这篇作文蛮好的，就是最后一小节怪怪的，可以稍微改一下，后面再加一小节就好多了。
关于作文润色有两个层面的事情要做： 一是要做到文从字顺。即符合作文的基本要求。可以用念文章的办法，即凭借自己的语感，你会发现有许多感觉不对劲的地方，往往这些地方是不通顺的，不符合语言规范的。这些地方你需要改动。（所以，平时要多念文章，培养自己正确的语感！） 二是要做到文采奕奕。这需要自己有一定的艺术想象能力。比如说，文章的底线要求是作文不要有错别字，用词准确，可是，在第二层次的作文润色里，用词就不只是准确的要求了，要生动、形象。修辞知识是做这个用的。你有必要掌握丰富的修辞方法与知识。 在语文新课标里，要求学生能运用语感与修辞知识修改文章，就是这个意思！ 祝你进步！
想给自己的论文可以嘛当然可以可以把自己写的更加丰满更加的有内容这样才能更加的出色
当然可以了，只要给自己的论文润色，只要找到好的词，当然可以给他使用了。
晕，你这已经是中文了呀！是翻译成英文吧？？？My major is internet engineering, which is a computer major with internet I mainly study internet design, implement, maintaining, also I learn the basic theory and method of computer I am so interested in computer networking that I want to continue studying in this That's why I apply for master study in your
My major is Internet Engineering, which is a Computer major with Internet I mainly specialize in Internet design, administration and maintenance etc while learning basic theories and methods of computer I have great interest in computer (network) and hope that I can pursue further study in this subject, which is the reason why I apply for the postgraduate course in your
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北京译顶科技对应的是优质润色，价格和别家普通润色价格一样，划算很多，你可以去他们网站看看
My major is Internet Engineering, which is a Computer major with Internet I mainly specialize in Internet design, administration and maintenance etc while learning basic theories and methods of computer I have great interest in computer (network) and hope that I can pursue further study in this subject, which is the reason why I apply for the postgraduate course in your
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在爱得旅途上迷失了自己你无疑伤了我的心在你离开的那刻，你带走了我的灵魂我能感觉到痛苦，伤悲，和死亡童话结束了我求你把我带回你的心中我愿意航行万里去找你回来你最后的话语在我的泪水中徘徊让我疯狂，带来更多的眼泪在我心深处，没有你，我迷失了我祈求我的爱让我回来，我不想我愚蠢的心再流血让我坚持下去，我都不能自己站起来了我感觉难受，疲倦这种无尽的痛苦我想我们能够再从头再来，在一起这个是我自己翻译的 你稍加润色就可以了！
留学生论文润色是论文写作中非常重要的一部分，前期的规划以及写作技巧是重要的，但是一篇高分的论文离不开不断的写作和润色修改，但是很多同学同时存在一个问题，自己写作后就形成了固定思维，无论是大的框架上还是小的细节上，都很难把握论文的润色修改。论文的问题1、逻辑思路混乱一个很重大的原因是因为审题不清，没有找到通常所说的"题眼"，导致一步错，步步错，一路下来，整篇文章的逻辑与题目不匹配，导致接下来的写作没有准确地抓住中心，甚至完全写偏题。 2、框架结构 可以说框架结构没有对错之分，只有是否适合。有些框架结构只覆盖了问题的前半部分，忽视了后半部分，以至于没有完整回答essay的问题。3、论述内容方面很多学生普遍的一个问题就是观点缺乏evidence或者不能体现critical analysis。建议argument后面，要有references内容支撑，再在后面加上自己的analysis;另一个就是，遇到那种要二选一的论题，argument counterargument refutation这种写法可以集中体现学生的critical thinking ability。4、语言 语句通顺，措辞准确又具备学术性，没有任何文法和句法错误，让老师赏心悦目，理所当然会给老师留下好的印象。论文润色怎么做？1、语法优化其实语法优化在英文论文润色上面显示出重要性的比例是非常大的，其中涉及到词语的选择。好比说同样一句话，怎么说出较高的文学素养。2、短语优化其实如果你将短语优化放在语法优化里面也是可以的，但是将其特意拿出来说，作为一个单独的润色特点而言，也是可以的。在英文论文里面，增加必要性的幽默化的词语是非常重要的。3、跳出自身局限如果是一个专业性较强的人，如何利用好语法，跳出自身的局限，得到一个更好的表达方式，这个就需要运用到论文润色的小技巧。4、赋予文章生动形象对于论文而言，专业技术的阐述和表达是非常关键的。但是这个过程中，文章的整体表达方式是不是足够的形象生动，这个也是非常关键的。
论文润色简单的来说就是在你的论文的基础上适当的修改试论文看起来更加有声有色举个例子比如写了一篇感人的论文可能有些词用的不恰当那么就可以经过适当的修改以达到感人肺腑产生共鸣的效果这就是论文润色还有什么不明白的可以去中国鸣网看看。
您好，这篇文章的性质是学术性非学术性的呢？两者的语言润色有一定的差距，但大抵上行文的流畅、逻辑的通顺、标点的使用、用词的合宜性以及与题旨间的契合度都是重点。如果是自己想要进行润色你需要大量阅读英语材料去了解老外的惯用语，我们在学校所学的英文行文跟正统的英文文法有些许落差，所以把自己浸渍在英语环境中，以英语思考英语是关键因素，前提当然是要有基础的英文能力以及一定的单字量。如果是找别人润色，你要了解这篇文章的目的，是做为演讲报告还是到杂志期刊去发表的等级？找英语母语又是你相关领域的专家，市面上的英语润色机构像英论阁、意德辑、editspring等等都可以。如果不是要考虑高影响因子期刊，找有相关经验的研究生也还凑合。
英辑是为非英语国家科研工作者提供英文学术文章翻译、文章润色、文章指导与文章修改服务和各类学术科研服务的专业科研服务品牌。
SToday, we are gathered here, with excellent results obtained in the examination exemption preferential share of the province's most advanced superior teaching resources, but lost behind seemingly comfortable life, a huge competition and frustration caused also once lead us Are you waking up in the morning, in front of unknown prospect would fearful? Are you in a crowded classroom, weird smells lift the red pen to fill a vacant tract problems? Are you in the dusk of the moment, only watched the mountains of the job as a scourge can not parry? Have you ever, facing the plummeting test scores and an increasing rankings and deep remorse? You said you were a leader in the school, the students look up the peak, and now you are standing in the endless plateau, drowned You say you have not tasted the taste of defeat, and now you are buried in the undulating crowd, no dazzling score, no superior ability to ingratiate themselves with few or no TAnd now I'm the same as an ordinary Zhisheng Ban's one that I hope to encourage everyone in this speech, but also encouraged my own failure to continue groping in the darkness I praised without sounding "Failure is the mother of success," failure is a cause of pain and pleasure in the process, because the process is a tired fall But the pain today, maybe tomorrow's brilliant for you paved a new Famous French science fiction writer Jules Verne, a fifteen Press contributor repeated failures, will be accepted