选题思路
选题注意事项
拟定的选题必须结合实际,针对现实,以第一手材料为基础,必须符合事物发展规律。
选题切忌过大、过难、过旧。选题过大,既难以完成,又不好驾驭选题过旧,旧话重提,会让人觉得有抄袭之嫌。
选题时,要掌握已有的和最新的研究成果,要了解该选题的研究现状和发展趋势。既要避免重复研究,也不要人云亦云,凑热闹。要引导学生选择经过深入研究,冷静思考,确有自己见解的题目。
要选择自己获取信息、寻找图书资料方便的题目,考虑能够进行调查研究、查找文书档案、数据资料的条件,这样会更有助于写作的成功。
参考主题
貌似翻译方向比较好写些听我其他写翻译类毕业论文的同学说的。文学方向的毕业论文也不需要什么文学功底,你可以通过学校图书馆的网上资源查下相关资源,看哪方面资料多一些就选哪个方面吧。因为本人写的是语言学方向的论文,所以文学方向的不是很了解。
想借英文短篇小说引出社会话题 这点想法很不错 可是你的论文涉及的范围会很大 指导老师也不会赞同 我那时选择的是文化方面 个人认为还是文化比较好写 比方说《中西方餐桌文化差异》《中西方颜色文化差异》 我的论文题目是英语教学中避免中西文化冲突的措施 从这几个题目你就可以看出 毕业论文是抓住很大范围中的一点进行全面阐述 对比 引证 举例 最后得出一个什么样的结论或研究成果 我定的第一个题目就被导师无情的PASS 题目是《中西方风俗的差别》为什么 就是因为范围太广 你给扣的帽子太大了 到最后你自己都写不下去了 很容易跑题 说实话 个人认为文化很不好写 起初我认为文化方面是最好写的 也想选文学方向的 但是真正搜集资料时 确发现难以立题 因为文学有很多难以理解甚至是抽象的异词 除非你对西方文学了解很多 或者有独到见解 以上仅是我个人意见 希望对你有所帮助吧~~
在英语教育专业中,毕业论文的选题非常重要,因为选题决定了研究的方向和内容。以下是几个选题方向,供你参考:1. 课堂教学研究:选取一个教材和教学话题,研究学生和教师在课堂上的互动、学生的学习反应以及教学策略等方面的问题。2. 语言教育与文化:研究外语教育与文化之间的相互作用,包括如何在教师教学上应用文化元素、如何评价学生的文化理解以及如何在语言学习中融入文化元素等问题。3. 语言学习策略研究:选取某些语言学习策略,通过问卷调查或者实验研究,探究这些策略对语言学习的影响和有效性。4. 外语教育政策研究:研究各种外语教育政策对外语教学和学习的影响,包括各国的外语教育政策、教材编写政策和考试政策等方面。5. 语言测试与评估:探索语言测试与评估的各种方法、技术和考试形式,包括对测试结果的可信度和有效性的考虑。在选择毕业论文的选题时,需要考虑自己的兴趣和实际经验,同时还要选择一个研究性强、实践性图、有独创性的课题。可以多跟导师、同学进行交流讨论,多阅读相关文献,最终确定一个适合自己的毕业论文选题。如果以上渠道不能很好解决你在课业上的困难,那么咨询专业的留学生辅导机构也是不错的选择,选择口碑良好的平台可以帮助我们避免踩坑,比如英国翰思教育这家就很不错。
英文毕业论文的Acknowledgement范本
First and foremost, I appreciate my college which gives me a comfortable learning atmosphere. Second, I would like to show my deepest gratitude to my supervisor, Miss Zhang, who has walked me through all the stages of the writing of this thesis. Without her illuminating instruction and patience, this thesis could not have reached its present form.
I am also greatly indebted to all my teachers who have helped me to develop the fundamental and essential academic competence. My sincere appreciation also goes to all my classmates, who are my proud of my life. Last but not least, I want to thank all my friends, especially my three lovely roommates, for their encouragement and support.
