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Love in the shining summer Ladies and Gentlemen! We are glad to be here, giving a speech about love in the shining I bet that when you see the tittle at the first sight, it's easy to regard the love as valentines' and you will begin the imagination for sweet expectations of the Actually that is only one kind of What I want to say is the other three kinds of love-to parents, to friends and also to In daily life, we ought to pay more attention to different love and try to spread it to everyone around If you can do as I suggested, your life will certainly be different this Firstly, love to parents seems to be We have found that many of us have generation gaps with And as a result with depression, usually we neglect their loneliness inside the As children in China, we seldom express our love to them, and maybe feel artificial and shy to express our Why don’t you change yourself in this shining summer? Just a phone call or a long letter is Try to spare more time with them for communication and Moreover, say"I love you"more often and directly to I’m sure when they get the love sign from you, they will smile with Secondly, love to your friends makes your life as sweet as When we meet psychological problems, most of us keep them in mind, not willingly to tell our But we often turn to our good friends to share our happiness and Being with friends is just like looking into the It reflects what kind of person you Whenever we smile or cry, they support us and will never leave us But have you ever said "thank you"? Have you ever express your love to them? Of course So why don’t you change yourself in this shining summer? Love your friends, respect your friends and accept their If you do as I suggested, you will surely be much happier than Last but not least, even strangers need With the development of our society, most of people become more and more We don't want to get any trouble by helping others or even talking with But who can help us if we meet some emergent problem, if everyone only care about himself? Absolutely Then, why not change yourself in this shining summer? Let's concern for others if they need Don't be stingy to give strangers You will certainly get reward sooner or later if you keep ready to help Mo-tse, a famous ancient scholar, advocated us to have "big love" In his opinion, we should fill the world with pure However, I still need to say, listen carefully to me, if you want to gain love from others, you have to love people around you When they give you their love in return for your love, such a reward will inspire you to love And if everyone behave like this, what a wonderful world it will be!Ladies and gentlemen,please close your eyes to feel love, it's in the air and it's That's all, thank you for 我帮你修改了,你的用语当中有许多中国式的语言,所以我帮你改掉,尽量不要显得太洋泾浜。 这么辛苦,强烈要求加分。呵呵再次作了修改,只能这样了。
SToday, we are gathered here, with excellent results obtained in the examination
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SToday, we are gathered here, with excellent results obtained in the examination
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