英语论文写作出现的问题

1、用词不当。学生们写的作文里或多或少都会有一些用词不当的问题，但是要注意的是一些最最基本的错误是不能犯的。

2、时态错误。一般作文使用的是现在时态，除了拿过去的事情举例子时，用过去时态。

3、句子中出现中国式的英语。

4、拼写错误。这里的拼写错误不是指在考试时候的手误，而是本身对词汇拼写记忆的错误。

5、例子夸张。切记例证要符合实际，可以有些适当的夸张。

6、固定搭配用法错误

To some extends, I agree with the author's general assertion that if parents also have a prehensive sense of professional knowledge.

To some extends应改为To some extent

7、成分多余

According to a prehensive investigation which is carried out by Chinese Academy of Social Sciences shows that there is an increase in the number of university students who are taking part-time jobs.

该句中的shows that是多余的成分。

8、词性混乱

However, the questions such as "Have you ever regretted marrying your hu *** and" may be very privacy and embarrassingly.

句子中的privacy和embarrassingly应该改成private和embarrassing。

可以有些适当的夸张。

切记例证要符合实际、固定搭配用法错误 To some extends。学生们写的作文里或多或少都会有一些用词不当的问题，但是要注意的是一些最最基本的错误是不能犯的。

2、时态错误、句子中出现中国式的英语、拼写错误。这里的拼写错误不是指在考试时候的手误。

一般作文使用的是现在时态，除了拿过去的事情举例子时。 6。

3，用过去时态1、用词不当。 4，而是本身对词汇拼写记忆的错误。

5、例子夸张， I agree with the author's general assertion that if parents also have a prehensive sense of professional knowledge. To some extends应改为To some extent 7、成分多余 According to a prehensive investigation which is carried out by Chinese Academy of Social Sciences shows that there is an increase in the number of university students who are taking part-time jobs. 该句中的shows that是多余的成分。 8、词性混乱 However, the questions such as "。

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在初中阶段学生基本上没有进行正规系统的写作训练。英语语言的基础也比较差，主要表现在以下几个方面： （一）词汇贫乏且运用能力差

词汇是英语写作必不可少的基本要素，要写好一篇作文以表达自己的思想，必须以足够的词汇量为基础，但实际上大多数学生掌握的词汇量都达不到规定的要求，因而在写作时也就不能随心所欲地表达自己的思想。出现的问题往往有拼写错误，影响理解，词语误用，表

达不准确；某一词语反复使用，语言表达缺乏变式，文章显得单调乏味；文章中出现大量自己的“造词”，让人看了啼笑皆非等。显然词汇量不足已成为制约学生写作的瓶颈。 （二）句式单一枯燥

文章的内容固然重要，但是形式也不容忽视。然而很多同学作文中的句子都是同一句式，长短相近，所用句型也多是些there be类的句子，而且全都是主语、谓语、宾语、的单一顺序，缺少变化，读起来乏味、枯燥；平时学到的很多语法、句法，比如从句 、强调句型、感叹句、虚拟语气等等在单项选择题中很顺手的东西这时却派不上用场，仿佛它们只是用来对付选择题的。 （三）段落、文章的逻辑性差

传统的英语教学把语言知识放在首位，忽视了文章的篇章结构和段落，因此学生写出来的东西往往是信息感不强，逻辑性差，很少有主题句，学生们大多想的是：我尽量多写，写够字数就算完成任务了。偶尔有了主题句，下面的支持细节也不能很好地说明主题句。文章整体内容缺乏一致性，连贯性，内容安排上也无主次之分，所以读完之后有时甚至全然不知所云，仅仅是句子的堆砌，意思的重复。 （四）中英句式差异分辨不清

学生们在完成写作题时，总是按照汉语的习惯来思考这个句子怎么写，写出来的句子大部分都是单词的堆砌，有的句子甚至错的都有点离谱，所以英语语言的特点也是学生们写作需要克服的一个难点。

my dear friends,

wele to our school, and i am a member of the student's union. to my surprise, you finally chose our school, which really means a big honor to us everyone.

it is your first time to e to china, and i am willing to offer you some suggestions, so that you can have a perfect time in our school. first of all, in my opinion (i consider) , it is necessary for you to learn the lauguage well to follow lessons. Despite the problems of lauguage, you must adjust to the culture of china. you can make some chinese friends to help you with this. at the same time, what you can also do is that you should read some books, and understand chinese culture.

i hope my suggestion can help you to some extent, and wish you all the best in the life and process in our school.