范本翻译
首先,我很欣赏我的大学,它给了我一个舒适的学习环境。第二,我想对我的导师张小姐表示最深切的感谢,她陪我走过了这篇论文写作的所有阶段。
如果没有她富有启发性的指导和耐心,这篇论文就不可能达到现在的形式。我也非常感谢我所有的老师,他们帮助我发展了基本的和必要的学术能力。我真诚地感谢我所有的同学,他们是我生命的骄傲。最后,我要感谢我所有的朋友,特别是我那三个可爱的室友,感谢他们的鼓励和支持。
Dear Mr xxx :It's my honour to get the chance to write to you. "Approachable" is my first impression of you, because you always keeps smiling. Students may fear the teachers that are serious both in and out of class. Smile makes a teacher popular with his students, you are a teacher of this very kind. You always arrive at the classroom ahead of any of the students, from which we could imply that you are a diligent man with regular habit. Before the class, you like to talk to us, at this very time, you are more a friend than a teacher. To be honest, I was surprised in the first class when I learned a teacher at your age could speak English in such a fluent way.(I didn't mean you are old, you're young at heart.) Moreover, you know well how to keep your class attractive. You've got such an active mind that you can keep talking during the whole class without a pause. I always appreciated your ideas and enjoyed listening to you. In your class, I learned not only the writing skills but also the presentation skills as well as much knowledge of other areas. Thanks for your excellent 've got some suggestions for you. It seems that we students have got few chances to participate in discussion during the class time. Most of the time, we are listening. Seldom did we express our own ideas. I suggest that teachers should interact with students more frequently in the class. Besides, I'd like to practice writing more, so would you please leave us more assignments?Happy new every good sincerely Dali Wangxxx
Dear teacher,Today, I am a graduate. And without your help, I can not be who I am today. You are so kind and generous. Everyone in our calssroom really likes you. You have given us so much knowledge and courage. You told us that we could be anyone we want to be if we cherish our time and study hard. You love everyone of us, and exert youself to help us. I want to become a man like you, and I will devote all my efforts to our country and people. I will always remember your teachings and become a useful man for others. May health and happyness be with you everyday!Yours,Sincerely,XXX
Dear Mr Pan:It has been a long time since I wrote the last letter. Nowdays, people write letters less and less, instead, they make a call or send a SMS. However, it is still a good way for us to communicate with each other by sending a letter. It's my honour to get the chance to write to you. "Approachable" is my first impression of you, because you always keeps smiling. Students may fear the teachers that are serious both in and out of class. Smile makes a teacher popular with his students, you are a teacher of this very kind. You always arrive at the classroom ahead of any of the students, from which we could imply that you are a diligent man with regular habit. Before the class, you like to talk to us, at this very time, you are more a friend than a teacher. To be honest, I was surprised in the first class when I learned a teacher at your age could speak English in such a fluent way.(I didn't mean you are old, you're young at heart.) Moreover, you know well how to keep your class attractive. You've got such an active mind that you can keep talking during the whole class without a pause. I always appreciated your ideas and enjoyed listening to you. In your class, I learned not only the writing skills but also the presentation skills as well as much knowledge of other areas. Thanks for your excellent 've got some suggestions for you. It seems that we students have got few chances to participate in discussion during the class time. Most of the time, we are listening. Seldom did we express our own ideas. I suggest that teachers should interact with students more frequently in the class. Besides, I'd like to practice writing more, so would you please leave us more assignments?Happy new every good sincerely Dali Wangxxx
在现在社会,感谢信应用范围愈发广泛,请注意不同种类的感谢信具有不同的用途。说到写感谢信,相信很多人都是毫无头绪的状态吧,下面是我收集整理的给老师的英文感谢信9篇,仅供参考,大家一起来看看吧。
dear sir :
i am very glad that you are my teacher,you are one of the best teachers who i know .
there are many good points what we should learn from you,such as kindness,patience,humor and so on.
please forgive me that i had made so many mistakes which make you always angry.
i really want to be a good for you teaching ,i have learn so many interesting things ,so many words,so many sentencesform you,ican feel that it is not only a progress of learning,but also a convarcation of feeling . you are my teacher and good friend, we are the lucky dogs that we have such teacher as hope you happy everyday! best wishes your student
Dear teacher ,
I am writing to you to express my thanks for your help in learning English and speaking English.