until the sixteenth; American writer Jack London thwarted at every turn, so he had to buckle down to hard labor; famous Danish fairy tale Anderson family, because his son was born shoemaker was attacked, "do not understand the " And after many years of testing and screening millions of people, who can deny that, "Haideliangmoli," "Tales of the North" or "The Little Mermaid"? Failure can only defeat the weak morale, but not strong polished edges, even if you were to fail at this moment suffering, black and blue in the fierce competition, brutal panning in all of this, it can not hinder the pace of progress of a monk I would like to share with you the "Harry Potter" author JK Rowling's series of novels, stories, she graduated from college in just seven years after the time she reached the epic failure of an unprecedented scale: short-lived marriage Lightning camel rupture, she became a tough unemployed single mother, in addition to the tramp, she became one of the poorest people in contemporary Britain, however, is such that she had nothing, with a rich imagination, excellence and dedication text beliefs, breaking the plight of In a speech at Harvard University in 2008, she told all graduates receive wisdom from setbacks, be strong, which means you survive more than ever have the We should feel lucky that our students are also sitting in a classroom when the smell of sweat smell tense prepare, we have upgraded to a new piece in this learning journey, even though this road is full of catch-me, full of bitter defeat, we should also be out of the confusion, confidence, growth in the long road of FIn this time, I appeal to every student here, face failure, face setbacks, thanks to our experienced ups and downs, we also wish to depict beautiful blueprint high school life together
Love in the shining summer Ladies and Gentlemen! We are glad to be here, giving a speech about love in the shining I bet that when you see the tittle at the first sight, it's easy to regard the love as valentines' and you will begin the imagination for sweet expectations of the Actually that is only one kind of What I want to say is the other three kinds of love-to parents, to friends and also to In daily life, we ought to pay more attention to different love and try to spread it to everyone around If you can do as I suggested, your life will certainly be different this Firstly, love to parents seems to be We have found that many of us have generation gaps with And as a result with depression, usually we neglect their loneliness inside the As children in China, we seldom express our love to them, and maybe feel artificial and shy to express our Why don’t you change yourself in this shining summer? Just a phone call or a long letter is Try to spare more time with them for communication and Moreover, say"I love you"more often and directly to I’m sure when they get the love sign from you, they will smile with Secondly, love to your friends makes your life as sweet as When we meet psychological problems, most of us keep them in mind, not willingly to tell our But we often turn to our good friends to share our happiness and Being with friends is just like looking into the It reflects what kind of person you Whenever we smile or cry, they support us and will never leave us But have you ever said "thank you"? Have you ever express your love to them? Of course So why don’t you change yourself in this shining summer? Love your friends, respect your friends and accept their If you do as I suggested, you will surely be much happier than Last but not least, even strangers need With the development of our society, most of people become more and more We don't want to get any trouble by helping others or even talking with But who can help us if we meet some emergent problem, if everyone only care about himself? Absolutely Then, why not change yourself in this shining summer? Let's concern for others if they need Don't be stingy to give strangers You will certainly get reward sooner or later if you keep ready to help Mo-tse, a famous ancient scholar, advocated us to have "big love" In his opinion, we should fill the world with pure However, I still need to say, listen carefully to me, if you want to gain love from others, you have to love people around you When they give you their love in return for your love, such a reward will inspire you to love And if everyone behave like this, what a wonderful world it will be!Ladies and gentlemen，please close your eyes to feel love, it's in the air and it's That's all, thank you for 我帮你修改了，你的用语当中有许多中国式的语言，所以我帮你改掉，尽量不要显得太洋泾浜。 这么辛苦，强烈要求加分。呵呵再次作了修改，只能这样了。