仅是根据我的理解 ，按照您的意思写的，，，不过考研的话，分数倒是高不了（有点像高一水平）。

多背诵写作常用句型，自己写的时候，即使话题不一样，很多句型都是可以套用上的，换换其中几个单词就是了下面我搜集的资料送给你，希望对你的写作提高有所帮助！ 高考作文经典句型100句1. It is important for everyone to learn English well in our rapidly developing world. 在这个迅速发展的世界里，对每个人来说，学好英语是非常重要的。

[额外成就感] 同样句型包括：It is important/(necessary, difficult, convenient, possible)for *** . to do sth.例句：It is necessary to shake hands when you first meet someone.与第一次见面的人握手是非常必要的。2. The harder you work at it, the more progress you will make. 你工作越努力，你取得的进步就越大。

[额外成就感]①The+比较级。， the+比较级。

②比较级+and+比较级（The world is getting *** aller and *** aller.）3. If everyone makes a contribution to protecting the environment, the world will bee much more beautiful.如果每个人都为保护环境做出贡献，世界会变得更加美好。[额外成就感] 类似的句型还有：If necessary…， they can…4. The best way to remember new words is to practice them everyday. 记忆新单词最好的方法是每天操练这些单词。

5. The atmosphere in my family is fantastic 我的家庭气氛温馨和睦。 6. The reason why people choose to live in the city is that the life is more convenient and colorful.人们为什么选择生活在城市的原因是因为城市的生活更方便、更多彩。

7. I had a great first impression of American people. 我对美国人民有了很好的第一印象。 8. We have lots of confidence in our ability to solve any problem. 我们对自己解决问题的能力有足够的信心。

9. With the rapid development of modern technology, the Inter has bee a necessary part of our daily life and work.随着现代科技的迅速发展，互联网已经成为生活和工作中必不可少的一部分。10. You should read as many books as you possibly can. 大家应该尽可能的多读书。

11. China is being more and more prosperous because of the reform and “opening up” policy. 由于实施了改革开放政策，中国变得更加繁荣了。12. We all need clean air to breathe; we all need clean water to drink; we all need green places to enjoy. 我们都需要呼吸清新的空气，我们都需要饮用洁净的水，我们都需要绿地来享受。

13. Let's work together to make our world a better place.让我们一起努力把世界变得更加美好。14. We should make full use of our time to do useful and productive things.我们应该充分利用好时间去做有用的、富有成效的事。

15. We should get into the good habit of using our time wisely. 我们应该养成一个好习惯，明智地利用时间。16. What I really want to know is whether he will go abroad next month？我的确想知道的是，他是否会在下个月出国。

17. Television is harmful to developing minds. 电视不利于开发心智。 18. Children usually have far more potential than their parents had realized孩子们都有很大的潜能，而父母却没有意识到这一点。

19. In the past 10 years, great changes have taken place in our school.在过去的10年里，我们学校发生了巨大的变化。20. People who spend more time with their families are usually healthier and happier. 那些花更多时间和家人在一起的人通常会更健康更幸福。

21. The job was hard, which made me so tired that I almost quit half way.这份工作太辛苦，差点使我半途而废。[额外成就感]①直接使用：so… that…例句：The job was so tired, boring and seemed endless that I almost quit half way. 这份工作太累、太无聊，而且没完没了，这使我差点半途而废。

高级句型挑战：The job was hard, boring and seemed endless, which made me so tired that I almost quit half way. 这份工作太辛苦、太无聊，而且没完没了，这使我非常累，差点半途而废。②能够增加句子层次的高级连词还有：（Not only …but also…）、（Because…）、（because of…）、（As long as…）、（so long as…）22. The Red Star Television Factory, which produces TV sets of quality, was set up in the 1980's.生产高品质电视的红星电视机厂，始建于1980年。