During these days in your class, I have learned much from you and it is very helpful to me. Firstly, you let me know what is the west thinking patternstraight thinking pattern. And, I think, it is very important to understand the wests thoughts. As you know, this can help me with my examination and interaction with foreigners. Secondly, I have got enough confidence in speaking in English from your class and it took me a long time to gain this confidence. Now, I always express my ideas in English as possible as I can. Its great to do that. The last not the least, I find that learning English is not an boring thing as before and Im interested in studying English which was just a necessary task to pass examinations. Reading, listening or speaking all become interesting and I really enjoy it.
Above all, I want to say thanks again to you. And thank you for your time.
Good luck!
your student:
xx年x月x日
Dear teacher:
hello!
Pen, full of words like a flood in my heart, dont know where to start. That you give us the deepest impression of your words and deeds left our best memories.
Time flies, unconsciously, the teacher you have to accompany the time we spent almost a year, this year, we have to say no to you out of gratitude.
Come to the first lesson of the university, is your English class. In our eyes, your kind, no vehemently enforcement. Your class, I feel no pressure and tension. Not only learning in class, after class, you are also very concerned about to us. Whenever we meet with difficulties, you are always thinking about new ways to help us, teach us; When our mood depressed, you will take the initiative to clean our struggle, you have confidence in our future.
Although the teacher you often mention their own children in class, in our hearts, you are not only our English teacher, is more like a great mother.
Your class, I cant pick out any problem, you use your unique way of teaching to us in every class, both humorous and the coming days, we will be more efforts to study, with the most excellent grades in return for your sweat, return school and the dead silk side, burn, you the silkworm spirit however we respect, thank you, of words, express thanks to you.
Finally wish the teacher:
Healthy body, a happy family,
Happy every day.
your student:
xx年x月x日
Dear Teacher:
I’m glad to be your student, and I am very happy to learn the course I like best under your help.
English is an important tool, through which we can share it with the world. I treasure the chance of learning English, and I enjoy the happiness from this course.
This Thursday is Thanksgiving Day. On this special day, I want to express my deepest thanks to you!
Yours sincerely,
Jane
dear sir :
i am very glad that you are my teacher,you are one of the best teachers who i know .there are many good points what we should learn from you,such as kindness,patience,humor and so forgive me that i had made so many mistakes which make you always really want to be a good for you teaching ,i have learn so many interesting things ,so many words,so many sentencesform you,ican feel that it is not only a progress of learning,but also a convarcation of feeling . you are my teacher and good friend, we are the lucky dogs that we have such teacher as hope you happy everyday! best wishes your student
Dear teacher:
I am writing to you to express my thanks for your help in learning English and speaking English.
During these days in your class, I have learned much from you and it is very helpful to me. Firstly, you let me know what is the west thinking patternstraight thinking pattern. And, I think, it is very important to understand the wests thoughts. As you know, this can help me with my examination and interaction with foreigners. Secondly, I have got enough confidence in speaking in English from your class and it took me a long time to gain this confidence.
Now, I always express my ideas in English as possible as I can. Its great to do that. The last not the least, I find that learning English is not an boring thing as before and Im interested in studying English which was just a necessary task to pass examinations. Reading, listening or speaking all become interesting and I really enjoy it.
Above all, I want to say thanks again to you. And thank you for your time.
Good luck!
【本期题目】
在初中三年的学习生活中,你一定遇到过很多老师,现在请你选择其中对你帮助最大的一位老师,给他(她)写一封感谢信,谈谈你对他(她)的印象,回忆一下他(她)是怎么帮助你的,并表达你对他(她)的祝福。信的开头和落款已给出,不计词数。
提示词:kind, help, encourage, thanks, hope
【写作指导】
本题要求我们给对自己帮助最大的老师写一封感谢信,因为是自己亲身经历的,又是写给自己的老师,同学们一定有千言万语要对他(她)说。在情真意切的`同时,我们还要格外注意文章的详略和条理。
通过审题,我们可以获知:
1. 文章的主题:感谢师恩
2. 文章的要点:对老师的感谢之情,对老师的印象,回忆老师的帮助,并表达祝福。
3. 文章的体裁:书信
4. 文章的人称:you, i
5. 文章的时态:因为是回忆,所以以一般过去时为主。
同学们先把相关短语和词汇整理一下:
1. 描写老师的形容词有哪些呢?
kind, nice, selfless, patient, easy-going, responsible, be strict with…
2. 有哪些单词和短语可以表示老师对自己的帮助呢?
help me with my english/ maths, explain…to me patiently, encourage me never to give up, praise me when i make progress, have a talk with me, take me to the hospital when i am ill, tell me some good ways to learn……
接下来,我们看看如何表达对老师的感谢和祝福吧。
1. i want to say thanks/thank you.
2. i owe my progress/success to your help.
3. i owe you a lot for your help/what you’ve done for me.
4. i’ll never forget your help and i will remember all the happy times we shared together.
5. i hope you can be happy/healthy, forever.
6. i wish you good luck/health!
【普通作文】
dear miss wang:
i’m glad to write to you.
you are such a kind and easy-going teacher that we all like you. i remember that at first i hated learning new english words very much and i even wanted to give up. when you noticed this, you had a talk with me. you told me some good ways to remember those words and encouraged me never to give up. i’ve made great progress in english and now i’m a top student in english.
i want to say thanks. i will work harder in the future. i hope you can be happy and healthy forever.
yours,
linda
点评:
本文信息点齐全,层次比较清楚,语言比较通顺,句式也有一定的变化。作者首先用一个so…that 句式将老师随和、善良的特点勾勒出来,接下来回忆了老师是如何在自己当初因讨厌背单词而想放弃学英语时对自己无私的帮助。结尾处,对于老师的感谢和祝福也就水到渠成,感情真挚、自然。
当然,文章的连贯和语言优化方面也还是可以进一步改进的。
【满分范文】
dear miss wang,
i’m glad to write to you. at this moment, words can no longer express my feelings.
how kind and responsible can a teacher be? you just gave me the perfect answer. i can clearly remember how much i hated learning new english words at first. to be honest, i really wanted to give up. as soon as you noticed this, you offered to help me by telling me some shortcuts to learn them. you never failed to encourage me even when i made only a little progress. little by little, my interest in english grew and now i’m a top student in english.
i want to say thanks to you. i will work harder in the future to live up to your expectations. i hope you can be happy and healthy forever.
yours
xiaoming
点评:
这篇修改后的作文无论在语言表达以及文章内涵方面都是相当优秀的。
首先,开头at this moment, words can no longer express my feelings. 短短的一句话便把作者此时的激动和对老师的感激之情表达得很充分。第二段首句的设问句how kind and responsible can a teacher be? 更是精彩。在描写自己起初对英语单词的厌烦时,作者用了一个how 所引导的宾语从句替代原文的普通句式。
文章的几个过渡语也是恰到好处: to be honest, little by little等,均在一定程度上增强了文章的连贯性。此外,几个表达法也相当地道、出彩,比如用 live up to one’s expectations (不辜负某人的期望)表示自己的决心,使得整篇文章的感情更加饱满、真挚,给人留下了深刻的印象。
Dear Miss Zhu,
How time flies! It has been a fewyears since I left high school, but I still remember you in my heart, becauseyou’re the best teacher in my mind. It’s not only because you taught meknowledge, but also you taught me how to study. I have really benefitted a lotfrom you. So I would like to express my great thanks to you, and share my lifein college with you.
Now I’m studying in Hunan FirstNormal College, which is Chairman Mao’s former school. I major in English,because I find it so fun and interesting. As far as I’m concerned, our EnglishDepartment is the best department in our college. The teachers in ourdepartment are knowledgeable, experienced, and warm-hearted. And my classmatesare nice, friendly and helpful. Thus, I have a good atmosphere to study. When Ihave difficulties in study, I always ask my teachers for help or discuss with myclassmates. Through their help, I have made great progress in my English study.