23. The E-reading room, where we can send e-mails to all parts of the world, is open to both teachers and students.我们可以向世界每个地方发电子邮件的电子阅览室，对老师和同学都同样开放。24. I feel I will be fit for the job needed in your pany.我感觉我会是你们公司所需要的人。

25. The number of workers and engineers has risen（更高级词汇：increased） to over 2000, and 80% of them are college graduates.工人和工程师的数量已超过了2000人，而且他们有80%都是大学学历。26. There is an increasing tendency that students own their mobile phones on campus.在校园内，学生拥有手机的趋势在不断增长。

27. Now in the rural areas, there are many children out of school. I think one of reasons is that their families are too poor to afford their 。

The Problems that I have Met in English Studying

learning English is not very have many problems in learning it.

First,spoken English is the most difficult problem for me. I was also afraid to speak in class,because I thought my clas *** ates might laugh at me.

Secondly,listening is another problem. English is our second language. it wasn't easy for me to understand the teacher when she talked

Thirdly, I usually make mistakes in grammar

Last but not least,I find to remember the words is a hard Chinese is different from so many words is really hard for us.

Though there are many problems in English learning. But I trust that I can do it well ,if I pay much attention to it.

As to experience of English learning, I'm afraid I don't have much more to say than what I have written in the article of Chinese version that I wrote the other thing that I often say to my friends is about time arrangement. In my opinion, time is like water in sponge, you never get any unless you squeeze it. Time is considered the most valuable thing by many who finally make the grade in life, and I hope I'll be able to join them. Some people, though, are willing to spend a few hours trying to get a ten or more yuan off the list price of a coat; they are also always ready to chitchat with each other till the end of time. Communication does play an important part in our life, huh. It takes time, though. Let's talk about the balance among four aspects of English study then. It's actually simple. After you've read for some time, you might get tired and feel bored. It's the time you stop reading and get up to have some listening prehension training. Repeat what they say and how they say when listening. Go somewhere with no people around if you find it weird to do so. By doing this you are practising your spoken English. After some time of such study, you'll be in the mood to write something, using what have learned over the days or weeks. Your writing skills improve continuously once you keep writing because others may reply to you after reading yours, and to be a responsive writer, you'll just have to follow and make the topic further discussed. With luck you are drawing attention from those whose English are better than yours and by exchanging ideas with this group you are beneficially influenced. On the other hand, though, the chance is the same that you might be adversely influenced by some lousily written replies with chatting style English high and low in the reply. Just be careful then. You are not far wrong when assuming I have to do my everyday errands; I wasn't born to the purple, anyway. You'll have to agree that when cleaning your house or doing some laundry, it's a good time to put on your earphone of the mp3 player and get some listening work to do. It's true that you can't spin and reel all at the same time, but in terms of getting some listening prehension it all is something that you'll lose before you know if you don't keep using it. It after all is not our mother tongue. English forums on Inter are a good place to use your English like no others. You not only get help and encouragement there, but you build up your interest and confidence as well, seeing how you are progressing. I am not trying to sugar the pill a bit because that's my true experience in my favorite English forum, Canuck's Comments. You might get your own extraordinarily inspiring experience, too, only if you study hard and then give it a 'm afraid I'd better stop here now or it'll bee another piece of lengthy my o cents worth, 2014-12-16。

（最多可选2个答案）对回答者的感谢：（选填项，40字以内） Our English Teacher-我们的英语老师Our English teacher is a man of medium build, always wearing a pair of gih-framed spectacles. He looks thin in his loose-fitting suit. Small as his eyes are,they are extremely bright. He looks old for his age, because his hair is all is enthusiastic and skillful in teaching his students. He has extensive knowledge. He not only teaches English but also tells us many things about history, geography and literature. His lectures are given in a vivid way. For example,when we take up a new lesson,he introduces the author first, including his biography, his works and main content of those works. In this way we can improve our listening ability quickly, and learn more than only the text teaching method means more work for us to do in the evenings. For each lecture, he asks several questions from the text for our homework. In order to answer those questions, we must first read the whole text at home. Sometimes it isn't enough to read the text only. We have to read other materials concerning those questions. This helps us develop learn a lot from our English teacher. We love him very muc。