College life is much differentfrom high school life. In college, we should acquire knowledge as well asimprove our integrated abilities. There are a lot of English classes for us tolearn, such as Basic English, Oral English, Listening, Reading, Writing,Translation, Grammar, English Literature, and so on. I enjoy these classes verymuch. Except English, we have many other subjects to learn. Life seems so busyhere but it’s so fruitful for me.
After class, I usually go to theEnglish Corner. There I can practice my oral English by talking with foreignersor chatting with my schoolmates. Now, I’m able to communicate with foreignerswell. Sometimes I also take part in some social activities. For instance, lastweekend I attended an interesting play. As it was my first performance, I felta little nervous at the beginning. But when I appeared on the stage, I madeevery audience laugh happily. I was so proud of myself at that moment, becausethis was my first achievement.
What about your present life? Ihope to hear from you soon.
At last, I hope everything goeswell with you. Please give my best regards to your family.
Sincerelyyours,
Jason
亲爱的王老师:
我写信是想诚挚的感谢你在我学习上的帮助。没有你的帮助,我的成绩就不会排在班级前三名。是你在我失败的时候一直支持我。我帮我指出错误并告诉我怎样改正它们。你总是不知疲倦地训练我的耐心。你不断的鼓励是我最大的动力。
我真心祝愿您身体健康,永远快乐。另外,我希望你能多注意你的健康,多多休息。
再次感谢你的帮助!
你的学生
李丽
怎么用英语写 感谢信 感谢老师呢?下面我为大家精心整理了感谢信老师的英语 范文 ,希望能给你带来帮助。 感谢信老师的英语范文篇一: Dear Susan, Nov. 21 I’m glad to be your student, and I am very happy to learn the course I like best under your help. English is an important tool, through which we can share it with the world. I treasure the chance of learning English, and I enjoy the happiness from this course. This Thursday is Thanksgiving Day. On this special day, I want to express my deepest thanks to you! Yours sincerely, LI 感谢信老师的英语范文篇二: Dear teacher , I am writing to you to express my thanks for your help in learning English and speaking English. During these days in your class, I have learned much from you and it is very helpful to me. Firstly, you let me know what is the west thinking pattern—straight thinking pattern. And, I think, it is very important to understand the west’s thoughts. As you know, this can help me with my examination and interaction with foreigners. Secondly, I have got enough confidence in speaking in English from your class and it took me a long time to gain this confidence. Now, I always express my ideas in English as possible as I can. It’s great to do that. The last not the least, I find that learning English is not an boring thing as before and I’m interested in studying English which was just a necessary task to pass examinations. Reading, listening or speaking all become interesting and I really enjoy it. Above all, I want to say thanks again to you. And thank you for your time. Good luck. Susi 感谢信老师的英语范文篇三: Our Teacher of English We have several teachers of English since we began to study in middle school. But it seems to me that the present teacher of English is the best one we have known so far. She is never tired of helping us in our studies. She patiently answers our questions. She had years of experience in teaching. She teaches us how to write in simple, clear and correct English, and to make ourselves understood to English speaking people. She has made a deep impression on us all. With her help we have made rapid progress.感谢信老师的英语范文相关 文章 : 1. 英文感谢信范文感谢老师 2. 感谢信的英语范文 3. 感谢信的英文范文 4. 毕业生给老师的英文感谢信 5. 英语感谢信的范文 6. 感谢信英文范文 7. 英文感谢信格式及范文 8. 求职感谢信的英文范文3篇 9. 英语作文感谢信范文3篇 10. 写一封感谢信感谢老师的范文6篇
老师是辛勤的园丁,老师是人生的引航者,给教导自己的老师写一封 感谢信 吧。以下是我给大家整理的给大学老师的一封感谢信英文 作文 ,希望对大家有所帮助,欢迎阅读与借鉴。感兴趣的朋友可以了解一下。
给大学老师的一封感谢信英文作文1
dear teacher:
this is a specialday, we have presented a bouquet of flowers, gifts to the world of your peaches and plums, spectrum a ode to joy, for your eyes flicker disperse tired, for you loosen the amount of wrinkled patterns.
The singing is a blessing: teacher, happy holidays! insatiable in learning, be tireless in teaching,peaches and plumsfanwen/ fragrance, their music is happy and harmonious. i wish you a happy holiday! not only in the teachers day today, there is a tomorrow, the day after tomorrow, tai houtian, i wish your life every day, every minutes, every second,the surface is always the same smile.
The singing is concerned about: the teacher, you worked hard! your use of sweat, nurturing the tender shoots of spring have just ground-breaking. your care is like the genial spring, warm our hearts and minds. let us protect your healthy growth, formed in the autumn fruit. lifes journey,you shine our light of hope, eich our minds, adding to our intelligence.
thank you,
teacher! i wish you healthy forever! happy! happiness!
给大学老师的一封感谢信英文作文2
Dear Miss Brown,
I am writing to express my sincere thanks to you for caring me in the last two years. During the days of being your student, I learn a lot. Firstly, your serious attitude towards teaching and our students moves me too much. You inspire and push me to work harder and harder. Secondly, I fall in love with English under the influence of you. As a student of science and engineering, I’ve been thinking that English does no good to me, but you help me to find the fabulous glamour of English that leads me to know a totally different world and develop a different way of thinking. Finally, your continuous encouragement supports mea lot when I meet challenges or difficulties. You said that everything to the last will certainly become a good thing, if it is not, not yet to the time, remembering your words, I am so inspired to keep going.
Above all, I want to say thank you again and please accept my sincere wishes for you.
Cruse
给大学老师的一封感谢信英文作文3
dear teacher
i am writing to you to express my thanks for your help in learning english and speaking english.
during these days in your class, i have learned much from you and it is very helpful to me. firstly, you let me know what is the west thinking pattern—straight thinking pattern. and, i think, it is very important to understand the west’s thoughts. as you know, this can help me with my examination and interaction with foreigners. secondly, i have got enough confidence in speaking in english from your class and it took me a long time to gain this confidence. now, i
always express my ideas in english as possible as i can. it’s great to do that. the last not the least, i find that learning english is not an boring thing as before and i’m interested in studying
english which was just a necessary task to pass examinations. reading, listening or speaking all become interesting and i really enjoy all, i want to say thanks again to you. and thank you for your time.
good luck!
给大学老师的一封感谢信英文作文4
Who is it - -Usher into we who are ignorant the spacious classroom, teach us abundant knowledge? You! Teacher! You use the diligent sweat, have fed the tender seedling that just broke ground in springtime. Who is it - -Educate we who are naughty to show
consideration for and help others person? You! Teacher! Your spring breeze just which seem nice and warm of care has made our soul warm.
Who is it - -Foster we who are immature into the ripe and sensible teenager? You! Teacher! Your protection lets us grow up healthy and sound. Forge the outstanding achievement in gold autumn season. You have worked hard! Teacher! People working hard in the heat and severe cold. You have worked hard! Teacher! There are no people devoting it. We extend the lofty compliments to you! --You have worked hard, teacher!
给大学老师的一封感谢信英文作文5
dear teacher
this is a special day, we have presented a bouquet of flowers, gifts to the world of your peaches and plums, spectrum a ode to joy, for your eyes flicker disperse tired, for you loosen the amount of wrinkled patterns.
the singing is a blessing: teacher, happy holidays! insatiable in learning, be tireless in teaching, peaches and plumsfanwen/ fragrance, their music is happy and harmonious. i wish you a happy holiday! not only in the teachers day today, there is a tomorrow, the day after tomorrow, tai houtian, i wish your life every day, every minutes, every second, the surface is always the same smile.
the singing is concerned about: the teacher, you worked hard! your use of sweat, nurturing the tender shoots of spring have just ground-breaking. your care is like the genial spring, warm our hearts and minds. let us protect your healthy growth, formed in the autumn fruit.
lifes journey, you shine our light of hope, eich our minds, adding to our intelligence. thank you, teacher! i wish you healthy forever! happy!
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